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  1. JJQuinn

    Chapter 7 -Sev

    Aww thank you! They are definitely jumping in with both feet and in some ways it's a good thing because they already know everything about each other and they're adding new components to their lives. On the other hand now they have to figure out how to make those pieces work . It's a great yay we love one another, but can we make it a happily ever after quandry. Like the next chapters will explore some of that with a lot of dialogue between Sev and Aiden. And of course, I will be adding their friends into both those in and work. Because how do you behave at work now that you're together but also employee and employer? It's shifting a lot of gears. The Greccos also thought Aiden was going to end up with a girl. They like Sev but it's another part of a culture shift. His own parents aren't gay friendly which he mentioned. And of course there will be build up to a very climactic moment that will shift everything because it's how I roll LOL happy ever after school happen but it's going to be a bit of a ride because y'all love it😁 TY!
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    Chapter 7 -Sev

    OH you will lol... Lots to go. We have the happy parts, the loooooow sad dip and then the rise again!
  3. Sev FROM age five to fourteen, there were several constant realities in my life, though few of them were as All-American as apple pie. I couldn’t remember anything about my life before age five. That was probably a good thing. Fourteen years of shitty memories was more than enough to justify the lifetime of therapy I probably needed, but would never seek out. I didn’t like to wallow. I definitely wasn’t one for laying on someone's couch and replaying the years of childhood trauma that could
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    Chapter 6 - Aiden

    Yes sir. There will be twists and turns for sure. Not in the beginning. It's going to be more sweet falling in love romance and an enhancing of the family unit dynamic. Probably won't be sleeping in the same bed just yet because they don't want to confuse ruby, that kind of thing but eventually it'll slowly be merging their lives together though that'll be easier than it might be with some couples because they're already halfway there. They started off that way without the sex . And of course we have to bring Tak back. LOL when I originally started the story years ago he was not a fully flesh character like he is in this version so his role in the story so to speak is going to be very different this time.
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    Chapter 6 - Aiden

    Probably one of the best compliments ever LOL no that I've said before I hate writing probably one of the best compliments ever LOL no that I've said before I hate writing smutty scenes and I'm trying to do more build up and fade to black but sometimes you need the steaminess. Especially when it's been building up 5 years! It shall continue. Lots of snuggles. I have to switch back to Alexis and Griff and see where I get with that and then I'll switch back to this one . This is my happy place compared to the other one LOL the other one is a guilty pleasure but it's exhausting
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    Chapter 5 - Aiden

    You are ripping through these chapters. You're going to get the chapter 6 and then it's a HARD STOP for now. I would just follow it if you want to continue the story because sometimes my posts are very few and far between due to health issues that most of my regular readers already know about. Have to work with what my body lets me do so sometimes people Miss chapters because it's been so long and less they're following the story. Thanks for reading!
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    Chapter 6 - Aiden

    Lol. Probably not LOL it would be fun though wouldn't it? LOL but nope there's going to be more chatting and maybe some snuggling, but clothes will stay on. Ruby is coming back of course the next day and when there's a child involved in a dynamic things have to proceed if a little bit more caution than they might normally without said child in the picture. I think make out sessions will eventually come into play but it's going to be a while before we have the big fireworks and of course the big fireworks will happen it'll be happiness for a while and of course then the twist that poor talk will play a part in but not because he did anything wrong per se, it just is a complication. Light is complicated and you know that I try to write realistic, sometimes difficult characters and stories.
  8. JJQuinn

    Chapter 5 - Aiden

    Thank you Cane. I am originally from New York City, born and bred in east Harlem so this story more than most of my others will have a lot of description about places that I remember growing up and just kind of things that people from the area especially in the 90s 2000s would be familiar with. Like El Barrio and other leas commonly known areas in Central Park. Though I moved to a state in a rural area where it's 180 out from what I grew up, I still remember all the details of New York and what makes it its own very unique landscape. I agree with you. Aiden would never have played with Sev's emotions on purpose and you'll see that in the next chapter. They really are the best of friends and there's some things that will come out later that I'm sure may raise eyebrows but life is complicated. In the earlier chapters it was mentioned that says the date somebody else but just didn't go anywhere he's always had a thing for Aiden then Aiden was just not aware. So unlike Noah and Luke in Studs and Spurs, this isn't about internalized homophobia or being afraid to step out of the closet as much as it is he just didn't realize it. The romance will come. But it's going to be a slow process because Sev is as trusting as a feral cat and they have Ruby. Anything that affects their relationship will also affect hers because says her father and she loves her Uncle AD.
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    Chapter 6 - Aiden

