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Haha, Ashley has to be bad. It may or may not happen in real life for someone to convert sexualities, but in my head, I just can't see it happening without some sort of scheme or set up behind it, especially for Sterling. Sure, Miracle really burned him and messed him up, but I don't think to a point where he would do something this drastic, not willingly. In fact, if you caught it. Skylar left a big clue concerning this very situation. I didn't even think about it at first but as I looked back, I came to the realization of it. Glad you are loving the story. I am nervous as it is approaching the moment of prologue and I am not sure whether to continue after that. Of course I plan a conclusion chapter but if I kept going it would mostly be about recover, emotions, mentality, psychology and the such. There wouldn't be that much action and adventure anymore. (Just a small but necessary spoiler as I look for my readers guidance as to whether or not to continue the story instead of posting a conclusion chapter.)

Miracle and Jaemin headed down the hall, woke up early by all the noise. Miracle walked into the living room and his eyes widened, seeing the fireplace being destroyed. "You're really doing it?" Miracle looked up and then briefly glanced at the camera man. "Yep! I told you I was!" Erica grinned. "Martha would freak at this mess." Jaemin said. "I know, it's why I'm taking pictures and sending them to prison for her." Erica laughed, taking a few more shots. "She can hang them on her wall!

Oh lol no, of course not! I don't mind at all that you review from this point of the story since you read so early on. And I respect and appreciate the detailed views that you give me, it gives me a lot to think about. Yes in this chapter, there is an obvious time jump. Brad is basically tended to be a prop character which is why a build up was never used between him and Miracle, which may or may not have been a mistake in writing a good story but it was more tended to again exemplify Miracle's issue altogether which comes out during the scene between Miracle and Sterling's exchange in his room which is where it really comes out and between this chapter and the next is where you have to really look close for a borderline symptoms of the I love you/I hate You/Don't Leave me, gets really shown just by the few gestures Brad has and will make. Of course it's not just the borderline at play here but Miracle's delusional sense of what love is supposed to be and what he wants terribly, to the point that he will throw all things aside at this point just to have it. As for the promiscuity, that definitely comes out in later chapters, that is a very deep part of him, something very internal, a twist of his mind in a way but it makes things so much clearer as to why he thinks the way he does and acts the way he acts but he does want nothing more than that monogamous dream relationship, thing is that even he, himself, might not even let himself half it. (Little teaser lol) As for Hunter's reaction to the blackmail, it was very passive. See, this is what I spoke of in my last response about the counselor questioning him about his last teacher. He had the evidence to put the man away and he didn't use it. His whole family knows about it, he got expelled for it, his parents are passive one way or another about it, but for Hunter it was validation. So he doesn't understand why Miracle let that happen so it's like a mess. What kind of mess did you get yourself into. (Another teaser) A confrontation will come up in the future and those answers will come out. It wasn't intended to be an easy routine, it was just a drama that I wanted to save for another time. I like to pace my outbursts, at least in the earlier chapters. But no, I don't mind your thoughts at all! I enjoy reading them! So please, don't mind sharing, they give me different aspects and outlooks on the story and I like thinking about that. Thank you!

Oh, they will really get out of control lol. Miracle as a character though, he is out of control, just wait though, wait and see. As for detail about the emotion, I feel like it has to be there, the storyline, while it might or it might not come off to people as rather sex related, in all reality it's much more about emotions and the psychological aspects of his character. Though as the story goes on, there will be more dialogue, I can tell you that much. As for the scene between the counselor and Miracle's immediate suspicion, it was an impulsive, even if silent response, a little bit of paranoia, but of course this is way before digging into his psyche and his diagnosis. She also questioned him about Australia right off the bat too, which was hostile to him enough as it was as people in her position, school staff, didn't believe in him despite the fact that he could of made them (With reasons I can't reveal or it will be a spoiler.) Though you're correct, now that I think of it, I do wish I had given that angle a bit more time than I had. And yes, I know the flashback that you speak of and it should have been used more as a dream than a flash back in transitioning, I think in my mind at the time, it felt very cosmetic with me with how I ended it, calling it a dream and then having him wake up. And thank you! I often get confused on how to handle my sex scenes in my stories. To me they are really only features to the main issue of the story, part of the overall problem so they don't become my main focus, I do it enough, when I have to, when I think the time calls for it and for how long and I really always struggle to avoid the pornographic way of writing it. Honestly, I don't feel like as a writer, if you can't write it without being repetitive through the scene then you should just write enough, and write it to the best of your ability to know that it happened and more importantly everything that comes after and before, especially with this story because it's all about the psychology of it, why does he do it, what does he get from it after, what's the cause and affect? Well again, thank you for the review and I hope you enjoy the chapters as you read them!

