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"All The Trees Of The Field Will Clap Their Hands"
dboggs9700 commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "All The Trees Of The Field Will Clap Their Hands"
The courtroom portion of this chapter was so well written and the dialogue was excellent. I liked the way the "interview" was used in this and the last few chapters. It filled in information that would have taken pages otherwise. -
It is so great to see Jesse trust Hank and have faith in him. Cannot wait to see what Hank sets up at the farm. Is Miller really trustworthy?
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WOW....not sure what to say. Just feeling down and saddened.
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Great writing in this one. I am so glad that Liam grew a pair!😁
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I 100% agree with you!
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Call Mateo he has lots of ideas and connections. 😁
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I love the intimacy both expressed and implied in this chapter.
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Liam and Hudson beautiful. Mateo is the ultimate friend. Marina will hopefully die at the hands of Mateo's gay mafia acquaintances. Beautifully written and great dialogue as always!
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"I Know You're In There"
dboggs9700 commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "I Know You're In There"
Great writing with interesting characters. -
Liam needs to grow a pair and tell Marina it is her job to keep his life private. She obviously feels she is capable of maintaining her investment. At least Hudson did not sign an NDA. So well written. Otherwise, I would not feel this pissed off.
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"Quit Playing Around, Arizona"
dboggs9700 commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "Quit Playing Around, Arizona"
Wonderful chapter. I love the unfiltered Mateo. -
Great interplay between Liam and Hudson. The texts at the end were a perfect set up for things to come.
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By the time I got toward the end of the chapter I was hooked. Your words seem to flow so naturally without being flowery or ostentatious. I am anxious to get to know Hudson and Liam better.
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Not quite sure what to say. Your descriptions of surroundings, sounds, dialogue, and actions are so perfect. The sex scenes are hot as hell, and you keep them with the story and not gratuitous. Great chapter Jack.
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The first night will definitely be interesting for all the guys. Can't wait.
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This story is wonderful. Beautifully written with characters I would like to meet. It brought out emotions and is also thought provoking. Thank you for this story and please keep writing.
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Absolutely beautifully written! I loved the song also. Thank you!
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Things are starting to get a little sad, but the beauty of the triad is still outshining that. The strength Chris, Nate, and Tad give one another is amazing. It also seems the new friendship between all five men will help as time goes on. Great story!
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Just keep writing and I'll keep reading. Sleazy Miller seems like an interesting character.
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Damn......Throw some more twists and turns into the plot Jack. Every time I think I know where things are going you change direction. Great chapter and story. As aways, thank you for sharing it with us.
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Loved this chapter. The developing relationships are so interesting. The dialogue is absolutely fabulous as always.
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This chapter committed me to the story. As always, the characters are excellent. Not that I agree with him, I do understand where Chris is coming from. Were Chris and Miranda at odds over things previous to Chris leaving? Thank you Wayne for this story.
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Loved this chapter and the inventiveness of the prank.
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Beautiful ending to another great story. So many wonderful things were stated in all the comments for the story I have nothing to add. Your characters and their interactions are what has drawn me to your stories. I plan on reading Fleeting Eternity soon. Thank you as always for sharing your talent with us.
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Hank seems to read Jesse like an open book. Jesse is just confused not understanding Hank's motives or what he expects in return. Very anxious and excited for the next chapter.
