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"The Arithmetic Of Rooms"
dboggs9700 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Arithmetic Of Rooms"
I have read all the released chapters since this chapter was released. I am happy I had not previously read the old chapters, or I never would have come back to it. The story has my mind going in a hundred directions right now. I will comment later on regarding the story when I have thoughts together. Great story so far @CasualWanderer82 and anxious for the next chapter. -
Chapter Eighteen - Ben's POV
dboggs9700 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen - Ben's POV
Julian and Ben need to stay calm and be completely honest with each other. No hidden feelings between them. For some reason I have a feeling that Sophie or Grace may come into play in helping against Halcyon. -
Chapter Eighteen - Ben's POV
dboggs9700 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen - Ben's POV
I hope you are having a fun morning with Connor @mastershakeme. -
Great chapter @Vcs, the butt plug education from everyone was just an added benefit.
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Seems Kent might finally be admitting to himself he is attracted to Randy. Unfortunately, Kent seems to see the attraction as a betrayal of his love for Ken.
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Discovery And Banishment
dboggs9700 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Discovery And Banishment
Great start. Military dads can always go either way, so I am excited to see how things go.- 37 comments
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Chapter Seventeen - Julian's POV
dboggs9700 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Seventeen - Julian's POV
It is going to be interesting what Rachel and Mason tell Diane since there was so little dialogue during their visit. Ben simply accepted things and went about playing with Grace. He'll deal with things as they happen and not dwell on it. -
The Light in the Darkness
dboggs9700 commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Light in the Darkness
An outstanding finish to a great story series @jkwsquirrel. I hope more readers discover it as they read Unraveled like I did. -
Parents Weekend, Book Three of Five
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Parents Weekend, Book Three of Five
Tyson is extremely hot, but I still think Matt has the edge on him. Great chapter @Boy Mercury X and a really fun read. Next story looks great too. -
Travis is now pretty much at Kendo's mercy, between regulating Travis' drugs to keep him functioning and now being able to threaten outing him. Travis is in way over his head now. The smartest thing Travis can do right now is ask Will for help.
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Chapter Sixteen - Ben's POV
dboggs9700 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Sixteen - Ben's POV
Great chapter. Ben and Julian are beautiful together. Can Tessa coverup everything that is happening? -
They seem like they could be a couple to me also @weinerdog. I think they will stay roommates because either Reilly will tell Jake he cannot change room assignments or no other members will change rooms with Danny and be Jake's roommate.
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Great story @jkwsquirrel. Only Dustin's World left now.
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These men are beautiful together. I still foresee these three as a throuple very soon. They are way beyond a threesome.
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Chapter Fifteen - Julian's POV
dboggs9700 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Fifteen - Julian's POV
Damn depressing chapter @mastershakeme. Ben and Julian need to contact Tessa ASAP. Some damage control with the family might help but would be counteractive to Ben's regaining his balls. -
I never thought about everyone thinking it was stolen, not sure where my mind was. Levi needs to come clean before the rumors hit and things blow up. Casey seemed to think the fire was great for their protection.
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Chapter 26 - Persecution
dboggs9700 commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 26 - Persecution
Mark and Liam are great additions to the chosen family. Shutting down the church/cult will not be easy but well worth the effort. I think Nathan is overthinking his family's reaction but one never knows. Hoping that will go well for him.- 20 comments
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Those names are pretty much staple southern redneck names in the US. I believe all three names were used at one time or another on the old US show "Dukes of Hazzard".
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Another Day at the Park
dboggs9700 commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in Another Day at the Park
Thank you for this wonderful series of stories @jkwsquirrel. I only regret that I wasn't reading as you released chapters so that I could have commented along the way. -
Gotta put it out here, will the dog be important or a factor later on?
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Chapter Fourteen - Ben's POV
dboggs9700 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Fourteen - Ben's POV
I must say that was one of the most meaningful first kisses ever @mastershakeme. I hope they call Tessa soon, so she is not caught off guard. Rachel's text was a start as was Mason responding to Ben's text. Diane needs watched carefully because she is not used to being challenged. -
I am sure he feels, his God will protect him, and he is on the side of righteousness. He is probably so insolated in this little town, everyone that matters to him will praise and honor him for his actions.
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Chapter Thirteen - Julian's POV
dboggs9700 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Thirteen - Julian's POV
Rachel is a real piece of work, what a bitch. I still think Ben needs to give Diane, Tessa's number so that the data does not get pulled when she files a complaint. Neither Julian nor Ben are going to rush things between them. No doors have been closed. -
Evelyn is making the right move in turning Austin and making him alpha. Aaron will not like it, but he will recognize it as the best choice eventually. Austin should take Xavier as his mate asap. In many shifter stories, a mating strengthens both mates, Austin needs every bit of strength he can get. Great chapter @Painawakened, cannot wait for next one.
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Wow, what a chapter. Levi needs to confess all the details he remembers. If Casey's family is still out to get Matt and Luke, who knows what kind of story Casey and his friends will tell to bring the family down.
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