Yes, I always try to keep the times in order, that is one thing I wanted to make sure was a clear priority. As for the grammar, I've done my best on it, being that I've worked on this project entirely solo. I had an editor once but I found that my pace and my breaks on doing such a long term project, it was just easier for me working on it solo, so I hope anything in future chapters can be a forgiven. Thank you so much for the review!

Lol I was very happy with the prologue, I kind of hoped it would be the hook. And thank you for the names. Made them up myself, though I am sure others have used them as well, some where!

Lol not yet! Then again one has to wonder if Miracle will ever find peace? Just a teaser to think about!

"Oh my god! Miracle, you're on the news!" Dayna screamed from the living room. Miracle walked into the living room where the whole house was gathered, relaxing together for the evening. He munched on a chip from the bag he was holding. "What?" His eyes shifted towards the television. "Scammers and frauds, it seems to have become a trend to share these people in action as a way of warning others, or maybe it's just a fun way of entertaining? Either way, this scammer was hot in action at a car

Lmao Miracle thinks it's fun to harass Ashley. It's kind of like what Melanie used to do to Robin but a little more extreme. And I think he does it to show off a little, he's never done it alone. I agree, Miracle should definitely take Jaemin's advise, he could very much be like Eric's Jordan or Rachel, sent on the outside to get close to Miracle, even in a bad way.

Yeah, Issac definitely does feel like an outsider but I felt that was really necessary for the plot of the story as this was to come down to the great love between Miracle and Jaemin. Still, Issac is a great character but Miracle's motives for involving him were entirely wrong, it goes back to that explanation of finding replacements. Issac was essentially Jaemin's closest replacement but obviously not enough. And oh did I love the soda bottle! As for the kidnapping, the motives behind that will become much clearer.

It is good, Jeremy is getting more work done in a few weeks than the police and FBI did in two years! Hahaha! Jasmine actually did tell Miracle and the gang that she wasn't coming back. I guess they figured she might change her mind and it really became final and hit them when she told them again at the car rental place. As for her stuff, well she is going to be living in a dorm room. I'm sure her Dad plans to come later to bring the rest of her various items so as not to ruin her vacation in Miami with her friends. (Though it never got that far.)

Erica walked up the stairs in the stairwell of the parking garage. She stopped on the fourth flight and then turned around. "Sure you like this spot? I might get mad and push you down." She said, sarcastically. "I know you better than that." Jeremy sighed. "I saw Rachel first." "I've yet to get my chance with her, not that I've missed it, I just haven't bothered." Erica crossed her arms and leaned back against the wall. "I was hard on her." Jeremy looked down. "What you both did, it really

That was such a fun scene to write! Lol, glad you liked it!

Laquisha walked by Ben's desk and dropped a bag with a flash drive in it. "Looks like you don't have to talk to David at all and we're expecting something in the mail. I don't know who anonymous is but I already watched it, I know it's a man, distorted voice, but a deep one. I already watched it, he says he's not a cop but works with a higher affiliation and is doing all of this covertly." Ben looked at the bag and then he looked up at Laquisha. "Higher affiliation? I doubt FBI, I don't think

Jeremy walked into Jordan's office and shut the door and walked over to his desk and sat down, pulling up the windows, thankful that the staff were able to access the computer despite whatever password he made up. Though it was a file that he saw on the man's desktop that really grabbed his interest. "A confession?" Jeremy clicked on the file and the windows media player came up. Jordan appeared, in the office where Jeremy was now sitting. "I hope that what I am about to say is safe here. This

Yep, someone has to find Eric's weak links and she was one of them. Just wait...lol.

