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I love how fun, adventurous, witty, and eventually hot, this chapter is… only for it to end with a touch of bittersweetness and melancholy.

My first thought was: how do you choose between the two when they’re both part of you? Then it clicked - you meant the one you love, not which one you love. For a moment there I thought we were ranking them!

When grief is turned into something beautiful through art, that same art has the power to heal. Truly beautiful @Mikiesboy.

I think the most important thing is for Martin to reunite with his children. Natasha might use them for blackmail.

Your characters are so likable, even when doing naughty things! This story is already such fun! 😁

I liked that too. Terry, being a real and good father, even though he isn’t Martin’s biological father, deserves to be rewarded by Martin keeping his surname.

Did they really discuss pubes and ball shaving during breakfast?!? 😂 Well, what can I say - bon appétit! 🤣

I hadn’t expected the story to end here, as it seemed to me that these guys still had more to say. I suppose there’s going to be a sequel to wrap up their story. Anyway, beneath the racial issues and stereotypes, we see two young men struggling with deep insecurities and low self-esteem—especially regarding their bodies. Unfortunately, Ryan chooses to deal with his insecurities by humiliating Jamal in front of his “friends” (and there is so much to say about so-called friends…). Only at the end, when Jamal leaves, does Ryan seem to understand that “Jamal didn’t need my love. He needed my respect.” And, ultimately, that “Love without trust is just noise.”

Well... it’s better not to comment on “that kind of thing” in the Balkans… It’s not a coincidence I called it the “black hole in Europe.” Yea, yea...only showers with Beau!

I must have been blinded by clichés… hence my positive reaction to this development. Though I wouldn’t mind seeing a friendly threesome occasionally… 😉😁

Very interesting development in the story. We were led to believe that Martin and Simon were going to become an item. Instead, Simon and Martin’s cousin Rick have become boyfriends. Whether this relationship will last, especially as a long-distance one, remains to be seen. These two could also be a source of support for Martin. He’s already overwhelmed by his new family and inheritance, so a reexamination of his sexuality might simply be too much for him at the moment. Great story so far - I’m really curious to see how it all unfolds!

I've just seen the short film - A Friend of Dorothy, that was nominated for an Academy Award. I hadn’t watched it before, but it was worth every second of my time. It’s beautiful - I hope you enjoy it as much as I did!

“This is our life. Every day. We’re lucky. We’re so, so lucky.” @Boy Mercury X's short stories never stop amazing me, and A Charmed Life is no exception. As the title suggests, it holds an entire lifetime within a few pages - and what a life it is. Not dramatic in a grand, sensational way, but quietly, deeply meaningful. @Boy Mercury X has a gift for painting extraordinary characters who are not extraordinary in the exceptional sense. They’re ordinary people, like you and me...with flaws, missteps, successes, losses, and all the small imperfections that make a life real. Their partnership feels authentic, lived-in, and tender without being idealized. That’s what makes the story so beautiful. In telling Jon and Rob’s story, @Boy Mercury X reminds us that an ordinary life, shared and cherished, is its own kind of miracle.

I can totally imagine Natasha being like: “Oh Martin… you’ve always been the love of my life. Let’s give us another chance… our love deserves it.” And then... “What?! You think this is about money? How could you possibly think so low of me?”

Honestly, after reading the summary, I initially decided not to continue with the story - I didn’t think my nerves were ready for that level of drama. And yet, curiosity got the better of me. I found myself sneaking peeks at a few chapters here and there, feeling more like a voyeur than a proper reader. But this chapter… just… wow. The poetic way you write intimate scenes is simply breathtaking. The lovemaking felt less like a physical act and more like a beautifully choreographed performance - it reminded me of ice skating pairs gliding across the rink (perhaps I’m still under the spell of the recently finished Olympics). There was such elegance and passion in it -intense, yes, but also refined and tasteful. The movements read like a melody rather than something purely physical. Simply beautiful. Cartography Of Skin...or, maybe - Choreography of Skin!

I’m not sure, but something tells me the “glitter of hope” might be very useful at some point!

Maybe Manikato would rather be a queen?

Living with his lover in “Discorama”?!?!?!? Why would he want to trudge off to war or bother with a crown when he’s clearly just out there living the time of his life? 😂

Interesting chapter - we’ve gotten some revelations about Luther and Prince Rae’s past, and there are hints about the future too, especially with the line “two princes, no king.”

I thought it might be a child he didn't know about! Hm, mistery... 🤔

I love the intriguing start - it immediately captured my attention! Really looking forward to this journey!

Interesting question... It feels like choosing between two curses - both tempting, beautiful, and seductive, yet undeniably dangerous. It’s like selling your soul to the devil; whatever you gain, the price is simply too high. By portraying them exactly as they are, @LJCC has succeeded in making me not envy those characters at all.

This chapter was deeply emotional and truly heartbreaking. It revealed that Klebber is far more than just a handsome face or a witty, overdramatic personality - he’s a true survivor, shaped by everything he’s endured.

I’m sure @Summerabbacat has a full arsenal of medieval torture devices in mind for the traitor.

So the real drama begins! Did the COVID lockdown include the beaches too? Are they really going to be stuck in the apartment the whole time?! 😱