Cane23
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oh, thanx...I missed it somehow. Yep, a good one! 🙂
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Now that you mentioned, are those pictures of hybrids or Logan and Cooper? Did @kbois say something?
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I'm surrounded by realistic people, don't need them in literature! 😜 But, don't worry, @kbois didn't get ovations for Caleb nither! 😂
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You sure? You left disagreement with Greg Brady Kyan, I've put some British actor and @spyke had very VERY good picture...but I couldn't find your Kyan! Maybe I'm ageing...
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I got used to it that those people are some kind of exhibitionist, so, their aproach to nudity is rather open minded. Nevertheless I agree it's all new to Toby, and it's ok to ask him before joining in nudism with grandparents.
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I'd really, really like to see your choice! You usually pick god ones!
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Yep, go and check ripped Kyan I've put on @Mrsgnomie story!
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Jeremy's Story and Derek Comes Clean
Cane23 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Jeremy's Story and Derek Comes Clean
So, it has been amnesia. Interesting plot, interesting new characters. You've really made me curious about direction you are going to take from here... One small suggestion. Go deeper into the characters, describe their emotions, weakness, inner struggles... Let us see in their eyes and in their body language what's happening in them. Use all the writer's tools to make them realistic, to make us connect with them. Shake us a little bit, make us suffer, love and cheers with your characters! 🙂- 16 comments
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You're improving so much. With every new you are getting better and better! Your best story so far, good work!
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I have one too, in my daughter's room! 🙂 This was great bonding. Toby is getting family he deserves. Nice chapter, it's all about family ties!
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In vino veritas! 😂 At least I have put pictures at right places (stories)! This table tennis between @Mrsgnomie and @kbois story is fun but exhausting! We must have been some shifters to follow them simultaneously... 😂
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Sorry, too much information in one comment! 😂 Scott Eastwood is Caleb. I have put Kyan on Dichotomy page!
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Today I have found Kyan's photo. Well, because I said that I have imagined Caleb differently, here it is, more like Scott Eastwood... Still haven't find Asa... 🙂
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I have found Kyan this morning! As soon as I saw the photo I recognized him! 🙂 If @Mrsgnomiesend him to gym a little bit, that's it!
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Don't envy me too much because I have red a lot. I think I left revies for When Opportunity Knocks . Regarding those I haven't red already - I've made a public promisse to @Mrsgnomie to read JL when time alows! 🙂 I've been disapointed by many shifters stories that's why I kept @kbois stories on hold. But when I started reading...magic occured! 🙂
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@kboisgot some new fans too! 😜 I don't know is it the lucky star or good planets in natal chart that, at the same time @Mrsgnomie started submitting once per week and I gave a chance to Spirit Wolves... and finished Shadow Effect a few days before this story started!
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Well, at least we would have known the end to that story! 😜
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Well, comparing to @Mrsgnomie you did but, comparing to your previous stories, I have to agree with @raven1
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But you are participating in a notification drowning mission against your pack! OMG, Caleb, is that you?! 😱
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The most expensive one in the store!
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Btw, good job guys!!! Let's drown those Americans with notifications while they're sleeping, to give them back!!!
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