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Maine: Mom Re-enters The Picture
dboggs9700 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Maine: Mom Re-enters The Picture
Well, it certainly didn't take Loretta and Tony long to hop in bed.😁 Looks like getting Bernie sent away will not be an issue but as we all know tragic accidents can occur before he gets there. -
I am anxious to get Richard's back story more than ever after this chapter. I have a feeling that a tissue warning will accompany it.
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Great start to part two. Very happy that Richard mellowed out after his father / son bonding activities.😁 I really do want Richard and Patrick get their differences settled.
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After that pass and goal, I think these two understand how much each one loves the other. Expressions and actions mean more than words would have.
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Things He Had No Right to Feel
dboggs9700 commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Things He Had No Right to Feel
What concerns me is Leah, Will or Tobey mistakenly letting something slip about Nick's crushes. That would be devastating for Nick whereas Luke and Kit could probably just deny and laugh it off. Luke's concern for Nick still has me leaning toward team Luke. -
This is not the type of story I would usually read BUT it's a Tony S story so of course I'll read it. I am interested in how and why Caleb just happened to show up at the cabin after midnight and chose to knock three times. I am definitely hooked and will see this story to the end.
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Very nice start to what looks like a good story. Tate seems interesting and I guess we will meet Richard in the next chapter.
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Excellent chapter and story. Julien and Oliver are two very complex characters, and everything seemed to work out for them. They made it to the end of the story together. At times the comments sometimes seemed contentious and messy. That just goes to show we all were enjoying our reading. If I offended anyone with my comments, I do apologize and I take no offence of anyone else's comments. Thank you for this story Kevin.
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I am surprised and overjoyed that Noah and Jackson are comfortable enough together to show their closeness to those on the bus. The dialogue throughout the chapter feels like a happily married couple.
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Chapter 4 - Rattlesnakes
dboggs9700 commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Rattlesnakes
This short snippet regarding Carter makes me think there is a story we don't know yet. I may be way off but @Mark Ponyboy Peters typically doesn't waste character dialogue. -
Harlan might be so very well endowed she can overlook other things.
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Excellent chapter with so much happening. Not much left to say after Summerabbacat 's comment. lol I just would like to see Amelia dealt with in as painfully as possible way. Jonathan's mother also needs put into her place too, maybe expose an affair she might be having with Harlan.
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This chapter was great, lots of things going down. I am really glad Juanita is okay and doesn't want Sky worrying about her. Great that Gianni is opening a restaurant BUT I am disappointed you did not include a pic of him. Happy that coming out seems to be going okay for John too. I am quite sure Hector will love the cabin and acreage.
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Two Verbs, Side by Side
dboggs9700 commented on Kevin Snell's story chapter in Two Verbs, Side by Side
I actually saw hope for Julien and Oliver in this chapter. Conversations that Julien actually took Olivers opinions into consideration. I kept expecting Julien to bring up what he feels is Julien's compulsion to manage things and people when Oliver was considering his working future. Julien did not do that for a change, so I see hope for a lasting relationship. -
Enjoyable chapter. The blueberry farm kind of blows my mind because it sounds so possible. I am anxious to see exactly what you are going to show us that Naren / Aster are really capable of.
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The Ghost of October, Part Three of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Ghost of October, Part Three of Three
Great chapter and story! It reminded me of a really good campfire story with allot of clues that let you imagine whatever conclusion you choose. I am just glad that we got to see some happiness for Jason. -
Finally, the moment that we thought would never come. Beautifully written. Great to see the guys give Noah and Jackson the morning to themselves.
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Great chapter. Very happy that Kent is taking the college course and has settled into it well. I hope Kent does agree to be Randy's 'roommate'. They seem to have the maturity to make a real go of it. Getting away from the distractions of living in the barracks will be great both for their relationship but also Kent's studies.
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Chapter 39 ~ After Dixie Mae’s Humiliation ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 39 ~ After Dixie Mae’s Humiliation ~
Unbelievably great chapter. Very relieved that CC and Shir are okay. I hope Reed will be able to deal with his mother and what she did. I am actually surprized that Dixie Mae did not meet the same fate as the villain in the movie "Ghost". -
After being ignored and unforgiven for weeks maybe he believes it is enough now.
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Will 'not often' be enough? I am still not seeing Julien giving that much compared to Oliver. I hope Oliver sees his self-worth is greater than what Julien seems to be able to give him.
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I hope, and I think we all hope that Juanita was not simply acting and that she is dealing well personally with Hector moving in with Brant and Sky. She and Hector knew there might be a risk to their relationship when they discussed him taking the part initially. I hope we all give the story and the situation time to fully unfold completely. Great chapter BTW, KKirk.
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The Ghost of October, Part Two of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Ghost of October, Part Two of Three
The dream seems really unusual, and I am guessing will be relevant at some point to the story. The "scratching at his heart" must hold meaning. I am looking forward to part three to see how the pieces come together. -
It really was fun seeing Ben get a goal. I'm sure it will not inflate his ego.😁
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Congratulations Kevin!!!! Top 10 Most Read Horror in the last month are: The Exception by Kevin Snell Complete
