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  1. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 28

    Thank you so much! Brad's manipulative side has a silver lining, in that he's able to find that compromise and move beyond a set position. He's been the peacemaker in this whole deal.
  2. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 28

    Thanks for the review! I think it's way too early for Marc and Brad to be paired off to live happily ever after, but for now, they make each other happy.
  3. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 28

    November 3, 2002 Tribeca, NYC Brad I looked at the clock and it was 6:00am. I hadn’t slept at all. We’d fucked, then just lain there and talked, and then we’d fucked again. “I don’t think I have any fluids left in my body,” he said. “Good,” I told him. “So what time are you guys leaving?” It was sweet to hear the disappointment in his voice, but I wasn’t any happier about it. “If I had my choice, I’d stay
  4. I think the younger dude is hotter. He should be bringing in more cash.
  5. Just as an FYI, Marc seemed nervous when Brad first mentioned the play, so it's reasonable to assume David had been planning to go.
  6. Happy belated birthday!
  7. Happy Birthday!!
  8. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 27

    Very good points Maarten. Brad is much more balanced, and he's finding his groove, but the verdict is still out on Marc.
  9. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 27

    I totally agree with you. Like I said in a review below, the problem with Cam is his stage in life, as you noted. He's in the "exiting college" phase. That's young, mentally.
  10. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 27

    The thing that has to be weirding Brad out is how quickly he connected with Marc. He's got to be gun shy after Ben, Sean, and even more...Cam.
  11. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 27

    I had actually thought that Flux would see him hit his dating stride, but it took longer than I planned.
  12. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 27

    That's a really good synopsis. I'm not sure that Marc is starving and struggling, since his art cost a shitload of money. I think with Cam it's not so much his age as his stage in life. If he had a couple more years, it may work.
  13. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 27

    LOL
  14. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 27

    I think that the shared tragedy is merely a backdrop. I think they are linked much more by a mutual appreciation of art, whether it be Marc's body or Marc's painting. ;-)
  15. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 27

    I liked the way Marc did that. It was smooth, direct, and sexy.
  16. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 27

    As if I would create someone good only to ultimately trash him. Right.
  17. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 27

    With Stef, he feels remorse, it's just shielded by his pride. He doesn't want to admit that he was wrong, but he'll eventually figure it out. He's getting bitchier as he gets older, kind of like his author. ;-) Hammer was basically taken as an alternate, so they probably won't be impacted if he doesn't make it to Australia.
  18. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 27

    You always give me crap about short chapters, when they're all damn near the same length. I choose to take it as a compliment, in that you just want more, so thank you. (Big smile)
  19. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 27

    To good to be true? Well, no one is perfect, not even Marc. :-) But it does make sense that Brad and an artist would be simpatico.
  20. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 27

    Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
  21. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 27

    November 2, 2002 Tribeca, NYC Brad It was 5:50, and I was so agitated I couldn’t hide it. Stef sat there, smirking at me, but I was so keyed up, I ignored him. “You look very nice,” he said, which was encouraging. “Do I look forty?” I asked, being bitchy. “You do not,” he said firmly. “As soon as I notice you aging, we will rush you in for some reparative surgery.” “We’ll see about that,” I said. I hadn’t em
  22. I think Heather Locklear is too cute, and her boobs are too big, to be Elizabeth. I'm thinking more along the lines of Meryl Streep in Devil Wears Prada.
  23. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 25

    You're welcome! I'm glad you liked it!
  24. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 25

    Thank you so much! I think that it is not just that Granger is smart, it is that he is experienced. He's served the bulk of his career in the Mediterranean, so he knows the dangers of that sea, and he's intimately aware of the pirate threat. Still, the pirates through him for a loop with their maneuver, pretending to put the bulk of their effort into Antares, then shifting to Valiant at the last minute. We'll have to see how badly Eastwyck was wounded, and the nature of the wound.
  25. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 25

    Thank you, Maarten! We are on our way to Palermo, then once we leave Palermo, Lord Elgin can begin to assert his authority.
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