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  1. I am very impress with how this new story is starting out I love the old story and remember it well - this is why I feel the sequel will do well also ---- Well it seems three things about Zack hasn't change Can I have him? I need an over protective bf I am still wondering how ex-dad will make up for things? I am scared if he drinks again - boom - no more rain
  2. Hi I just a fan of Dans La Nuit story of Zack and Rain I am surprise a thread wasn't started so now there is one. I love to hear all the chatter about these two lovers ---- Unintended Love 2 Zack and Rain are reunited after years of being apart. ----- Unintended Love Rain and Zack meet on vacation in Hawaii and it's love at first sight. But boys aren't supposed to fall in love. Are they?
  3. Is that because he loves to eat his paper - forgetting he has strong desire to eat paper sprinkled with ink ie: Paper written Story and Paper notes
  4. Happy Birthday!!!
  5. Trevor's getting slow in his prime ... only 3 condoms ... At his age he should have gone through a whole box I think he's holding back ( unless he reuses the 3 condoms ) Sure Captain of the boat makes him a giver ... I think he's holding out ... I think Joel better check Trevor for a lisp. Hey ... no sexual replays in his dreams ... we all locked out of his dream factory Maybe he did play chess with the guy. Gosh gonna hear more controversial stuff to follow on dirk and jim and ares etc etc
  6. Hey I take my initial writings as just a template\alpha write to a story I be writing. Sure if I lost an unpublished chapter I be in a funk about it. But if I'm still in the alpha stage i just eventually go back and rewrite it or get the essence down and then start getting back to what it meant when its ready to come out of me. If not I don't force it. If you do have a beta reader it would be find to bounce things off them if they had read your alpha works. It might help the writers block. Now that I have been doing a beta write ... I find that things are beginning to hash out details by themselves. You must be a beta writer without doing the alpha write ... so it becomes to be hitting that you wrote once and don't want to write it again. That really kills the spirit of why you wrote the story. For me the story constantly is living in me. So if I had to write a missing portion ... I do it because the spirit is still there and its not gone. Only the original effort it took. But if you rejoin with its spirit ... it comes out better again. Its a matter to get re-in touch with it again.
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    love vs. lust

    I have to say - I would have love to have a gay friend in my teen years. I knew a gay student when I was 11. He wasn't well treated. He seem to be in his own world. Ten years later we meet again and we said hi again and we hugged. It was nice to know that we had no malace between us and that we knew we existed. Sure I had plenty of lust and plenty horney for love. But still to me its making a friend first and seeing how far we can take trusting each other to form a relationship. I was young back then. Having a relationship with a girl be a bit hard for me given a past incident. But I'm just find if we be friends. Never found a gay friend. Did meet a weird 12yo when I was 12yo. Its only during history we did weird gay things with each other. But not try to be friends first. Strange kid. He did get picked on. If he'd be willing to try to be a friend outside of history then he would have gain a friend. But he didn't try. I sort of hinted to him but he didn't pick up the notion. I was scared to be doing wierd gay things during history. I hate to be caught and thats why I told him I want to stop thst sort of thing. It be hard for me to say if I had a lusting relationship. Would I take it? Maybe for a moment but if it never buds into love. Then I wouldn't want a lusting relationship. It just becomes to be a screwy relationship that be hard to understand and lead to trouble.
  8. Happy Birthday
  9. announcement-166-no-porn-stories-in-efiction There is an announcement - which I am not understanding of But I think it is having tastefully done sex scene rather than very explicit porn done - i think that be like on JustUsBoys Stories - would not be liked here I think -
  10. Happy Birthday Graeme!!
  11. I take its unconfirmed that Trevor and Joel are on-board. It be scary if Jim and Dirk are in the cargo bay.
  12. Nice to see the chapter will be back Seeing that Ryan was active in this War ... he took the risks that he must bare. There are plenty of Boys School Movies out there The Emperor's Club The Dead Poets Society The Life and Adventures of Nicholas Nickleby Les choristers Tom Brown's School Days Prep School Lord of the Flies The Hang is no worst than what went on in these movies. Its really up to the educators to prevent Wars and Bullying in schools. Its only the headmasters or Principals that will get a bad reference or some disciplinary but it does not help the innocent that got hurt and that's how much our society falls short. So do we have sympathy for the Venezuelan boy or Ryan or both or the other hang boys? or aren't they glad they didn't attend a public school in NYC (the black board jungle)
  13. Happy Birthday!!
  14. Joel needs to pat down there more often ... by Trevor all drunk. I hope the next chapter has lots of details of Trevor having a good time. Just hope Trevor doesn't make it on the stockholm website as the next twink. Joel going to have fun watching Trevor walking and sitting funny. I wonder if Trevor will be atlantis separation anxiety. I wonder if there's any chance Joel and Trev being abducted then featured on Eric website? straight guys does gay boys mmm feature them as twins. then they miss Joels flight back and then Joel goes on the second leg its like I don't want joel to go home but to go all the way with trevor Being along again may hurt more.
  15. Happy Birthday!!
  16. Happy Birthday
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    Refreshing Honesty

