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I have a feeling we may not have seen the end of Jessica. She was probably listening at the door to see if Mateo is faking it with Adrian.
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What will Brandon do now? Try to have Hank killed to keep his name out of it? Try to have Kaleo' s company taken off the Camfield Project? How will he get to Hazel's money? Poor Brandon.😁
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Philippe, I always appreciate your comments so much. You help me appreciate the story more with knowledge you add.
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Really enjoyable chapter. Getting to know the guys better is really cool. As always, you did a great job of describing and capturing the premiere.
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So happy that Kent will be fine, but I am concerned that Randy may be blaming himself for allowing Kent to get injured.
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I think Hector will be excellent in the role. He seems to have a very good knowledge of what the film will encompass, and I think he will leave his inhibitions and insecurities at the door. He seems like an all or nothing type of guy and will give everything he can to the role.
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Great to see Niran relaxing with Kaleo's presence. Doryu and Stacy seem to have made Kaleo part of the family. Too bad the storm clouds will be rolling in soon as the bidding starts on the Camfield Project.
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Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
dboggs9700 commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 30 - All Hands on Deck
Great chapter. Hope they nail Brock. He may be involved in more than they are aware of right now. I am sure the cruise and the plans for next Sunday will be a great time. -
Casey seems to be crawling out of the sewer and possibly wanting Levi. I hope Levi avoids isolated locations and stays near friends. Since Casey's friends pulled him away this time, Casey will probably be alone if he tries anything again.
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I just completed reading the story. Unbelievably good story with great, well-developed characters. Thank you for sharing it with us all @Thomas Lindblad.
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Chapter 28 ~ Hell’a Pretty Poison ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 28 ~ Hell’a Pretty Poison ~
My ancestry is 85% Scottish and Irish, even with the last 200 years of family have been in the US. Shayna did forget to bring up the Irish gingers. -
Great chapter and start! I will definitely be continuing to read this one. I agree with drsawzall. I get the feeling that River is jealous of the friendship Kai and Flynn have too. Maybe it goes even further than that.
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Prologue: All Fucked Up
dboggs9700 commented on Thightide45's story chapter in Prologue: All Fucked Up
Definitely a lot of information packed in this chapter. Will be following this story a while and see where things go. -
Hector's answers to the audition questions were nearly perfect. They did not come off as rehearsed or contrived. The three's little make out session was a perfect end to the audition. Let's hope things go well on set now.
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Chapter 28 ~ Hell’a Pretty Poison ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 28 ~ Hell’a Pretty Poison ~
Since Shayna covered my heritage today, will we ever get her views on @Summerabbacat's? -
Chapter 28 ~ Hell’a Pretty Poison ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 28 ~ Hell’a Pretty Poison ~
Greatly enjoyed Frank's and Hank's conversation and bet. Rhett will certainly make Hank some easy money. More importantly, will Frank finally tell Rhett how he feels? -
Absolutely beautifully written chapter! Steamy and so romantic. As Cane23 said, a Pretty Woman moment.
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Death or imprisonment are both good options. The real mastermind Remy is coming next week.
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I think your more cerebral approach will be most effective in the long run.
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Welcome back. Great chapter. Hoping the USB stick from Jesse will truly put an end to Vane's pursuit of Jesse.
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I hope you have another story planned since this one will be ending. I enjoy your clean writing style and attention to detail.
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Dinner with Brodie and Rachel are always great entertainment. Does Sky ever think about Brant in bed?
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@mastershakeme, this is one of the most romantic chapters I have ever read from you. Beautifully done.
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Great that Niran found out about Hank being Brandon's 'employee'. Hoping that Stone is gone soon between not mentioning the new competition and covering for Hank. Stone would sell out Niran for the right amount of money in a second. I hope the date is everything both Niran and Kaleo want it to be.
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Great chapter! I deeply hope the killer is Hugo and not Tim. Cannot be sure who hid the phone in the bathroom, Tim or Hugo. I assume Lennart did not bag the phone to dust for finger prints.