    Thank you so much friend. I try. I read a lot of first personalities when I read picture and I always like getting into the heads of the characters that way. I guess that's why it's my preferred Style when I write. They are definitely both thinking with both heads LOL but says perspective will show the holy toledo what are we doing. Because of course he has himself and Aiden's relationship but he also has Ruby. She is close to Aiden and of course the doors are daddy so any relationship and what occurs in it will affect her. When children are involved in relationships that become Blended families it's always a shuffling game to make sure that everyone has the same level of priority. And she would be absolutely devastated that she lost her uncle AD. It will be lots of fun times ahead for a while. They have to figure themselves out and of course all of their friends because they run in pretty much the same circles other than Aiden's work buddies, will probably have been taking bets for years lol. Thanks for your thoughts and for following along. I appreciate you!
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    Chapter 3

    I try not to do tropes. They definitely are very hot-blooded alpha male types. And they will stay that way for a bit longer than I'd like. I really do appreciate that you notice I try to stay away from tropes and stereotypes! For this particular story they're kind of going to stay in the general vicinity of alpha a holes, and then of course they'll be a switch but it won't be noticeable at first. Price... I'm kind of setting him up to be an obvious problem.. So will he or won't he be one? O.o...lol Alexis definitely has aces up her sleeve. I think some people will be surprised by some of the things that she does and some people will not be surprised at all. There is going to be a twist as for the bureau. Possibly a double twist if I can work it out correctly in my head. I've never written psychological thrillers though I read them all the time. I'm always so wary of getting details wrong. I used to watch and read a lot of True Crime. When I see weak police procedurals on TV I notice a lot of the mistakes and I don't want to be that person. So I struggle a little bit with this but I think I figured out a way that there will be twists without me having to suspend belief too much. Alexis is the white whale. She is brilliant and they can't trip her up per se. Not deliberately. But Griffin is as much her achilles heel as she is his so that will show a little later. Definitely Alexis just wants something from him which you already made clear that she wanted him there. Why does she want him there. She's already torturing him. He lost his job. He lost all credibility. His name is going to be linked with hers possibly forever and infamy. Even though he may be able to prove that he had nothing to do with it, there's always going to be people that don't believe it. Conspiracy theorists abound in all aspects of life so what could she possibly want from him? He's gay. So it's not a romantic love? Right? What could she possibly want to gain from him .. And yes ghost will appear but there's just so many balls in the air that I didn't want to split the focus too much. So there was mention that he saw ghost coming in but now he's kind of focused on what's going on . Because he's a medium his interactions with ghosts or going to be more intense than just seeing them. And his abilities to touch objects and feel and kind of read people's minds obviously but that type of psychic ability comes at a true cost which is why he's always saying that he needs a drinkers he would prefer to be stoned Etc. So we will see ghosts later but it's going to be kind of towards the end. I haven't quite figured it out because I haven't set up the groundwork completely for it to a degree that I would be satisfied with in a normal length Story come up with this is supposed to be a short story even though of course it's turned out much longer than I expected originally. But I don't have 30 chapters to kind of build up all the pieces so I hate telling and not showing but I think some of it will have to be told in flashbacks or you know in his own mind kind of breaking things down so we'll see how it goes but there will be ghosts. There's going to be a very important twist with the ghostly community so that's coming but that will not happen next chapter into the very very end. And that's where I'll leave it because I don't want to give it away. But then the chapter after that is when all hell breaks loose.
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    Chapter 6 - Aiden

    Thanks so much I appreciate that. I would love to be able to release chapters each week but it's unlikely to happen. Unfortunately my body imposes some physical limitations so I I can't write nearly as much as I would like to. But I'm going to keep plugging along and we shall see what we get out before the end of the year and then continue into the next! My husband is one who is covered in ink. So I have a fondness for it thanks so much for commenting and stay tuned.
  12. JJQuinn

    Chapter 1 - Sev

    I appreciate that so much. It really helps when I get feedback from readers especially for stories that are in process . I hope that you continue to read and let me know your thoughts as you finish the chapters. Take care!
  13. FOR a moment after the door clicked shut behind him, Sev and I just stared at one another. One beat turned into two, then three, then four. I stopped counting after five, just held my breath until I was forced to exhale. When the piercing in Sev’s eyebrow hitched upward, obviously questioning what the fuck that had been about, I sighed, then rubbed the back of my neck restlessly. The soft prickly fuzz at the nape of my neck where my hair had been buzzed low after the rest was cut yesterday, pres
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    Chapter 2

