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    Chapter 30

    Jason is really awful, egocentric, selfish, ugly person. Although I'm not a fan of the way Aiden handled the revenge (using sex as revenge tool could hurt Aiden too), Jason deserved even worse. Jason is so manipulative, giving Aiden cold/hot treatment all the time. It is his ego who is broken, not heart, so, it would be nice that in Book 2, Jasson really get what deserves, broken heart and left by everyone. Maybe some revelation regarding Ryan from the hospital and his role in kidnapping and raping would be interesting to explore in Book 2. I'm glad Aiden and Xavier are happy together, they both deserved it. Very nice story @Remijay you have made some possibilities for Book 2. Good luck.
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    Chapter 3

    The situation is slowly heating until it boils! 🙂 I like versatility in MM relationship, hope these guys can reach it.
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    Chapter 23

    Jeff, Maggie’s brother, is a senior. He’s not very popular, and he rarely talks to anyone. Sometimes I wonder if he’s being treated the same way at home as I am. New member of a gay gang?! 😜
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    Chapter 23

    Yes, it was dance he likes as I remember?! 🤔
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    Back Home

    So, meeting family is ahead... It is going to be interesting! 🙂
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    Chapter 3

    First on page 5!
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    Chapter 3

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    Chapter 23

    Is the mother punishing Seth for this actually?! Complete lunacy... Oxygen starvation at birth could make Stacy slow learner, that could explain her bad grades, but it is not excuse for her behavior. It is totally mother's fault for spoiling her. I don't know what might repair this damaged family, only escape for Seth might be at his father's home.
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    Chapter 23

    Well, I didn't expect this revelation about Seth's family. Whatever might be the reason, there is no excuse to neglect your own child! Situation in school went better than expected. Hope Blake will heal and leave his awfull parents finally! 🤞
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    Chapter 3

    Guys, I think that we are giving to much meaning to Caleb's escape. If we consider his condition, of course he's shitting in his pants and probably thinking - a mate, a fucking mate, it's all I need now!!! Of course, he's not aware that's all he actually needs!
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    Chapter 3

    We are still waiting that to happen in your story! 😁 Anyway, all possibilities are welcome and highly appreciated! 🙂
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    Chapter 3

    And put it in ASA! 🤣
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    Chapter 3

    Of course he ran away, he must have been terrified! Now, only question is where Asa will find him, maybe in stall?! 🤔
  14. Well, that was a nightmare... Rather bizarre start of the chapter although, I know that medical staff, police officers, firemen...use dark humor to survive some very difficult psychological crises. As for the Jeremy, if you wanted to kill him, you should have made us love him more, and, than hate you for killing him! 😜
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    Chapter 2

    I start to believe that story title has connection with colonoscopy discussed weeks ago at @Mrsgnomie story! 😂
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    Chapter 2

    And you guys say I could write a story?!? You gave so many theories that I'm not sure what original plot was any more!!!
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    Weekend Leave

    I was wondering from the start will you pass the incest frontier and I'm glad you didn't. You are dancing nicely around the controversial topic, just teasing us, but doesn't jump into it. Otherwise, this was nice vacation, Brian is learning lot about himself and sexuality...
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    Chapter 2

    Indeed she is!
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    Chapter 2

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    Chapter 2

    Based on how little hints you gave us, we have to imagine something!
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    Chapter 2

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    Chapter 2

    Wednesday, I think... 🤔
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    Chapter 2

    Chris is toliking to me!!!
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    Chapter 2

    Fourth story Total Eclipse of the Heart!
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