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December 14, 1801 Portland Place London, UK “I do not think I can express how happy I am that you are home,” Carmella said, as they lay in his bed enjoying their post-coital afterglow. “I am glad to be home as well,” he said, and gave her a sweet kiss. “I was worried that all of the charming Parisian women would convince you to stay in France,” she said, pouting. “I did not sleep with any French women the last time I was in Paris, and I did
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Time to vote!
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I’m not a fan of all the em-dashes.
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Perhaps, although I think Robbie took just as big of a hit.
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I really liked this story. The character development is excellent, and I love the twist at the end. I was thinking that Kyle was a good and devoted friend, then in the blink of an eye, he turns into a psycho.
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Here’s a hint: I never write anything that’s less than 5000ish words
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November 28, 2004 on approach New York City, NY Will “It’s going to suck, not having you around,” Travis said in a playful way, trying to take the sting out of our upcoming separation. “I’m going to miss you,” I told him candidly, then leaned over and gave him a sweet kiss, not a passionate one. “Even though you stole Ramon away from me.” “Dude, can you blame him? I am so much hotter,” he joked
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Now’s your chance to redeem yourself. 😃
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Stef doesn’t exercise. In Black Widow JP was giving him shit about it. Wyoming was indeed commercial.
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You are right. I’m not a skier. There is no way in hell that Stef would ski.
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Good luck!
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I posted a Secret Author Story. You can find them here. Guess which one I wrote.
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Tim, an honor student from Los Gatos, grapples with heartbreak and self-reflection after being ghosted by Thet, a closeted blue-collar guy from South St. Louis. As Tim wrestles with anger and confusion, a dinner with his grandmother leads to a powerful coming-out moment. Their heartfelt exchange helps Tim process past trauma with his father and recognize the secrecy and pain others around him carry. When he later spots Thet out with a girl, he sees through the act—and instead of lashing out, reaches out with unexpected compassion, hoping Thet will one day accept who he is.
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One wonders if an absolutely gorgeous man walked into such a setting if the gay men in the room would be calm, demure, and not fall all over each other in an effort to fuck him.
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If memory serves, Jack is a year older than Claire
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November 25, 2004 (Thanksgiving Day) Escorial Palo Alto, CA Will It seemed like this dinner would never end. Fortunately all of the drama was across the table from me, so at least I had a good view. Ryan sat in his seat pretty much by himself, interacting with no one. I had thought that he’d spend most of his time talking to Amber, but he’d been totally cock-blocked by my Uncle Jack. Jack and Amber were ha
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https://youtu.be/d-xvd6We49A?si=ExC_J430d-WB_zme
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Every time I read this chapter I smiled at that. I amuse myself. 😂
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I can totally see him as Darius
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November 25, 2004 (Thanksgiving Day) Escorial Palo Alto, CA Will Travis, Kris, and I sat on the patio enjoying some pre-dinner cocktails. Jeremy was presumably still getting ready, Ryan was probably fucking Marie, and John was soon to arrive from home. Zach, Frank, my father, and Jake were in the television room watching the football game, while Taylor was in there pretending to be interested. I hadn’t seen
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November 24, 2004 Teterboro Airport Teterboro, NJ Jeremy The Falcon taxied smoothly up to the FBO, and as soon as the wheel chocks were in place and the stairs descended, the Maybach zipped out onto the tarmac and parked next to the red carpet. The ground crew had placed that at the bottom of the stairs to make flying on the Falcon even classier. “How did you convince her to pick us up last?” Kris asked.
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The Freshmen posting timeline: July 2025
Mark Arbour posted a topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Topics
I thought I'd brief you on what's coming up over the next few weeks. First of all, the story really has two arcs: building the story and drama. We've had a lot of building in these chapters, and not much drama. That will change, but not until Chapter 73. Here's the posting schedule: Chapter 72: July 11 Chapter 73: July 14 (Bastille Day) Chapter 74: July 18. After that we'll be back on our weekly schedule as long as I can keep up.- 2 replies
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In the last book, Travis said he was leaving his money for any kids Big or Taylor had with Will as the trustee
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Thanks. Fixed.
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November 24, 2004 In the Air Central California Brad “Guy Fellowes is a member of a Serbian crime family?” Travis asked, slightly outraged. I’d been around him enough to know that sometimes he flew off the handle just a bit. I also knew that I could rely on Will to calm him down, which Will did just by holding his hand. Will had been in love before, most notably with Zach, but I had never seen him as deeply committed to someo
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