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Is it the Caleb everybody is talking about at @Mrsgnomienew story?! THE Caleb?! Did I really find out who the Caleb is?! OMG OMG OMG...I'm out of the dark here!!!

Amazing love and friendship story, fulfilled with mystery, crime, unexpected twists, dark family history, witty humor and some wonderful dogs! 🙂 Jett, police officer in K-9 unite, specialized in chasing down a suspect with the help of his dog Bruce, meets Kyle, veterinarian and emotions sparkle. But dark events from the past threaten, not only their happiness but their lives as well. What is the role of Jett’s neighbor Kim, are the biological parents the real one or the real one parents are those who raised and supported us, can the traumas and bruises from youth be overcome, can the ghosts from the past be defeated and does love always wins…those are some of the questions you will get answers reading this story. @kbois is fantastic author. She keeps you occupied and focused on the story so much that you cannot stop reading till the end.

This is one of the most exciting stories I have red. Using elements of paranormal, mystery, romance and good humor, @Laura S. Fox imagination makes miracles. Switching bodies has been used to reveal real, authentic feelings. In a roller-coaster ride, with misunderstandings, funny turnovers, revelations...characters discover themselves and discover the true about friendship and love.

Beautiful story settled in picturesque landscape with wonderful Victorian mansions, adapted watermill…place like a fairytale kingdom you would like to visit. This scenery is perfect for a love story. Mark, closeted local constructor specialized in adapting old houses; and Sawyer, journalist form the town, open with his sexuality. With elements of mystery, the story evolving around love, family and neighborhood acceptance. Mark, with selfish parents travelling around the world, raised by an aunt and Sawyer, estranged from his brother, both discovers who their real family and support are. Above all, this story shows that small place and ordinary people might be more acceptable and supporting than some around the globe travelers, fighting for the world peace but unable to bring love and support for their own child.

Amazing, skillfully written story. Two lifelong friends Greg and Nate are living together seemingly normal every day, early thirties men, life. But appearance of a young neighbor Kyle, his teen age, free spirit and attractiveness, wakes up some painful memories in Greg. As story goes on, in flashbacks, we can see how two boys, Greg and Nate, innocent and happy, grew up together, strengthening their relationship, discovering sexuality and feelings. What they didn’t know is that somebody is watching. Nate’s father, an evil man, pedophile, predator waiting to take his prey. Discovering chapter by chapter in flashbacks, we can see his evil plot to take Greg. One of the most terrifying characters ever written on GA. He is not some drunkard or punk, oh no, he is pure evil disguised in distinguished doctor, with knowledge of medicine and social connections which helps him to cover his crimes. In the present, Greg and Nate are still suffering from the bruises of the past. Greg, fighting the psychological trauma and painful memories of physical pain; and Nate, fighting the guilt, enormous, terrifying guilt. Above all, there is love but, can love survive ghosts of the past? You will find out after reading this wonderful story I highly recommend.

Tnanx, I was reading back to see is it the chapter with sheets change but it was Hawaii trip. 🙂

Look at her, first on pg 7 and doesn't brag!😂 Now, seriously, why Part One and Part Two?! What did I miss?

Opposite attracts might be the shortest explanation of the story. Main characters, NFL quarterback Andrew and journalist Aubrey share animosity and obvious dislike. But, under the surface, are they really what they seemed to be...or, there is something more? Is Andrew only reckless and arrogant lover boy and collector of twink trophies, or there is a gentle, generous soul beneath in desperate need for true love? Is Aubrey principle, strong willed person, or there are some insecurities and blockades beneath? Is there HEA for these two guys, or differences are too big to overcome? Read the story, enjoy its beautiful development and witty humor and find out!

You are right about that one. It was more my general feeling...like, other stories were as watching tv series, this one is more like theatre. I don't know...maybe because it's the first @Mrsgnomie storie I didn't binge! 🤔

I hope you could add some dynamic to the story too. Development of the characters and their relationship building is exceptional but, this is the slowest story you have written yet. Rather “chamber” story too, like everything is happening in one house (even Hawaii part). It is still unknown to me why have you separated this story in two (or maybe more parts). I haven’t seen any crucial story moment to make a brake, so I was confused. Little acceleration would be nice, not some pompous, exhausting drama because it is not your style. Rather, when you finish putting them out of closet, move them out of the house a little bit too, they are suffocating! 🙂 Oh, @Mrsgnomie, you will hate me now, and Krew are going to crucify me!