    I hope you will find an appropriate solution. I hate it to be like the movie "Maurice" Yes lots of good questions ... Like what would you do if you did meet Mr. Right? or Mr. True Love? Would you do anything to make that life happen? Would you be willing to leave those that disapprove? I do hope you find a win-win solution.
  18. Nice to learn more of Dirk and first boat - gosh you think Dirk and Trevor had it bad in disagreement You should open your eyes to Dirk and everyone connected with the first boat. Everyone gets bent out of shape from the guy. even thought the bomb scare was a hoax worry - writers fluff - I am surprise there wasn't anything found on the boat at all. They must have miss something ... it could look like its part of the boat but its not and I don't think the guys knows this. They looking for something attached ... so I really think they missed something ... And did Trevor really check every part of the boat ... could have he miss something
  19. hehehe, hey they still shout "shrimp on the barbie" everywhere is dangerous anywhere else too ... just stay in that spot call nothing to be safe hey bloopy you worried about being mug by a kangaroo? like what else do they hide in that pouch certainly not condoms
  20. ahhh I was expect Trev to sneak away and we didn't get to have a dead float lawyer in the ocean. Could you imagine Dirks face if Trev said "I killed your lover, lawyer ... we fair and square on Mom" Its what I expected he be going to Australia. I guess I still don't like Dirk being a hot head. I don't get Trev saying he'll love his dad even if he murder his mother. I guess I have to wait until Dirk explains his guilt or his relationship with his mother. No where does Trev or Dirk ever speak of mom. Stories about her. Dirk doesn't get that his hot hotheadedness was a good thing for Trevor to learn. If he learn to be civil or a loving father - Trevor would be less hot headed. But given the situation - was Trevor a mistake to have? or did both his Parents wanted Trev. Because of Jim, both father and son may one day love each other more and put their difference aside. No one put a Parent Warning Label on Dirk ... "Don't say Gay or Aries to me" .... same goes for Trevor "Don't take away Atlantis or my Mom from me" or "Stay away - I've been Dirk Abuse".... if Trev had lost his father instead of his mom ... would he be as grieving for him. Now who sent the message ... could it be MOM? or Mom's Killer or Mom's son's protector? The lawyer failed to get all the facts and lied to Dirk that Joel is going to be with Trev for the duration of the circumnav So is the next 23 chapter going to get a bit hair raising? We got an unknown person out there - and - again false security - and a two un-laid-twinks Whats lisa and female lawyer going to say? Whats Joel father going to say? I hope Joel does go with Trevor around the world ... They both can re-do the school or take the GED ... Maybe the three of them can take courses around the world and transfer the credits one country at a time (joke) Hey I like to see if Dirk is going to send money to pay for Atlantis maintenance repairs? Doing everything he says he's willing to do for Trevor
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    Archie Comics

    funnier if the whole HS turns gay and lesbian ... she get chased and she the only straight one waiting for the first straight guy
  22. hh5

    Archie Comics

    maybe its visible on those 9.99 comic books rather than the newspaper serials
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    Archie Comics

    I figure Jughead just being a good guy to a gay guy plus he just got told ... no idea of the reaction ... but its great to string veronica ... but ... I hate to be around her when she gets piss.
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    Archie Comics

    mmm I only read Archie when it was still 12 cents ... It never enter my mind to figure who's gay so really Jughead??? Not Archie?? or the characters that never has a steady girlfriend for 50 years isn't archie going to be jealous with a new beu No ones questions Regie??
  25. Adam better return back home face Connor and Matt - if he ventures too far then Time to write a Pre-sequel - clip "Looking for Adam - All summer - Locked in Craig's Dungeon"
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