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“Bakelite” You’re showing your age! How many readers today know that is the original “plastic “? When I was in elementary school a guy up the street was an electronics repairman. He would regularly supply me with cast offs to spur my imagination and interest in electronics. Not hing like junk to excite a boy (no matter the age of the boy!) Thanks for sharing your writing. Bryan
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I have the same reaction at the end that I had the first time I read this story: Why does it have to end? I want more of these characters. Thank you for sharing your writing. Bryan
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“That would be a much more credible reason than the others you have cited,” For a moment I thought JP had traveled back in time.
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My recollection of my teen years is that I was no more mature at 18 than I was at 16. Nor were my friends. We thought we were. But we weren’t.
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"But, then again, I'm a nihilist, and I don't know if I'd recognize a higher plane of existence if it bit me in the ass." Laughed out loud! Wonderful line. Bryan
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Eight days to write this! Amazing. It was just inside you trying to get out.
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This is not my usual genre, but I started reading the story because I enjoy Cynus' writing. I have been well rewarded for doing so. A great, compelling story. Thanks for sharing your writing. Bryan
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The Second Time Around
amBIguoustwo commented on Geron Kees's story chapter in The Second Time Around
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Brilliant! Another great story, with a twist I didn't expect. (As someone noted above, we all should have seen it coming.)
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So happy Kenney is down. I've been very worried that Scott's chance at happiness would come to naught.
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Fabulous story and fantastic characters. While I'm sorry the end is here, it is a brilliant ending.
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I'm not surprised that you needed a break, Mark. As chapter after chapter was posted, I would wonder how you managed your real life! Take whatever time you need; we'll all be here when you get back. Bryan
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This chapter captures the joy of playing simple card games in the summer at the beach. I spent summers on Camelot Beach on Lke Erie (about 3.5 hours south by car from the site of this story). I fondly remember playing cards, particularly on rainy days. I know these two are going to get together, but the suspense is beginning to kill me!
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[Sasha Distan] Cowboy Summer
amBIguoustwo replied to Sasha Distan's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
Noooooooo! It can't be over! I love your writing, but this story in particular. The characters and story development were wonderful. I was on pins and needles waiting to learn what would be the result of his trip back to England. And, the way you led us in the last chapter to think he was with Jase! Brilliant. Thanks for sharing your writing. Bryan -
Great-Granddaddy's Gun
amBIguoustwo commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Great-Granddaddy's Gun
A story of boys (and men) and their guns. A story of fathers (and grandfathers) and their sons. A story of a way life that not a lot of people understand anymore. A story of acceptance. A story that brought tears to my eyes. -
I'm SO glad this story is now complete. I started reading it a decade ago (imagine!). I dispaired that the conclusion would never arrive. The story resonated with me from the beginning because I am bisexual, although I didn't use the label for years. I was I love with my best friend growing up, but never acted on it. Of course, it turns out he is gay and struggled with it for a long time - but we never broached these topics. To me, John was just unattainable and I didn't try. it is a remarkable story. Bryan
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Mark, what a story! Your ending made me cry. Can't wait for your next offering. Bryan
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He lives!
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I have really enjoyed this story. I usually don't enjoy sci-fi and fantasy, but this is so well written and the plot device of waking up in the future is very compelling. Was I happy with the death of Mira. No, of course not. But the writing is so great, I loved the chapter. Now, when will our hero reveal that, when he is angered to the point of rage, he has some control over the Sharplings? Heck, when will he realize that there is a connection? Bryan
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I'm surprised no one has started a thread for this story. I found the writing sharp and the story fantastic. The final chapter brought tears to my eyes. Bravo!
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I'm glad someone articulate started this thread; I couldn't have said it as well. It is an amazing story and I look forward to more from this author.
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Mark, While I haven't been posting, I have been reading (I wish I had been posting; I knew what Carson was from the beginning based on the twin hits on Brad's and Robbie's businesses). This has turned out to be my favorite CAP story so far. It has the three elements I love: Brad and Robbie, business intrigue and, what's the third? Oh, yeah! Lots of sex. Thanks for writing. Bryan
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[Linxe Termoil] Spider Webs
amBIguoustwo replied to Linxe Termoil's topic in Stories Discussion Forum
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[Jack Scribe] SHIFTING SANDS
amBIguoustwo replied to Jack Scribe's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
Sorry to see the story come to an end. Loved watching the Cray/Spike relationship develop and I'm looking forward to more Spence. -
[Altimexis] Scout's Honor by Altimexis
amBIguoustwo replied to Graeme's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
Excellent story. Thanks for sharing your writing.