    I'm so glad you saw it now! I think there's a way for you to follow the story that way you'll be sent notifications when I post a chapters. I know I've been in frequent so that's what I tell readers when they message me letting me know that they've either miss a chapter or asking when I'm posting a new one. There is a lot of tension in the car LOL . Wait till the next chapter. You're going to see why I said that Griffin is not as nice as Spencer read lol. You did see some of it in the car. He has a mouth on him when he gets stressed out but Sean understands him. Originally the story was not supposed to be a romance in any respect. But as usual, the characters wrote themselves so I just go with it . It's not going to be a typical romance obviously , but there will be moments of confession and a sort of happiness is possible ending instead of an explicit happily ever after ending. Thanks for sticking with me!
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    Chapter 5 - Aiden

    It will definitely be a happy ending. It will just take a little bit to get there. Thanks for the feedback!
  16. JJQuinn

    Chapter 1

    Looking forward to your thoughts! I hope to have the next chapter finished withib the next week and a half (crossing fingers). It's mostly written but needs a lot of restructuring and cleaning up.
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    Chapter 5 - Aiden

    Yep. But will Sev BELIEVE him?? Hmmmmmm. 😏
  18. JJQuinn

    Chapter 1

    Thanks so much. He definitely does have some aspects of Spencer. He's not as nice as Spencer though LOL the mouth on him .. wait till you see the show down with Booker and Brady.. has a level of sass that Reed was never capable of except maybe in the last season when he was a little bit more damaged. And yes you like @Cane23, are right on the nose lol.. looking towards the future, that's all going to play a part in it. He doesn't want to touch her, afraid it will disrupt his life. Alexis however, is Alexis, and she WILL be pushing the issue . Stay tuned.
  19. Aiden SOME of what people believe about New York is actual fact. It’s true that the city never sleeps. Between the breakneck dexterity of the yellow cabs that barely manage to avoid daily games of bumper cars as well as the throngs of photo-hungry tourists who mob Times Square, there’s always something going on. People are drawn to the bright lights and vibrant energy that are the pulsating heart of Manhattan. Bars and restaurants seep laughter, flirtation, and the scent of any c
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    Chapter 3

    @Cane23 translator or not sir, you understand and see a whole lot more than you think you do lol. I know it was very wordy . I tend to switch off style on what I'm writing. I think that's why it's easier for me to write modern first person because I can do it without thinking where if I'm doing Gothic or historical romance or something like this which is a psychological Thriller, then it becomes not quite word salad but definitely more descriptive. I'm glad that you got through it. The next chapter is going to be more dialogue as Alexis and Griff square off. She's a piece of work LOL I have written a lot of the scene over multiple times. Originally I had one idea , but then it completely morphed into something else and even as I'm writing the chapters the characters sort of speak for me and yesterday I was walking around doing laundry and whole new park pop into my head so I hastily voice to texted it to the chapter and now I just have to go and clean it up. Alexis is definitely one to play games . Just bored indeed. Pricing garcia.. LOL you need to close your eyeballs and stop seeing to the Future. Maybe or maybe not .. when we do the fortune telling thing all sorts of stuff can happen lol Brady and Booker suck but they will be pivotal in what turns out to be a very intense chapter. I'm hoping that it won't be stupid long but I think it's going to be. I wanted to just be one chapter and not have to divide it into two because the second would have been short but we're going to have to see . I plan this particular chapter ending on a very oh my gosh note so it all depends on where the characters going to be and how wicked Alexis is going to be. Like I said I had plans it to be more of a chapter where there was a lot more investigation and Griff sort of saw through her nonsense because she slipped, but that didn't feel as authentic because this woman killed for years didn't slip and I want the fact that he wears the gloves and she said people to really become the factor that changes things but he's not going to do it willingly so he needs to get pushed and she's planning to do so with both hands . Stay tuned!
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    Chapter 3

    Four will be prepared but all she wants is Griffin.!! Hah
  22. JJQuinn

    Chapter 2

    Thank you friend. Wait till the next one. I just posted it 2 days ago. It's pretty long and a lot more attention. He still hasn't reconnected with Alexis yet but that's coming in chapter 4 and that's going to be all sorts of twists and turns . I really appreciate you taking this one on. I know it's a darker theme. Definitely a psychological Thriller and that most people's cup of tea. Thank you so much.
  23. GRIFFIN was surrounded by dead people. But unlike the handful of ghostly specters who were still decked out in the facility’s standard orange jumpsuits which were closer in color to the paler insides of a dehydrated tangerine, these victims were ones that every person in this room, not just Griffin, was bearing witness too. The extreme levels of violence that had taken each physical attribute of the human bodies on display that manifested 3D in life, were reduced to a 2D format in the enlar
  24. I was a very clever use of the anthology theme. So simple and yet unexpected I'm relatable. I'm also creature of habit and I have such a mug collection LOL it drives my husband up a wall . I get them from thrift stores so I related to this and of course we have four cats lol. Well done.
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