JJQuinn

LOL!!!!! I didn't even think about that. He'd probably tell her it was grownup candy. Cough drops 😆 🤣 😂 😹 😆 🤣 They will get some sleep and cuddles and theeeeen Mac will be a dummy temporarily and Tara steps in. [He's got issue] More sec happens [these 2!] And then an actual talk among which is the "friends with benefits " conversation. I had the first 7 chapters written previously and the entire story outlined but now that Halos and JFH were so different than the original idea I was working with for Hood and Holy Water, changes had to be made so it's adapting all that and then...writing from scratch. We will see Roman's domestic side, Max's protective streak when it comes to Addie-cat, chit chat with Sofia. Babysitting with Roman while Sofia visits AJ [Roman's surprisingly domestic], some tension with Sam M and Ben's surrogate, Mac and Sam finally airing things out properly. Max saving the day a few times. Tara and Sloane not working and Sloane introducing her to her future love interest, Fiona. Lots will be happening plus lots of other sweeter bits once they fall into a relationship. Showdown with his dad...getting Roman's mom back into the picture...Stay tuned!!! ❤️

😆 🤣 😂 😹 😆 🤣 😂 😹 This is true. Being distracted by bastardized Gone with the Wind and recliner sex gets a pass.

LOL yep. That's why he's like "shhh"to the readers- he sorta liked being held. And Roman definitely struggles with apologies because he works so hard NOT TO make mistakes. Hello OCD. Love will definitely come eventually. Lots of X-rated hijinks first. You know I go oye with slutty scenes but this book....good Lord. Sam and Ben started the hotter part of their relationship in a slow burn. Max and Roman will be the slow burn of frenemies to friends, to lovers to in love. Lots of snark and sex before the more tender stuff though it's on Max and Roman terms. Oh Tara will make an appearance lol. I think it's the next chapter. And....her mouth... poor Roman. Remember... she's the scariest one of all. Hah Roman would die!!!! Max would be like ok that's gross. He deals with all sorts of things in the hospital. I'm shocked sir you didn't comment on the fact a new supporting charactwr was mentioned. He's part of a longer game, setting up for about 3 books from now when Cayden's story. Dimitri isn't the love interest, but he will be a friend and semi guide. Slowly building the world

Hah! They will, but they're following a path of 'enemies' to friends. LOts of wham and bam banging as they fall into eventual happiness!

I know I’m a handful. That’s why you have two hands. -Unknown MY SNEAKERS and socks were off before I even got the front door of my basement apartment unlocked. It was tempting to follow them into a lethargic heap on the floor. My feet hurt, my head was throbbing with the beginning of a tension headache, and after my long shift at the hospital, the scent of alcohol permeated from my pores worse than it did from a street corner wino. My night had improved only marginally once I’d e

LOL. We're also forgetting A.J. He tries to be more lover than fighter but he's happy to slap heads when they're deserving of it. Sam is technically the most lethal of them because of his training, but I'd be more scared of Tara than Sam lol. She'd fight dirty.

I'm officially dying...probably the best comment ever!!! LMAO. Keep hanging on! I promise the end is worth it lol

He's human and he was hurt. Sometimes we make silly mistakes when we feel wounded emotionally. The last chapter will explain it better. I'm glad you've kept reading though despite being frustrated with Ben 😀

Thanks friend. You're absolutely right. Sam was there for Ben every inch of the way even when Sam turned on him the first time by accident when Ben startled him. Ben's been very patient till this point, but he's also human. It will be explained in the last chapter I try to write very realistic characters, which sometimes means they do silly things and make mistakes. Let me know what you think of the last chapter! @Jean87 ❤️

I'm so glad you were inspired to post your story here. It was exceedingly well written and though you've "ended" the story there are also so many avenues that you could take future stories. Strong supportive characters mean you have a lot to run with if you decided to expand the universe. Crossing fingers that you will!

Ahhh yes that perfect moment of apology that's annoyingly interrupted and just ramps up the irritation for Max of "was he going to say he was sorry? ASSHAT!" While Roman is, "FOR FUCKS SAKE can everyone just go away so we can talk?"-giggles- they'll get better... than fight then get better again. Both stubborn and hard-headed so it's gonna be a ride! Thanks as always for your feedback. I really do appreciate it!

