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    Chapter 37

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 37

    Perhaps, but then again, they aren’t Princes of Malibu. For the record, I’m a huge Domluka fan, so comparisons to him are a compliment, even if he wins. 😀
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    Chapter 34

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    When you got your Myers-Briggs score, the last letter was a J.
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    Chapter 26

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 26

    1. You had a mule? A dang mule?😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 2. Duh.
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    Chapter 33

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 33

    Lol. I read your comment, then smiled, sat back, and waited.
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    Chapter 77

    Mark Arbour posted new chapter in Gap Year

    March 12, 2004 The Bob Hope Airport Burbank, CA Will “Holy shit,” Crawford said, as we got out of the limo and stood at the stairs of Stef’s Airbus. “We’re flying on this?” “We are,” I said. I paused to sign off on the receipt for the limo, then greeted the co-pilot, who was focused on stowing our bags. “Come on,” I said to my three traveling companions. I led the way up the stairs, and the first person I saw when I walked into the cabin was Marie. “He
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    Chapter 8

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 8

    I’m so glad! Thanks!
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    Chapter 22

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 22

    Multiple endings to go with multiple orgasms. 😀
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    Chapter 20

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 20

    Amazing how we change as we get old..er. 😃
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    Careers

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    Ok, I really think you could have retroed this in 😃 I
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    Engagement

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    It's what was expected.
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    The Trial

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in The Trial

    Great picks! I wasn't a fan of "Major Tom" but it works perfectly there!
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    Thanks! You can tell which chapters were most edited by the word count. The average was 5000 before edits.
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    Conjugal Visits

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Conjugal Visits

    No, that’s Max.
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    Chapter 17

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 17

    The family wasn’t aware of it, so I think their disapproval was conjecture at this point, although I can’t see how they would be okay with it if Matt isn’t okay with it.
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    Chapter 13

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 13

    That’s possible but Matt probably hadn’t figured that out and I opted not to dive into NCAA eligibility rules.
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    Thanks! Let me know what you think. Chapter comments are always welcome.
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    Chapter 11

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 11

    There’s a blast from my past: Trader Vic’s!
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    This was the Ricky Nelson photo I visualized for JP And this was the Tony Dow pic for Robbie
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    I’m thinking a young Montgomery Clift, only with strawberry blonde hair, for Stefan.
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    So not Brad.
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    Not that cute, but cute. He’s actually a very good pick, just make him uglier.
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    With @impunity’s help, the rewrite of Man In Motion is complete. The last ten chapters were significantly enhanced, and I added a new chapter with more detail on Will’s birth.
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    Chapter 3

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 3

    That’s the conventional wisdom, but it’s not entirely accurate. Beating an index has a lot to do with which index (market) it is.
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    Prison

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Prison

    Some great picks here! I especially like the Tina Turner tribute.
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    The Super Bowl

    Mark Arbour commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in The Super Bowl

    I’m writing a new story to replace “A Summer Love” (it will be incorporated into the new story) Because I skipped some major events and because I think Tonto deserves a funeral.
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