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    Chapter 7

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 7

    This is the chapter where we meet Winkler, who will be a huge factor in Granger’s life.
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    Chapter 6

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 6

    The battle scenes are fun to write!
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    Let's see if this works
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    Thanks fit the heads up. You’ll see it again when chapter 87 posts.
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    Jackson Hobart. RIP
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    Chapter 4

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Spoiler: not well
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    RIP Jack Hobart

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in RIP Jack Hobart

    I’m not convinced that at this point it’s Will’s job to do that. Isadore saw Claire make her peace with Will, so she knows the deal.
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    December 25, 2004 Escorial Palo Alto, CA Will Marie and John had gone down to the hospital, while the rest of us had sort of scattered into different groups. Travis and I stood to the back of the room checking everyone out. “I thought about it, and if you want to fuck Paul, I’m good with that.” “I thought about it, and I only want to do that if you’re with me,” I said. “If you’re up for that?” “That could be fun,”
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    Granger as a midshipman
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    My favorite Granger pic so far. 17 year old lieutenant.
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    Lord Byron

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Lord Byron

    I think that the reference to Zeus and Ganymede shows that Byron was playing the part of the novice.
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    A few of Will and Travis. This is fun
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    The Cylinder

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in The Cylinder

    FYI chapters are consistently between 4000-5000 words
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    The Cylinder

    Mark Arbour posted new chapter in The Freshmen

    December 24, 2004 Palo Alto, CA Brad I sat in the limo facing forward, with Claire sitting next to me. Jessica was across from me while John was looking at Claire. I had never seen Claire lose it like this. I had basically led her out of the house and to the car, totally directing her. I had to make sure she didn’t bump into something. I had originally thought that her going to the hospital was a bad idea, but I changed my mind and decided
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    I used Chat GPt. It’s super easy. Try it.
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    The two phases of Brad.
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    The Right Honorable George Granger, 1st Earl of Brentwood, Knight of the Bath, Holder of the Order of Charles III of Spain, and Knight of the Crescent in full regalia
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    Will
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    You've AI'd all of them?
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    Calvert before his Knighthood
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    Sir Francis Calvert
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    Sir Francis Calvert as one of His Britannic Majesty's equerries
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    George Granger
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    Chapter 10

    Mark Arbour commented on andy cannon's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Thanks for that clarification. And it goes perfectly with the story, because the first lieutenant was almost always sent off in command of a sizable prize. I can’t help but wondering what would have happened if Vane was the senior.
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    Well Mr. Cannon, it seems that you have impertinently walked onto my turf. I claim that turf based on seniority, which was the main measure in His Britannic Majesty’s navy during the Napoleonic Wars. 😃That would have been annoying if you had not done such a good job of it. I’m thoroughly enjoying the story. Keep up the good work. 👐
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