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If I remember correctly from Wolf in the City, the mates gain the miraculous ability of anal self-moistening! That could be incredibly helpful for Jack when he's caught in a clinch with Alpha and Guardian.
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Though honestly, I wouldn’t be surprised if Brad played dumb again - his face saying a million things while he blurts out something like, ‘Oh Lyn, I knew you were a player! Who is she? Tell me!
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"It's not what you think!" 😜
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[Memory, Junior Year in High School] – Less Than Perfect
Cane23 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year in High School] – Less Than Perfect
Just a quick question before the new present-day chapter drops, guys - who do you think Lyn’s “daddy dearest” really was? A politician, a preacher... or someone else entirely? 🤔 And do you think Alexander knows the truth about Lyn's father? 👀 -
Of course, not - but still, it’s an interesting perception, that he’d even feel the need to ask for permission! 😉
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Chapter 22: Where Love still Lives!
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 22: Where Love still Lives!
No, you are not! And if you write book 2 just to bring Noah and Jace back...and kill Matteo - please don't! 🙏 -
Another first from our author. While complex, multi-dimensional characters have always been @CasualWanderer82's hallmark, capable of both good and bad, this feels like the first time we’re offered such a clear path to redemption for one of them. Looking back at the parallel I drew between Colt and society in my previous comment, it seems the author is giving humanity a second chance. 😉 Taking it a step further, Colt demonstrates a bravery no other character shows in this story (except Weston, if I recall correctly). He is the first to openly say, ‘I’m gay,’ making a statement as direct and declarative as one might in a courtroom, without hiding behind euphemisms like ‘love knows no limits’ or ‘hearts want what they want.’ This is a profoundly liberating confession. And Daisy acts as a magnificent ‘priest’ in this moment - she listens, comforts, does not judge, and fully accepts and supports him. She doesn’t promise an easy road... what Colt did cannot be erased. But Daisy raised her children to lend a hand to anyone who needs it… and they’ll accept their ‘prodigal son.’ I’m really intrigued by the reunion between Jackson, Cash, and Blake. @CasualWanderer82 writes incredible love triangles, and every resolution is an art in itself. Usually, not much of the triangle remains by the end, so this might be something different the author is exploring in this story too. Blake needs a safe harbor as well - a place to return to from his journeys, from the roads he travels - though perhaps his harbor isn’t with just his man, but with his men.
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[Memory, Junior Year in High School] – Less Than Perfect
Cane23 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year in High School] – Less Than Perfect
“Nothing. Can’t you even give a bro a helping hand, though, Mr. President?” The boy snickered at his own bad joke. They called him that behind his back and even to his face. He guarded his home realities fiercely, which meant that he had constructed a different reality for people around him to know, people of the same age. He carefully built a fantasy he preached like gospel involving an absent father who was neck-deep in many lucrative businesses and a demanding mother who expected nothing but the best from him A total stranger just used a nickname Lyn already knew too well - but the fact he threw it at him also means Lyn had already caught his attention! -
[Memory, Junior Year in High School] – Less Than Perfect
Cane23 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year in High School] – Less Than Perfect
'Your Highness’ was Brad’s invention for Alexander, so... why not Mr. President for Lyn (just to be clear, the boy in high school is not Brad). -
[Memory, Junior Year in High School] – Less Than Perfect
Cane23 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year in High School] – Less Than Perfect
