“Bakelite” You’re showing your age! How many readers today know that is the original “plastic “?
When I was in elementary school a guy up the street was an electronics repairman. He would regularly supply me with cast offs to spur my imagination and interest in electronics. Not hing like junk to excite a boy (no matter the age of the boy!)
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Bryan
Nooooo, it can't be over already. I love these characters and I was so looking forward to their relationship developing more.
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Bryan
I have the same reaction at the end that I had the first time I read this story: Why does it have to end? I want more of these characters.
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Bryan
"But, then again, I'm a nihilist, and I don't know if I'd recognize a higher plane of existence if it bit me in the ass."
Laughed out loud! Wonderful line.
Bryan
This is not my usual genre, but I started reading the story because I enjoy Cynus' writing. I have been well rewarded for doing so. A great, compelling story.
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Bryan