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Great chapter and transition into the next chapter. So well written as always @Mark Ponyboy Peters.

I think Owen will survive coming out with some persistence from Ryder. Owen will need to ignore Margot, or he will never accomplish it. We know Beth will support Owen and I also feel like Eric will also. His parents will eventually come around too. Ryder's story is much too common. Parents that abandon their gay child as if they never existed. Ryder has survived and will overcome the challenges and stigma of having been in prison.

Beautiful and touching @Tony S., clearly written from the heart. Thank you for sharing this personal story with us.

Looks like Skarg might have relevance with his singing ability of putting things asleep. But putting Vince to sleep will not help matters and why is Jack unaffected by the singing?

Xavier and Austin are great together, but they are so slow and so cautious it is getting ridiculous.

Great story! Bailey and Jess are absolutely great characters. Hard to pick words to describe them, maybe lovable fits them best. I hope you revisit these two sometime in the future.

This is going to get good, Margot vs Ryder. Bitch vs Badboy. My bet is on Margot to land the first punch but gets answered immediately by Ryder. Eric seems clueless at times, but I am starting to think part of that is an act. Maybe common sense is what he lacks instead.

I thoroughly enjoyed the story @vanalas. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Great chapter @vanalas. So much in this chapter to think about. Still no real answers to the murder. Great that both Nathan and Clara woke up to their emotionally abusive partners. For some reason, I think the doctor might be the man that Sophia shot.

Fun story. Really like how they never really lost their gym bro personalities.

I bet Margot goes for the big make out kiss as soon as Owen comes back, pissing Ryder off.

Margot needs to be put in her place. She's bad for Owen and for herself. Ryder makes good points, just not sure showing up at the fair was a great idea.

It is really unsettling that Brian just brushed Tommy off as close as they had been. Hopefully some type of resolution is made between them.

Quite a change in strategy, seems Hank and Jesse both are having difficulties adapting. Hopefully they can put on a proper appearance for the scout to help build Jesse's Ledger. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter @Jack Poignet. Thank you for sharing your story.

An interesting premise and can't wait to see where things go over the next two chapters.