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Chapter 1: Write It In The Sky
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 1: Write It In The Sky
Lmao well thank you! I love writing the drama, it's fun and it's the best and you are right, haven't met all the characters yet, there will be more in the coming chapters, so hopefully you will stay tuned! -
Chapter 1: Write It In The Sky
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 1: Write It In The Sky
First of all, thank you so much for the feedback, it is very much appreciated and I am glad you like the story. First, I never really said how Kane and Liam knew, simply because it was nothing more than the foundation of the plot that begins the story. It could be said that they saw him taking his medicine? Or maybe he dropped it in the hall, or maybe they just wanted to beat him up and rob him for money and discovered the medications. Anything is possible regarding that issue. And yes, I know Xyrem is the pharmaceutical label, again this was another plot element that wasn't witnessed during the time when Emry and Merit first met. As for how Kane and Liam knew what it was, they didn't, but they stole it anyway in the hopes of it being something good. Also, Emry is a freshman, and yes teachers were aware of his conditions being why he doesn't take gym. It could be said that the teachers thought he was off his meds, and that could be why the teachers got upset. So there is a lot of room to speculate on many things during this part of the story, it's vague, I will admit without explanations. His doctor did what she did, discussing his illness, because it was true and because she didn't want anything bad to happen to him, also the Investigator had his doubts to begin with but he had to go by the evidence. And later you will find out why his mother wasn't present when you learn what kind of person she is. There is a lot of deviating from proper procedure clearly and I am glad you pointed these things out to me and that you still enjoy the story, as for who this Investigator is, well lets just say not going by procedure is going to get him in big trouble! Lol, thank you again for the review and the next chapter will be posted next week. -
What a bad situation it had turned out to be, though Emry found himself reacting rather oddly to the whole thing as he sat there in the interrogation room, listening to all the commotion outside from two frantic parents, or maybe it was just the frantic mother and the angry father. His eyes drifted down towards the table and they fluttered, he wasn't sure how much time had gone by, however the Investigator and his hardcore questioning had almost drained him of any little energy that he had.
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A narcoleptic, epileptic, and out casted teen, starts high school off with a bang. He gets thrown into the life of Merit, a popular senior with a secret of his own and from there, a possible relationship gets shaken up by their peers and the drama that surrounds them all. Through it all though, he just wants someone to see him, truly see him because often in high school, teenagers don't truly see each other or their inner truths, they just take what is right in front of their eyes.
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I have one sci fi story if you're still looking. Defied Reality
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Chapter 11: Smoke And Mirrors
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 11: Smoke And Mirrors
Hahahahaha I know that was a weird ending, but it was a fun one lmao. -
Aries' eyebrows lifted as he stared at Chris. Chris stared at Aries and then a sigh escaped and his hand fell to his side, leaving the gun. "I guess I should just tell you." He walked over to the couch, contemplating on sitting down and then decided against getting comfortable. "Tell me what?" Chris turned back towards Aries. "The truth, then it will all make sense to you." He looked up when Gemini walked in. "Oh hey." Gemini smiled. "Who's this? Fan from the concert? Stalk us home?" He
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Chapter 10: Dare To Be Fearless
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 10: Dare To Be Fearless
Lol won't have to wait long! -
Aries paced the front porch, the phone pressed to his ear. "So..uh, Jay...do you ever...see or watch Worth?" "Worth? Well...he interrogated me, asking me all these questions about you, trying to figure out where you're at, hell, you won't even tell me where you are." "Well, as they say, the truth never comes out if you don't tell it." Aries sat on the thick brick ledge that surrounded the porch. "Well, he got really intense, at least until Sage came along and got really intense with him."
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Lol this is going to be a really fucked up story I have a feeling, lmao! But yep, that was the break up, at least he told the truth. As for songs, I'll just say Aries sings very different music in comparison to Shane, but then we're in that stage of music these days, you'll see. Thanks for the feedback, posting again soon!
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Riley walked into his room and shut the door behind Aries. "So...this is my room, I guess we'll be sharing..." He trailed off. Aries looked around, seeing a bed, Riley's computer desk next to it, some posters of wrestlers, mostly The Undertaker, other than that, his room was a little messy with clothes thrown about, there was a dresser and similar dark themed little decorations and other things on the top of it. he didn't seem to mind it. "It's okay." "Wait a minute." Riley looked at Aries.
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And there will be more soon. I will say this much, sometimes desperation will drive a person to do some desperate things.
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Lol and I love writing the drama! It's always so much fun!