Hahaha Miracle is greedy! And a bit of a dreamer! I think people might get curious about fortune tellers. I know I've always wanted to go to one but never have, part of me doesn't want to invest the money, and I can't snatch the money back like Miracle did! LOL! Oh and it was a gold tub, faucets and all. Gold, pure gold! And yes, it is difficult for Jeremy, he's having to choke everything back and hold it all in but I'll say he'll get his chance, and it will really count.

The windows shattered as the bullets flew through the house and Hunter shifted up and fired a few rounds towards the bikers and then he leaned back down as more shots were fired, Craig leaned up and shot a few rounds off himself. "This is insane! There aren't even that many of them!" Hunter tensed up. "It was insane when it happened last time! At least they just drove by and left!" Erica crawled towards the hall way and stood up, running off and into the bed room and then she dived to the fl

I will definitely keep posting! Thank you so much, hope that you continue to enjoy the story!

Miracle smiled as all of his old furniture was moved out and he looked around his room. "Okay, I'm thinking all mirror ceiling and then...on this wall, a floor to ceiling window, from corner to corner. A California King, here, facing straight towards where my dresser used to be, for access to both sides. Maybe get one with drawers underneath to save some space. Three on one side, one for Jaemin, one for me, then a shared one for me and Jaemin and then on the other side, same set up for me and Is

Yep, someone has to die. Like I said, consequences. I try not to be that kind of writer that makes everything sunshine and rainbows. Even when I sacrificed my favorite character (aside from Miracle.) I loved Melanie but that was a storyline and that was how I had to end it. Polygamy, thats the word you're looking for. It's more used in reference to marriage but it can apply in the situation anyway. It will be interesting, I will leave this little hint, Jaemin and Miracle have a great love and a long history, we will have to see how that goes. Lmao and I am surprised you didn't say anything about Sterling! Honestly to explain that, it wasn't so much about Sterling, I want to be honest and say that I made that choice in a symbolic way, to prove a point, maybe extreme, but to prove a serious point. Like what Aiden was telling Miracle about going back to New York and everything being different, well I wanted to do that as a big example for Miracle to kind of hit that point home. Though we don't really know how that came about, all we know is what Sterling says and Ashley is very confrontational, so much so that you can't really talk to her, but Miracle views her as an enemy so both are always hostile. There is a lot more funny to come and more emotional moments! So be on the look out for them!

Hey, people get lucky! I mean who takes up those close spots so you have to drive around for blocks? Lmao and maybe he took Melanie's handicap tag and used it. I actually meant to give her one, just to make her a little extra bad but I don't think I ever made her use it. I think I meant to have her use it at the diner when she went to meet Sterling but I forgot! And Miracle was saying that to Craig, he was taking Craigs car, it was kind of his way of annoying him. "I'm back! So I'm doing these annoying things again! Like taking your car and running out before you say anything!" Ryders car got left in Nevada, Miracle just left it where ever he had it parked, probably at the graduation. He's irresponsible like that lmao. As for Eric? Well Dayna and Issac didn't have a taste of him yet. Dayna might have a little more sense. Issac wants to be a big bad criminal anyway, he wants to dig into the stuff. And the others think that just because they pulled it off at the warehouse where Sarah died! Well they think they can pull it off again! But yes, it's reckless, they should learn from the past, people die.

Thank you! I haven't had much of a chance to write something like that in the story for a while! And I kind of felt like the story needed a little something! Though I do feel like it's come to a part where things are a little more low key than they used to be. At least..for now. Lol.

"Head low, stay still." Dayna whispered as the boat pulled up to the dock and she stood up and looked at Issac as another man walked up the ramp to board the boat. "I will be your escort, however, I hope you don't mind a search? You understand." The man slightly grinned. Dayna narrowed her eyes at the man's grin. "If I had a gun, I would shoot your grin off." "Dayna..." Issac said in warning. "Understandable in this...industry." He smiled. The man only laughed and then looked at Issac an

Thank you! It was fun to write, I really enjoyed it. Glad that you got your yearbook signed like that, really cool! Issac and Dayna don't share a dad. Issac's dad is a "John" from when their mom worked the streets and Dayna's dad is a doctor, pretty hateful. He just gives her money and pretty much disregards her because she wont disown Issac. I'm going to miss Aiden too! But some characters you might see again! Jennifer is Aiden's older sister.