Interesting theory, but I just can’t imagine Alexander ever saying ‘Thanks, bro.’ That line feels way more like Brad or one of the jock types. It actually hints that even back then; little Lyn might have had a soft spot for the ‘bad boy’ energy - that whole forbidden fruit allure. Of course, grown-up Lyn has learned to recognize the difference between boys playing at swagger and the presence of a real man...at least we hope so! -
[Memory, Junior Year in High School] – Less Than Perfect
Cane23 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year in High School] – Less Than Perfect
A president is chosen, not born. The position implies merit, effort, competition. For Lyn - these fits perfectly. He’s the boy who comes from nothing and has to construct himself into someone respectable. His entire identity rests on study, hard work, ambition. His “Mr. President” mask signals that respectability and authority must be earned and constantly defended. Lyn is always campaigning - for approval, for stability, for legitimacy. He feels his worth must be proven, or it can be revoked. Alexander - a prince, a highness, doesn’t need to be elected. He inherits position. Authority is assumed, unquestioned, natural. This reflects his aura of effortless superiority - wealth, background, beauty. Unlike Lyn, he doesn’t need to campaign. His charisma and intelligence make him untouchable. Alexander embodies inherited privilege - a kind of power that doesn’t need to be earned. But crucially, he chooses to work anyway (winning scholarships, excelling academically). This gives him a hybrid position - a prince who proves he can also win as if he were a commoner. “Mr. President” and “His Highness” therefore mirror two different anxieties about legitimacy - Lyn fears never being legitimate, Alexander fears being legitimate only by default. The overheard dialogue between Blanche and Arya plants the devastating seed - Lyn may be the illegitimate son of a powerful, moralizing public figure. Lyn’s reaction isn’t shame but fear - a brilliant nuance. He doesn’t feel dirty or guilty... he feels threatened. Men like his father wield real power, and Lyn grasps early on that survival requires strategy. He develops a defensive doctrine: Study hard - make money - self-sufficiency - safety and build thick skin - repress feelings - reduce vulnerability. This pragmatic, strategic thinking becomes the architecture of his adult personality. What begins as teenage coping calcifies into a lifelong worldview... control over feelings, ambition as armor, repression as survival. This final scene shows the moment Lyn learns to police his own desire in public, solidifying the defensive strategies seeded earlier in the flashback. It’s the hinge between innocent longing and lifelong repression. In the present-day story, this explains why his relationships with Brad and Alexander are so charged - every spark of desire carries within it both the thrill of that first crush and the shadow of danger that taught him to push it down. -
Chapter 22: Where Love still Lives!
Cane23 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 22: Where Love still Lives!
Beautiful ending - bittersweet, as others have noted. This is a story of love, infidelity, heartbreak, and obsession… but above all, it is a magnificent story of fatherhood. The love of a parent is the truest love, the one that conquers all, the only love that embodies sincere, meaningful sacrifice - a love for life itself. This story stands as a powerful testament to parenthood, and I salute you for it @vanalas! -
It's fascinating how @Laura S. Fox creates the illusion of a long, exhausting process of Lyn’s transformation and awakening, when in reality, it all unfolds over just a few days!
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A fantastic space saga that bursts with raw masculine energy. Packed with action, thrilling adventures aboard the spaceship, sexual dominance, but also deep friendship and love, this story grips your attention from the very first page to the last. When an intriguing and striking stranger comes aboard the Santa Claus space cargo ship, Security Chief Sergeant Liam Jacks is instantly captivated. But both men carry haunted pasts that refuse to let go. How will they face their demons, and can two tortured souls truly find their happy ending? Read this amazing story and discover for yourself.
