Umbathri

ya it was a mention of GAs at the end of someones story, who will remain nameless his ego needs no more stroking. Put those links in your stories.

It could be just as evil as a 'cliffhanger' if you think about who all could have been watching that kiss... and I agree TOU is easily my favorite atm, well done! ~Umbathri A mulatto, An albino, A mosquito, My Libido, A denial

never much cared for guns, do have a rifle though its certianly not named. but I have almost a dozen swords so I can feel the sentiment, but no none of them nor my dick are named haha ...unless you count 'im gonna hug him and squeeze him and call him George'

Correct, all you

Quit waiving your turn ya freak, your slowing us down. Since I don

Gotcha cept now you have this second hint quote the rest of us dont =P

Im at a loss as to why you think one of those is vulgar... and another thing is it really necessary? this is hardly a childrens site, or work friendly for that matter. 1... If theres anyone here thats never seen A Clockwork Orange your deprived, at any age... Ill take a Milk-Plus please.

I gave myself two hints !! but I still cant get it =(

Ok ok, I cant remember what #1 is atm, so maybe your statement about it being a give away is not that redeeming? 2 is none other then Zero Effect maybe the others are too busy with the problems of the world to play? ~Umbathri

Ya prison movies can do that to you... for one thing and it doesnt take a detective movie to figure out the second thing ~Umbathri the mask will remain silent for now

Whats easy to say, I liked it. Whats harder to say, what it made me feel, Loneliness. My own interpretation can skew the meaning, but heres what I see. At first glance I see someone with pain, possibly abuse in the past. With a night visitor that scares him, despite the obvious pleasures associated with. First with hesitation then complete submission. But thats not the impression it left me with. Pain and self-deprecation, not necessarily associated with past abuse, but scared of himself? And the longing for something hes tasted before, but has problems admitting thats what he really desires? And Finally this nightly visitor, yes nightly as I see it a recurring event, Is this visitor real or just the symbol of his longing. A fantasy? As I said before Loneliness

Does Nifty even have a forum for their authors to discuss things? cause I never saw one. To be able to talk with the authors about stories and the way their written is valuable to any aspiring author. I came from nifty TO HERE and havent been back yet... odd I guess. As others have said, why not just post your stories in more then one place. Ya post it to the mega giant Nitfy for coverage, then also post it at GA (or some other small community of like minded writers, if your insisting on burning your bridges here). Id hate to think of the very first community like this that I ever had the courage to join, breaking up so soon after. As far as the feedback vrs number of Hits argument.. I dont think Im the only freak out here, theres a LOT of us that are very quite and withdrawn, who may never write in a proper feedback. But just by the number of hits it should be obvious that your stories are being read and appreciated. Is that not enough? ~Umbathri

I expected The Quite Man to be that harder of the 2 quotes... yes it was from 1952. I never planed to make it a habit to quote ancient movies =) but this one had special meaning for me. Nothing like a quite St. Pattys day, dozen or so friends drinking, with home made cornd beef and cabbage, just sit back and watch The Quite Man. Havent done it in several years, but its a fun time. 70's+ sounds fine to me. someone toss a couple mroe out there.

si i hope this doesnt turn into a 2 man war, someone else can get some right? =P

Bah stop your cliffhanger WHINING! As Martha would say.. Its a good thing

all your quotes are belong to us. 1.. "Checking out your new environment? boring isnt it? Disneyland for cows... but human beings?" 2.. "Sir, heres a good stick to beat the lovely lady."

1 tickles my memory but i cant place it 2 would be Bull Durham

I read it carefully the first time and sent in my feedback, which I dont do enough im sure. I scanned it and didnt notice any major changes, and frankly cosmetic editing changes just arnt as important to my reading enjoyment as it seems to be for some. So another post or e-mail didnt seem warrented. As I told Pat befor Im awaiting and plan to read the next chapters. That being said I wish I had more time to read. I havent even read everything written by my 'favorites', so theres many others works out there I havent even sampled yet. Such as yours Cracker, dont quit =\ Ill make sure to read one of your stories in the near future =) ~Umbathri the book is just another mask

well damn man! I can make them harder your turn

Ill keep on with posting 2 quotes I guess, noone else is though =P 1.. "You found your way back here for the same reason I did. We belong here, theres noplace else on earth would take us in." 2.. "Im 106 years old and I still make my own bread. Ive been living right here in Hemingford Home, Nebraska all my life. You come see me Nick, you and all your friends." 2 is prolly too easy, but I dare anyone to get 1. theres also one I posted a while ago noone got yet. ~Umbathri

Hello, youll never sneak a Gladiator quote past me =) I was invited to a very early pre-screening to that movie cause I was part of a Roman war reinactment group, but thats another story. In fact a story Ive been working on most of today, intrestingly enough. Ill come up with another quote in a little bit ~Umbathri :2hands:

Never much cared for Arthur.. and the name Bitterman didnt ring a bell. At least he wast an angry drunk.... And if you want you can post 2 lines to speed the game up a little.

It could possibly have to do with who happeneds to be the moderator of the *cough* Bill Porter Forum... someones been a bad boy? break out the cat o 9

Of course his life is going to get better. You dont actually think that rumor is true that Quinn is going to blow his brains out in chapter 14 do you? I didnt belive it for a second! btw at least one person loved the cliffhanger at the end of chapter 6. Will he throw a fit or will he jump into Jude's arms? or both and in what order? the end of 7 was almost as good. ~Umbathri the bearer of the mask

Correct Mr. Orange, glad someone had a clue, I wasnt about to make that quote any longer. Its hard to forget the commode story. Care to post a couple lines yourself now? ~Umbathri can I be Mr Pink?