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  1. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 22

    Thanks for the review, and you make an excellent point! JJ needs to show that he's not completely dependent on Alex. I think Wade's epiphany about his mother may help him deal with her better in the future. It's a tribute to what an honorable guy he is that this never even crossed his mind before.
  2. Well said. I have some personal experience in this area, having grown up in the Golden State yet suffering a transplant inland. There are words and idioms that do not go away, despite the influence of the others around me. I think the language you grow up with is strongly rooted in your ultimate diction. I also found, when I moved to the Midwest, that because I was a Californian, and because California is way cooler than Missouri, it made me more interesting and unique. I think, as you noted, JJ would thrive on that. Blending in is not one of his traits.
  3. Sorry for the delays everyone. It could be worse..you could be waiting for a chapter with Granger. Busy times.
  4. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 22

    An interesting thing about Alex is that he really does follow the rules, but sometimes the rules don't fill in the gray area of what is and isn't decent. He and JJ have no formal commitment...they're just dating...so he's free to fuck Mary Ellen if he wants to.
  5. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 22

    I think JJ will only be upset if Alex ignores him. He can understand that it's tough for Alex to fly cross-country on a weekend, and he can also understand Alex's passion for riding.
  6. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 22

    I think a trip from Boston to Charlottesville (600 miles) on a private plane is a lot different than a trip to Spokane (2800 miles) on a commercial flight (probably a good 10 hour trip).
  7. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 22

    October 22, 2002 Simoni Ice Rink Boston, MA Wade “I can’t believe you got another GMC,” I said, giving Matt shit as we drove into the ice rink parking lot. He’d just picked it up today. “Dude, this thing rocks,” he insisted. It was a GMC Yukon Denali, almost exactly like the one he’d had in Paly. “They were completely redesigned a couple of years ago.” “I figured you’d go for something else, just to try something different,” I said. I w
  8. Happy Birthday!!
  9. Happy Birthday
  10. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 21

    October 12, 2002 University of California, Berkeley Zach “Assholes,” Arturo said. “I’ll show them what small feels like.” “You going to fuck them?” Gehrlich joked, cracking us up. “Fuck you,” Arturo said. He was all pissed off because the press had been making a big deal about this matchup, which was the biggest one all year. This one was even bigger than the game in Honolulu. Today we were playing the Long Beach Poly Jackrab
  11. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 20

    Should an atheist post a chapter on Halloween? What are the implications? Sigh.
  12. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 20

    You're probably right about JJ, but you and I both know that really successful athletes don't work that way. The drive to succeed is too strong. LMAO at your visual of "Stef" at Whole Foods.
  13. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 20

    Thanks. Like I said, there's a relatively thick layer of asshole beneath JJ's surface, but there's a more caring, feeling person beyond that.
  14. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 20

    Thanks! So much happiness. So much happiness.
  15. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 20

    Thanks Miles. These brothers are so different, they're bound to bring some fun to the table.
  16. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 20

    Great observations. I think you're right that JJ is in love, such that he can be. I think that Cam and Brad are good for each other right now, and I think they'll be good for each other in the future, although in what capacity I still don't know.
  17. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 20

    Thanks Maarten! I think that Alex and Will bonding a bit is a good thing. It's hard to be in a relationship if no one likes the guy you're with, or no one knows him.
  18. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 20

    JJ is used to getting what he wants, and he wants Alex, so he'll do what he has to. I think that JJ is pretty much as you noted, and a rather cold fish, until you dig a little deeper. It's as if there's this layer of asshole you have to dig beneath.
  19. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 20

    LOL. I think a woman scorned is nothing compared to JJ.
  20. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 20

    I think it's a good idea for both of them to build ties. For Alex, he needs to convince the family that he's not scum, and for Will, he needs a link to Alex so he can be comfortable with JJ and Alex as a couple.
  21. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 20

    October 4, 2002 Chicago Brad The plane landed smoothly at Meigs Field, but even though the landing was easy, the roar of the engines and the braking action that thrust my body forward woke me up. I blinked and wiped my eyes, then looked over at Will and Darius, who were doing the same thing. “Nice nap,” Darius said. “Some of us used our time more productively,” Stef said, as he put away his papers. “I was productive,” Will said.
  22. Rest in peace, Jack.
  23. I haven't had time to work on much of anything, but I've maybe got a fourth of the next chapter done, so it will be a while. Sorry everyone.
  24. Mark Arbour

    Chapter 19

    Hopefully you'll like the next chapter. I hope it's a good roller coaster...the kind that makes you laugh and not the kind that makes you puke. :-)
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