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The opening scene builds tension by weaving Lyn’s private, dangerous attraction to Alexander with Luke’s very public eruption. What’s notable here is Lyn’s reaction... he not only plays along but indulges in the fantasy of kissing Alexander in front of everyone. His body responds (heat, lips, fantasy) before his mind does. This shows his defenses are slipping - Alexander’s provocations are hitting deeper than before. The following scene puts Lyn in the middle of three volatile forces (Luke, Brad, Alexander), each pressing on him in different, destabilizing ways (to quote @chris191070 - "It seems that everyone wants a bit of Lyn"). Luke's bitterness toward Lyn... “why do you have to be so perfect?”, suggests envy, but not necessarily of Lyn’s history with Brad. It’s more existential - Lyn represents adult competence, composure, and attraction all at once, everything Luke doesn’t have under control. The moment he invades Lyn’s personal space, hinting at calling him “daddy” and leaning in to sniff him, shows a provocative mixture of challenge, neediness, and maybe displaced desire. Luke tests boundaries, not necessarily out of attraction but out of a desperate need for recognition. Lyn continues to play the “responsible adult,” giving Luke unsolicited advice (cut the cord, find financing, chase your own thing). It’s paternal, almost patronizing, which Luke both mocks and leans into (“has anyone called you daddy yet?”). Lyn tries to solve problems logically, but he consistently misses the emotional undercurrents - why Luke lashes out, why his presence feels threatening. This scene forces Lyn to confront the consequences of being everyone’s “fixer” and “anchor.” Luke resents him, Brad exploits him, Alexander tempts him. All three want a piece of him, but in very different ways...and Lyn, for all his cleverness, still doesn’t see how little control he actually has. On the surface, Lyn defending Luke could look like his usual empathy, his tendency to be the “peacekeeper” and smooth over tensions. But the text strongly suggests something deeper - Lyn is seeing himself in Luke. Luke is younger, inexperienced, and struggling to assert his own identity under the shadow of more dominant personalities... just like Lyn once was with Brad. Lyn’s defense isn’t just kindness; it’s recognition of his own past vulnerabilities and the way he used to feel unseen or manipulated. Brad, as usual, doesn’t notice the inner struggles of the people around him. He sees Luke as either annoying or inconsequential. His lack of curiosity or empathy mirrors how he treated Lyn in the past, reinforcing the parallel. By standing up for Luke, Lyn is indirectly asserting himself against Brad’s old authority. It’s a subtle, almost subconscious, act of resistance - he’s protecting someone who reminds him of himself because he wants to see that struggle validated, which he never had with Brad. The exchange about the bracelet and the book is one of the most poignant moments so far. These objects act as tokens of intimacy and proof of remembrance. Alexander’s fear “that you might’ve thrown it away, to spite me, even in absentia” reveals deep insecurity masked by his icy exterior. For him, survival of the objects equals survival of their bond. Lyn’s honesty “I did miss you, fucker. Even as I continued to hate you” is both a confession and a paradox. It embodies how he processes Alexander - affection entwined with resentment; desire tangled with rivalry. Alexander, predictably, seizes on the “you didn’t forget me” as validation. What unsettles him is the realization that Lyn knows nothing about his past, especially the failed marriage that shaped him. For Alexander, that ignorance feels like erasure. Lyn had once been the closest person in his life, yet eight years later, he shows no trace of having carried Alexander’s story with him. That hurts more than rejection - it tells Alexander he was not remembered, not sought after, not valued enough to leave a mark. This is why he presses so hard with “Tell me everything you want to tell me. Come clean.” He’s desperate for proof that Lyn still knows him, that he mattered. Instead, he’s met with deflection, which only confirms his fear that Brad has remained alive in Lyn’s memory, while he himself was forgotten. Finally, Brad’s request to spend three hours alone with Lyn isn’t innocent - it’s a calculated move to reassert the control and power he once held over him. Despite being on the verge of marrying Bella, Brad still wants to tighten the old leash, testing if Lyn remains under his influence. Alexander’s warning frames this encounter as Lyn’s first true test. Up until now, Lyn has shown signs of change - sharper awareness, a growing resistance to Brad’s pull, and a willingness to open himself to Alexander’s presence. But this meeting will reveal whether that progress is real or fragile. If Lyn yields to Brad, he risks undoing everything - sliding back into regression, clinging to fruitless longing for a man about to bind himself to another. That choice would trap him in emotional stasis for years, just as before. The question is whether Lyn can finally pierce through Brad’s charm and recognize the manipulation beneath it. Can he resist nostalgia and old dependency, and instead step into a future where his worth isn’t defined by Brad’s attention? This is the hinge point - the moment that will decide whether Lyn remains stuck or truly begins to break free.
