Actually, I think what you got was an update. I neglected to list Sharon as the editor of Poor Man's Son so I fixed that oversight, before she decided to smite me.
That's one of the mildly annoying problems with the updating system. If you change a story to correct something like that, or to edit the description, or if you make changes/corrections to a chapter, a notification goes out. I've had to 'unlike' some authors that I like simply because they fiddle with their chapter after they post them and I end up getting a cavalcade of e-mails. I try not to do that to you guys, but we're all fallible.
The last part of "The Box" wouldn't have been there if not for Sharon. She's the one who told me it needed a better ending, with closure for Stef. She was right.
I think Brad covered his tracks pretty well with Brian. Think about how that would look, especially in 2000: Gay guy gets killed by his random sex partner. Who would give a shit?
I'm so glad you liked it! Blanche wasn't captured, she was just out of range, and thus of no help during the battle. Not that it would have mattered when the Spanish have a 112 gun ship.
Couple of things: First of all, this is largely the Hendrickson's trying to scare Gathan away. They have limited legal grounds here. Second, the meeting isn't over yet. ;-)
July 29, 2000
Rome, Italy
Will
The six of us sat in the limousine, trying to be happy that we were leaving and going home, but in reality, none of us were. JP and Stef didn’t want to go back to face his surgery. Darius and Ella were in heaven here, alone in their own world. We’d be going to Claremont on our way home and dropping off Ella, and then they’d be separated, so they were dealing with that. And finally, Berto and I didn’t want to leave each other.
“I feel so
I think that each parent sort of migrated toward a favorite child. Just because Brad picked Will doesn't make him a bad father. If that's the criteria, they all suck at it.
I'm not sure if you wanted to hear my opinion, but what the f**k.
I'll have to think about this one, but off the top of my head, I like:
1. When Robbie went swimming in the bay. (Be Rad)
2. When JP asks Stef to grow old with him (If it Fits)
3. Matt's first meeting with Robbie. (Bloodlines)
4. Robbie's Fettuccini feast. (Millennium)
Absolutely. In 2000, ultrasounds could make a mistake, especially when looking for a penis. .....Now there's a good job for a gay guy: looking at ultrasounds, trying to find the penis.
I think the bigger issue here is one that has already been raised, and that is the issue of videotaping in general. Did someone tape this? Will it show up again?
And no one besides Jeremy has ventured a guess as to who will bring up the possibility of cameras to Will.
Commanding a flag ship can't be an easy job. I'm convinced I, personally, lack the necessary diplomacy to do so.
Sadly, my friend, the drama in London will have to wait. Communication takes a long time in the 1790s.
Just so you don't think I'm this creative, much of what you've seen in the last two chapters is an adaptation of real history. In this case, I have substituted HMS Belvidera for HMS Minerve, which was captained by George Cockburn. You may recognize his name: as an Admiral, he commanded the fleet that burned Washington DC in 1814.
Here's a link to an article on the battle that Minerve fought with Sabina.
December 20, 1796
Dawn broke to find them alone on the sea. “Mr. Clifton, you may secure from action,” Granger ordered.
“Aye aye sir,” Clifton said dutifully, and then began rapping out the orders that would restore Belvidera to her normal state. The cabins would be re-partitioned, and the furniture, fittings, and livestock would all return to their normal locations.
Belvidera thrashed along to the northeast with her captured consort in tow, seemingly ob