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"Okay!" Mr. Braden clapped his hands together to get everyones attention as they gathered with their partners at the main area. "Now, I know most of you have heard rumors that this trip is a survival course...well, that's just something I've told for years to get the funding. You know I like all of my students and I think they deserve a fun trip. So truth be told, this trip is all about fun and leisure, a big, fat, do what you want, vacation!" Worth closed his eyes. "Oh no...now I'll have to s
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Chapter 7: Covert Personal Affairs
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 7: Covert Personal Affairs
Lol trouble, definitely so! Aries or rather Shane's influence or maybe it actually is Aries (Kind of the point not to know, the characters just try to figure it out for themselves) might have very good reason to fear. And yeah the student teacher set up could go very bad quite possibly, Aries makes very fine points when he makes his comparisons and it does kind of seem like as the story goes along that he ends up understanding things far more than Ian does. Kind of interesting now that I think about it. More to come soon! Thanks for the feed back! -
Aries smiled, sitting on the bed, his old lamp from the trailer mounted on the wall above the night stand on his side and twisted to light up the area around him. "So, as you can all see, the rooms different. I kinda demolished it and did a total demo." He laughed. "No, really what I did was...like The Jefferson's, I moved on up!" He nodded. "Thanks to two people who I heard called Ian's phone." He grinned. "Gave his wife all the info she needed to find me. Are you two in here?" Aries' eyes wi
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Chapter 6: Dirty And Cheap
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 6: Dirty And Cheap
Amber just might have some psychological issues, it seems like at first she is so angry and now I think she is unwilling to completely let go and if friendship is all that she can get, maybe that is what she will take, maybe shes that desperate enough. It's also possible that shes good at compartmentalization or does it without realizing. A heart attack? Hmm, that is interesting. As for the money? Could of been lying about not spending any of it too, though we'll have to see if there is any more money stashed somewhere! As for the creepy guy...he's still being creepy! > -
Chapter 6: Dirty And Cheap
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 6: Dirty And Cheap
I plan to! Thanks a lot! -
Aries walked up to the school from where Ian dropped him off about a block away, a plan agreed to by both of them, for the moment. He headed around the buses and then he suddenly felt someone's hands on his shoulders and he gasped, spinning around. "You're jumpy!" Jay laughed. "Where have you been?" "Oh, skipping a little too much, I guess." Aries sighed in relief. "I can't blame you for that." He threw an arm across Aries shoulders, walking into the school. "I've been mega bored! Between
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Thank you! There is more to come and I'll be posting another chapter soon. I have this story completed and I'm working on my next one. I had a second story wrote six chapters in and then decided to scrap it. I've been having a lot of issues with ideas and stuff lately. So I've decided to write another one with hopes that I don't get wishy washy about it. I like to keep my stories rolling out one after the other if I can, though don't be surprised if there is a hiatus period once I've completed posting of this story, I hope that isn't the case, but I think I'm going into a struggle period, bound to happen given how much I write and put out, but I'm determined to work my way through it. Will post again soon!
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Lol that is for sure! Well, when you are someone like Aries and you decide to become an "internet" celebrity, at least in the sense of "small time" he is bound to meet some creepy people like Riley's dad. As for Keith, well that is just an unfortunate circumstance due to his sad excuse for a mother. More to come soon!
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Scary ride? Hmm, maybe! Lol for a little bit. This story has a little bit of everything. Horror, Action, Drama, I think a little bit of it all. Though through all of it, deep down, the story is really just about a kid with a lot of psychological issues who gets caught up in a lot of trouble. Thing about this story is to stick it out and see where he ends up because through all the thrills and the trauma, it's the results and the consequences of it all that the story is really all about. That is why the prologue is there like it is, you have to find out what leads to that and more importantly...what the prologue actually is, violent for sure, but how do they get there? Why? And who? Aside from Jaemin and Miracle, of course. And what happens after? I will leave you with this little spoiler. The ending, it's the type of ending where...you can accept that as the stories ending, or you can go on to read the sequel, which you can find in my story list. As for the Australia bit, I hope that is not the only thing that draws you in, as you go into it, I hope you are drawn in further. Australia really doesn't play a huge role in the story, it was more of an accessory to the character, a place of origin and a way to give him a really hot accent. I love Aussie accents!
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"Where are you at?! They said you didn't show up at school, have been absent for two days! Then you come home last night, woke Keith up, he said you were arguing on the phone! Then you leave this morning, and you keep stealing my cigarettes, you aren't even supposed to be smoking!" "Mom, chill out!" Aries screamed into his phone. "You want to know what I'm doing? You want to know what I'm doing?! I've spent the past two days prostituting to get drugs and alcohol for you and Keith!" Ian spun
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Chapter 4: Crashing In The Moment
x Trevor x commented on x Trevor x's story chapter in Chapter 4: Crashing In The Moment
Yeah, Riley's dad being a creep is for sure, right away. And definitely still rocky with Aries and Ian, though probably more so for Aries. In the past life for Aries? Shane was a decently well known singer, not highly famous, he had only gotten into the industry for three years before he killed himself into Aries. Thanks for reading, will post again soon! -
Sage stood outside the Gym, in the large trophy area and grabbed Aries by the arm. "Hey." "What?" Aries turned around. "Where were you yesterday?" She asked. "Solving Mr. O'Ryan's past life murder, if or when you hear that Adam O'Kane's murder has been solved, I did it." He grinned. "And just how did you do that?" Her eyes widened and she crossed her arms, a plastic shopping bag in her hand. "To them...I'm Shane...an angel, sent from Jesus Christ to urge them to confess, to save them f