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“Do not give dogs what is holy, and do not throw your pearls before pigs, lest they trample them underfoot and turn to attack you" Matthew 7:6
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He was definitely married to women. We know this not only from subtle hints, but also from Alexander’s own confession that he had never been with a man before - and if there’s one thing we can be sure of, it’s that Alexander doesn’t lie. The combination of family expectations and his own “desperation” about Lyn might have pushed him into marriage. That alone shows he is, after all, only human, with a streak of self-destructiveness as well. Still, the brevity of that marriage suggests he came to terms with himself more quickly than many others might have. We’ve speculated often about what exactly happened on that fateful day at the end of college that tore them apart. It didn’t just end communication - it created such a deep wound that, even eight years later, all three of them deliberately avoid the subject.
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“Not by a long shot,” Alexander said promptly. “But I’m liking what I’m hearing. I was afraid, at one point, that you might’ve thrown it away, to spite me, even in absentia.” Lyn adjusted his position, swinging his legs off the edge of the bed. This conversation had nothing sexual in it, but he hugged Alexander anyway and pressed his face against his crotch. “I did miss you, fucker. Even as I continued to hate you.” Speaking of questions - what exactly did Alexander do that was so terrible eight years ago?!
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I’ve been frustrated by Lyn more than once in this story, but at this point I just wanted to yell - Mind your own business, you fool!
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Another wonderful story from @dkstories. An author best known for politics, sci-fi, and fantasy adventures, DK proves equally brilliant in the sports-romance genre. One fateful moment brings together Cal Grainger - a famous baseball star raised by deeply religious, bigoted parents - and Jake, the outgoing twin son of Japanese restaurant owners. What begins as an unlikely encounter grows into a powerful friendship and, eventually, a love that changes both of their lives forever.
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When Lucas, a young American lawyer, stumbles upon incriminating documents in his colleague’s office, fear of the consequences drives him to do what he has always done when faced with life’s challenges - run away. This time, far away, to another continent. Lost in the remote north of Sweden and caught in a brutal winter storm, Lucas is rescued by a local police officer, Joel. What begins as a search for shelter turns into something Lucas never expected to find - the love of his life.
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"The Dog He Fed (And The One He Starved)"
Cane23 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Dog He Fed (And The One He Starved)"
The love-making scene between Cash and Jackson stands in stark contrast to the kind of sex scenes @CasualWanderer82 usually writes. Instead of the raw, graphic, and shocking intensity - where every move jolts with both excitement and brutality...this moment unfolds through touch, breath, scent, and movement. It’s sensual, delicate, almost ethereal. Untouchable, and yet deeply real. As a kind of "counter-mirror," Blake watches from the window, voyeuristic but not in the same way as Cash. Cash is drawn to the horrors of violence and blood, compelled to witness (“the worst thing you think you are… so he doesn’t have to be it alone.”) Blake, by contrast, is transfixed by the sheer beauty of love made visible. What he sees doesn’t ignite anger or jealousy - it refines him. It makes him more human, even as it hurts. Instead of succumbing to rage, Blake “counted the ways a man can love and not own. Counted the doors he’d been given and the ones he’d slammed. Counted the miles he could drive in a day if he put the Saint in his pocket and didn’t look in the mirror.” Like Daisy before him, Blake sacrifices. He has learned the hard truth: the difference between love and obsession. Love means letting go. What a beautiful book this would be to analyze in Nick’s Bad Education class. -
"The Dog He Fed (And The One He Starved)"
Cane23 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Dog He Fed (And The One He Starved)"
