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  1. dboggs9700

    Chapter 5

    Going to the Golden Globes will be great and maybe some Oscar nominations will come their way now. The dinner with Hector and Juanita is helping cement a solid friendship between the couples.
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    Sadness

    Happy that Austin stepped away. No fallback guy for Will. Marie got exactly what she deserved from Will, walked out on. Too much like her mother. Hope that Brad starts investigating Kendo and buries him quickly. Maybe that will force Travis to get help. Jake needs to get involved with Travis ASAP. Will is Will and I would never second guess him. Really surprised me going off grid to deal with things. He'll be back and watch out!
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    Chapter 31

    This felt like a real growth chapter for Levi. I hope he opens both doors, the parttime employment and the volunteering. Either or both, would help him in his growth.
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    The Emptying

    Please don't let a random negative opinion get to you. I read allot and every once in a while, an insulting comment is made about a story. I must also say that those comments are usually by another author versus a regular reader. More than likely envy or jealousy. You have a great story going here.
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    The Emptying

    Really a good chapter. I am sorry I did not read this chapter before I read 'The Descent' chapter. This chapter really set Eli's mood and state of mind going into 'The Descent.'
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    The Descent

    Good to know you are back and you were missed. Now that we know Lucien exists, I cannot wait to learn the story behind his imprisonment and his tie to all the Vespers.
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    Chapter 4

    Juanita will definitely turn the leak into major news when her show airs. News of the sequel should also increase viewership in the original film.
  8. I hope Jack can handle Theo or should we be more worried about Theo handling Vince?
  9. Beautiful ending and a wonderful story. Auntie was perfect and I loved her handling of David's parents. I am sure Patrick has gained a valuable ally in Auntie if he ever needs anything.
  10. So, Shayna is still the victim in her mind and refuses to get Doc Mac. Hopefully when Jake does get through to Doc Mac, she is not listening in on an extension or eavesdropping. Jo has quite a history and is amazing for what he has overcome. Rhett needs to have Jake or Frank talk to River and convince him that he is guilty of nothing.
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    Chapter 26

    Great summary drpaladin. Something in this chapter has made me change my mind about Aaron. Instead of seeing him just as an arrogant asshole, I can now see some compassion in him.
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    Chapter 3

    Sky's discussion with Brant was so perfect and flawless. Brant was honestly scared of losing Sky previous to that discussion. I still think Hector for the third man.
  13. You imagined the perfect Auntie. I see her putting David's parents exactly where she believes they would belong.
  14. Thank God, no overthinking things and directly into bed. Enjoying the chemistry between David and Patrick. Out of the blue, I am picturing Auntie asking David how long he and Patrick have been together. Of course, with a Fran Drescher, 'The Nanny' accent.
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    Chapter 12

    Let's hope it's a breakfast run although I doubt it.
  16. Fun chapter. Noah and Ash's love hate relationship does lead to some good sex though. In true form, Ash sends Noah away afterwards. I had to laugh when Ash grabbed Noah out of the hallway, just leaving the girl there.
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    Back to Normal

    So happy that things remained positive between Randy and Kent after the kiss. Wish something had been said about it though. The last line makes me wonder if Kent feels guilty about the kiss with Randy and is feeling unfaithful to Ken.
  18. He is a ginger, what's not to love?
  19. Congrats on the website!!!! Another great start on a new story. I can see this going in so many different directions. I hope Auntie likes Patrick.
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    Chapter 2

    First things first, Stephen is drop-dead gorgeous. Maybe Hector for the throuple. Better yet, can Stephen act? If the throuple theme is too much for Brant maybe play it safe with a baby by a surrogate. So many possibilities you have to play with.
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    Rebounding

    Now that we know how Kendo operates, I see him blackmailing Travis. Kendo could threaten to expose that Travis is gay or expose his drug usage. Travis is way too screwed up to properly fight back and will more than likely pay what Kendo wants.
  22. Great chapter Lee! The pics were cool and I didn't need to be logged on Facebook to see them. Looking forward to the next chapter but I will happily read it whenever you get around to posting it.
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    Chapter 1

    Again, thank you for posting a new story. Great start with just enough reminder of book one to refresh the memory. Good mix of plot and sizzle as always. I am guessing Hector is someone to pay attention to going forward.
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    Prologue

    So happy you are posting a new story. Thank you for sharing with us.
  25. Great chapter @Paladin. So many things happened. My favorite was the cops checking out the party knowing Eddie and Mitch. My hope is that the cops can go after Natasha for something.
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