Keep reading! 🙂 She is certainly the character that arouses the most ambivalent feelings in the reader, and she is not even alive!

Give Max a chance, unlike Kyan, he is very mature and self-confidant. I think Kyan is the one who will feel like shit becoming aware that Max is still supportive no matter what.

I don't think that he will "suffer tremendously"! Why would he?! Ok, he might be disapointed because of Kyan not being honest but, suffering?!? It is not that he was in love in Perry since forever (actually, beside some atraction I didn't get idea that he has so strong feelings) and he is not Kyan's life long friend!

There's been some discussion regarding Andy's education and carrier. We know now that @Parker Owens sent him to agriculture engineering as he was so good with engines, machines and farming. Somebody suggested writing, somebody else suggested social service but, I was really astonished with his legal knowledge and sense for law. Persistence, logic and general understanding of topic would make him a great lawyer. So many talents...

He was so young and inexperienced and, although she couldn't know for shure, she might be afraid that, as a young, courios boy, he might like to explore...and than, who knows. Maybe that was the reason she kept sex so rigid - what if he likes it too much?!

I can see your point here. Well, as we all know The road to hell is paved with good intentions. Perry and his family are playing this charade so long in order to keep Kyan happy and unharmed. And now, he is not happy, and he is harmed!

Dear @Mrsgnomie it is my deapest hope that you will resolve this issue with Dayna on Monday so she can rest in peace, surviviors can live in peace and readers can breath in peace!

Yes, if she was alive and healthy, she would have been furious! I believe Trudi was referring to that. But she is dead and I'm speaking about her last words on her deathbed. I'm sure that in such situation, she would be thinking what the best for her children is. I'm sure that she would rather approve her brother then some unknown stepmother.

Excellent points here! You made me think I was too harsh to Kyan! I’ve expected that complete transformation of his personality has already happened, when it just started! This is not a lover or in-laws time to fix this situation. This is the moment for someone outside, for a real friend – this is a Max’s time! So, it’s time for Max to be himself again – friend, support and out of closet guide (unless @Mrsgnomie pass him through some angry phase in order to make some more drama…but I really think he is urgently needed as friend now) …and…to ask some questions.🙂 In a way, this relationship reminds me on friendship between Penn and Jason (without sex 😜). At first, as many, I thought it was inappropriate to take him as best men at the wedding, but after some thinking, I realized Jason was the only person Penn found and befriended himself, out of circle and pressure from his brothers. It’s the same with Max, he is the first person isolated Kyan found and befriended himself, without support of Perry or in-laws. Truly important friendship in my opinion.

Is she? I mean…we know she was jealous and possessive, but honestly speaking, do we all think that, if she was given a chance to speak on her deathbed, knowing that she is dying, wouldn’t she actually give a blessing to Perry and Kyan?! There is a shadow called Dayna but, I didn’t get a feeling that she was so evil that she is threatening even from a grave. At least, it's not what @Mrsgnomie wrote about her:

I know, but I found myself rooting for Kyan's independence which is maybe not the issue at all. There is no doubt that parenting is serious job and if that is all what Kyan wants - being good dad and good husband, then its ok, shouldn't be worried about what society thinks or accept. I was wrong to put my own ambitions into his head. Yes, I would like to see Kyan growing in all parts of the life, but, if this story focuses on his sexual awakening and finding new love, then its ok, I will enjoy reading it anyway.

Maybe you are right. I forget sometimes that this is not my story and my predictions or expectations for characters migst be completely oposite to the directon where author goes! Sorry!

Am I the first on page 3?!?

Understand your point...you know Kyan is my favorite but, there is lot of overthinking here. He needs to find a job! A real, out of house, job, so he could put his energy and his mind on something else. And I know that he is great parent but now he needs a healthy mind and good distress out of everyday routine in order to stay sane!

Sorry, I'm just pissed about this... foundation my ass!!! His foundation has been shaken when his wife died and left him with, how many children I don't know any more... I mean, this is so ridiculous, but ok, I'll wait resolution...