Well, I can’t speak to Colton’s personal past - that’s something only the creator of the character can answer. But I can say what Colton represents - he embodies society itself. I almost said - “modern society,” but the sad truth is that humanity has always been voyeuristic about pain, suffering, and blood. In ancient Rome, crowds cheered as wild beasts tore Christians apart. In the Middle Ages, people flocked to watch public humiliations and burnings at the stake. Later came executions as entertainment, then the grotesque appeal of “freak shows.” Today we have reality TV, viral videos, and a culture where empathy is so thin that when tragedy strikes, many would rather film it on their phones than step in to help. That’s Colton. He washes his hands like Pilate, pretending innocence. But Blake shatters that pretense - he strips Colton of his self-justification. What he’s really saying is that inaction, dressed up as neutrality, is its own form of cruelty. By hiding behind the camera, Colton isn’t just a bystander - he’s complicit. Maybe even worse, because he knew better and still chose to watch. -
[Memory, March, Sophomore Year] – You Are My Friend
Cane23 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, March, Sophomore Year] – You Are My Friend
Brad has, at least on some level, noticed that Lyn cares a lot about Alexander. The “he always gets sad when you act up” line suggests Brad has picked up on Lyn’s moods and tied them to Alexander’s presence or absence. But Brad frames it as a joke (“like a puppy without a master”) because that’s his way of handling intimacy. He’s not cruel, but he doesn’t sit in emotional truth; he turns it into banter. Alexander is genuinely surprised and intrigued. His “He does?” is less mocking than it is a sharp moment of realization... he’s hearing from Brad what Lyn would never admit out loud. That’s why his gaze at Lyn afterward carries weight - he sees confirmation of something he might have suspected but enjoys having spelled out. For Alexander, it’s a gift... Brad’s joke exposes Lyn’s dependency in a way that’s both flattering and emotionally revealing. In the library, Lyn steps in to defend Alexander’s reputation against the seniors’ gossip. That’s him taking Alexander’s side, almost instinctively. Alexander rewards this by pulling him out of the room and showcasing him with a bit of protective exaggeration. But later, when Brad joins them, Lyn shifts roles. He defends Brad against Alexander’s superiority and snide comments (Michelin vs. hamburgers, “stop picking on Brad”). This is still Lyn’s instinct... to mediate, to rescue, but this time it means protecting Brad from Alexander. Alexander’s reaction - “Are you willing to defend just anyone?” is telling. He doesn’t like sharing Lyn’s loyalty. In his eyes, Lyn’s defense is something personal, almost intimate. So, when Lyn “gives it away” to Brad, Alexander feels undermined, maybe even jealous. Still, Lyn’s instinct to protect Alexander from Brad, not just from rivals in the library, but from their closest friend is one of the most intimate beats in the chapter. It shows how deeply personal his loyalty runs. It’s unspoken intimacy... Lyn chooses silence to safeguard Alexander’s image, even though Brad wouldn’t really see it as damaging. This moment probably lands with Alexander, even if he doesn’t show it. It reinforces what Brad blurts out later (about Lyn being sad when Alexander acts up) - that Lyn’s loyalty is deeper than “just friendship.”- 36 comments
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[Memory, March, Sophomore Year] – You Are My Friend
Cane23 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, March, Sophomore Year] – You Are My Friend
I just love your comment @LeeSA...leaves me thinking what to add... Fear indeed. I was thinking about the last two flashback chapters. They show genuine friendship and closeness between Alexander and Lyn, which made me think back to the opening chapters. There, Lyn’s reaction to finding out Alexander would be at Brad’s wedding was almost one of animosity and repulsion. So much that Alexander seemed like some arrogant prick from the past. (There would be no hugs and reminiscence of the old days with this guy, Lyn thought. He was as obnoxious as ever. Why had Brad insisted on being friends with Alexander – and forced Lyn to be part of their trio – was beyond him). Sounds ridiculous now, doesn't it? But even if we set aside his true feelings (which Lyn is still unaware of), there was real friendship between them. So why wouldn’t Lyn want to see his old friend from college? That’s when it struck me - it must have been fear. Fear of being seen. This polished, successful, well-dressed lawyer is still that insecure boy underneath. Brad might only see the mask (“Fucking hell, man, you look awesome,” Brad began, pulling him into a strong hug and patting his back. “You got LASIK or something? I remember you always worried about breaking your glasses by accident.”), but Alexander would undoubtedly see right through him. Remember Alexander’s first comment: “You’re overdressed, Lyn.” That’s exactly what Lyn dreads - Alexander recognizing him in an instant. Lyn’s persistent avoidance - never asking about Alexander’s past, never checking him on social media - also points to the same thing. That’s someone hiding. Someone afraid of being exposed.