😆 🤣 😂 😹 😆 I agree! They're licking their own wounds now, but it will be a different story later. The fucking like champions comes first with these two, then the hearts and do anything for one another especially at the end. Hah! I didn't even realize it, but yessssss sooooo much like a telenovella. Ben would've been there with snacks. Thanks as always for your feedback. I giggled.

Hehe you know me by now @Cane23. Have to have some of those realistic romantic moments that usually deserve a slap upside the head. 😆 Roman is being a dummy doodle bug. He doesn't want to be second choice. Fair because Max did start out with that mindset in Roman's chapters in JFH. But now he's humiliated and PISSED so the fur will fly... and then the clothes will come off! [Though Roman does deserve a kick in the nads for that one. Tara is Maxs roommate sooo you never know!] Hah...anyone expecting a Sam and Ben romance will be disappointed. These two will eventually have a deep connection, but despite it being incendiary 🔥 pretty much thied chapter out, the emotional component is a slower build. Max isn't Sam and Roman isn't Ben. They have different damages but where Ben had made peace with most of his by the tine Sam came along, Max and Roman...not so much. Both have too much pride and are too scrappy for their own good. Brn was a priest so he learned to use his powers for good. And as messsed up emotionally as Sam was, following and giving orders for so many years allowed him to follow a path if it was laid out for him. Between Romans OCD and Max's foibles, neither has their ducks in a row despite appearances. They've got manic squirrels running all over the place! 😆 They will figure it out. Poor Adam. He got caught in the middle of a medical drama!

You can’t always control who walks into your life but, you CAN control which window you throw them out of… -Unknown I took the scenic route down the long hallway, stopping to pop in on every other patient on my rotation, even the ones who’d checked in after Roman. My sense of professional guilt should’ve been triggered, but triage was something I was allowed and expected to do in my role as a healer of humans, so that was my story, and I was sticking to it. I lingered long enough to ma

@Jean87thank you! I always try to make my characters as "human" as possible so they have their own quirks. Even Ben isn't perfect though he's pretty close according to most readers lol The next 3 chapters are A LOT of hanky panky, but also a lot of conversation in between. Chapter 14 is pretty much all smut and a shorter chapter so it can be skipped if preferred. I try to work in dialogue because writing sex scenes make me tired 😫 Tha ka for taking the time to read and share your thoughts! ❤️

I appreciate that! Hey I love to hear thoughts from readers whether it is chapter by chapter or the entirety! So I truly appreciate you taking the time to comment. Helps me become a better writer. Cayden will eventually have his own novel. Ben is a huge softie. I'm looking forward to your thoughts on the rest! ❤️

You hit the nail on the head. STUBBORN! The bigger they are, the harder they fall [that's foreshadowing! 😆] thanks as always for taking the time to comment. I truly appreciate it ❤️

You picked up on it! He absolutely was. In Just Found Heaven which is a segue after this, there are multiple POV and Max's has a flashback that happens after this here he talks to Connor so you see more of the timeline. Thanks for the input! I appreciate you ❤️

Hope you do and enjoy 😉 Rom Coms were my preference for a long time. But the 90s and 2000s kind when the douche chills were REAL on occasion ❤️ 😆

Awww upset in Max's defense is a new one and I love it! @Cane23 Did we ever think we wpuld see the day? 😆 Max is definitely affected and he will hate every moment of it. Being affected ruins his "street cred" a a philandering badass. Roman's shaking things up! They will make nice sooner than later but Roman needs to suck it up and apologize first! ❤️

Yes sir! It's all Max’s POV just like Sams was the only one in Halos. I did the multiple POV's in JFH because I thought it near a neat way to set up the rest of the series with some of the characters including Roman. Hah yep we have that saying here. Don't shit where you eat lol. Medical dramas are alllllll about the inappropriate hookups so I just poke fun at it a little bit and roll with the suspension of belief. Me personally...NEVER fraternizing with coworkers. Gets messy 🤮 Yes Janet is lol. Full on mama bear mode. She will smack him around but won't let anyone else. Romans in deep poo poo with her later on in the story. Hope the story will meet your expectations! Heart ❤️ 💙 💜

Yay! Finally new to you content ❤️-crossing fingers and toes-

I giggled at the age of consent.

I laughed throughout. I'd read the original piece, but didn't realize that there were 2 other shorts. It was a great surprise. Creative take and very well written.

Thanks ReaderPaul! I hope you check it out. Cia... THANK YOU!! BEST belated birthday present ever! ❤️