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George Granger
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Thanks for that clarification. And it goes perfectly with the story, because the first lieutenant was almost always sent off in command of a sizable prize. I can’t help but wondering what would have happened if Vane was the senior.
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Well Mr. Cannon, it seems that you have impertinently walked onto my turf. I claim that turf based on seniority, which was the main measure in His Britannic Majesty’s navy during the Napoleonic Wars. 😃That would have been annoying if you had not done such a good job of it. I’m thoroughly enjoying the story. Keep up the good work. 👐
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I am thoroughly enjoying this story! I have a question. What is the order of seniority for the lieutenants and midshipmen?
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All I see are question marks
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To fuck him you must not. Just feel the force. 😃
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I asked AI to create a picture of Travis. This is what it came up with. I'd fuck this dude.
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December 20, 1801 Brentwood, UK Cavendish had been in an unpleasant mood for the past few days, and Granger had been unable to figure out why. Rather than badger his friend about the core reason, he had invited Cavendish to join him as he toured around his property, hoping that the fresh, albeit cold weather would help him transform his outlook. “I am impressed with how well you ride,” Granger said to Cavendish as they trotted through one of the little villages whe
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The sharks in the Bay don’t bite humans, but that coyote might.
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I always found Coto to be incredibly nouveau riche
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First, we don’t hear about the others because Jeremy is narrating and he’s a bit (!) self absorbed. As for money, to quote Tonto, that’s chump change. 😃
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Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
Yeah, that would have been nice. I think though, based on who was contemplating fucking Finn, that was more likely to be Travis’s job. We can’t see his thoughts. -
December 24, 2004 Escorial Palo Alto, CA Jeremy It was Christmas Eve, and everyone was trying to be upbeat but was failing miserably. My father, Jake, and Travis were focused on this Serbian mobster stuff while John, Marie, and Claire were obsessing about Jack. Grandmaman spent most of her time glaring at Will, while Will, Darius, Travis, Kris, and I were stuck trying to enjoy Christmas. It figures they’d let all this shit
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Chapter 82 is Approved - To be published: 09/13/2025 12:27:00 PM Chapter 83 is Approved - To be published: 09/20/2025 12:27:00 PM Chapter 84 is Approved - To be published: 10/04/2025 12:27:00 PM
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Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
Your scenario for the growth of the business is plausible. We are left to assume Jack is an only child. -
Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
Good insights. FYI: Jack comes from a wealthy family. They made their money owning grocery stores. -
Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
I love that Talking Heads song…it’s in the movie Wall Street. -
Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
I would posit that most pot smoking Malibu beach kids haven’t been through what Will and Travis have. -
Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Jeremy, Jack, and the Mob
In my experience, that’s almost the definition of a relationship. 😃- 33 comments
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December 7, 2004 Masa Restaurant New York, NY Jeremy I walked into Masa, smiling broadly because I really liked this place. Masa had no formal dress code, but patrons dressed in refined, understated elegance out of respect for the environment and the experience. The atmosphere was quiet, Zen-like, and focused entirely on the food, not fashion. It was omakase-style, so I hoped Kris was into whatever the chef was cooking. “Is Tra
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Why does he need to do anything? He’s at a good place right now. I don’t think he wants something that will be a job, and he definitely won’t want to become more normal. He’d see that as slumming.
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odyssey - Word of the Day - Sun Aug 31, 2025
Mark Arbour commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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I may have my characters kidnapped, raped, and killed, but that’s beyond the pale. Can you honestly see Jeremy working with people to redo their homes where he doesn’t have complete control.😂
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December 4, 2004 Manhattan Beach, CA Will We were in bed, just lying there chilling, trying to let go of all the negative emotions that we’d been hit with today. It was working for me, but not for Travis. Travis needed to do something. The easiest thing to do would be to fuck him, but I wasn’t really in the mood for that, and I doubted that he was either. I pondered that, then got inspired. “You know, it’s still pretty early,” I said. He l
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I really appreciate all the comments you all post. Thanks!
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