Mark M

ah i suppose thats not actually a word....but in my language it's like "oh, getting jiggy with it?" or "oh, flowers are cool" soo....we just add ope "OpE!! getting jiggy with it" or "Ope, flowers are cool" A agree! i really liked how this all went, to bad that Calvert Travers Robey and Granger were not all at dinner, that would be very interesting indeed. Oh i do say i hate everyone's first name but Grangers. John is better then Francis though. Such a lame name -.- not impressed it's like Lets f**k.....oh FRANCIS!!! OH FRANCIS!!! i just can't fathom that at all. I get the feeling that before granger is sent to the med something big will happen.....perhaps a prize?? so early? i think her legs could be stretched for a bit, maybe damage HMS-B a little....get her in the action!! anyway Another week till the next chapter we wait!! love it mark! get well. So many people started this year off sick....not cool. Peace

ope to dream of another chapter!

cool

Well i think that JP and wade have some similarities and differences like that above, but of all else, they completly give themselves and there resources to there family. like an "Anything goes" for family, and that drives me insane because in reality people just....well don't. i had a conversation with a bud today about how he'll have his money and his wife has hers. i'm like "Untill she runs out", He's like "nope, not unless i want too" Pfft i was like good luck having a stable romance. Course money is usualy what drives a relationship apart, which we havent really had exept through brian. Which in a way, wades belief in bloodlines (through his organization skills) is similar to brians belief that JP's Money is somehow rightfully his. lol EDIT: like i mean The fact it's GOTTA be because of his Bloodline or his upbringing he's organizational. It couldn't be just because he likes it I'm currious is wage our narrator till the end now? if so i'm not to mad. if not. well i wouldn't be mad either i like both personalitys, just matt is more about the sex and pleasing and thinking is off. But hey Opposites attract!! haha Anyway.......Any news on the future....say a month from now?? Will there be a Continuing story? or possibly a new story in general?? I wouldn't mind a random short story....the ones you have written are hilarious. Anyway HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE!!!!

loved it!!! Can't believed it wasn't a split movie, they could've totaly done it!!! Awesomeness indeed. I'd buy it

hey if were picking teams i pick team LARK!!! muwhaha oldest character. or Team....Brad/Clair/Ace/Jack They were the best team so far :D

ope, caught an error..which has not been done in a while!! interesting. anyway. tesed us to long get it up.....and i'm meaning the chpt.lol

it's funny how gays might be thought of pedofiles when some women are the ones robbin the craddle moreso then homosexuals. Exept of course a 10 year old straight boy probably wouldn't object either, to a women. I totaly wish u'd consider a paralell novel to the CAP series. Maybe of i duno lark's story? whatever did happen to Brads best friend :o to cost robbie his parents. :o In fact i'm a little more surprised robbies parents didn't just show up after greg died and robbie took over to try and get her job back. Anyway enough of my tangents of what could come to be. i love the story and matt's illness i love wade i love everything this time of year is soo good. Anyway Merry Christmas to all!! P.S; can there not be an autobiography or long ass pages of posts i have to catch up on in three days time. THANKS!!! haha

Cries......that was a good write even if it was just a thank you!! Thanks Mark!!! your great!! Merry Christmas....or Happy new year. MM~

and waiting

Very good!! As always mark- Awesome *Stands in silence* I love this story and it's plot, taking a turn i can't forsee at all. Where we'll end up...u only know....and god...or "godS" as "Granger fought to keep the pain he felt from emerging, thanking the gods that it was only " I see Gods is plural, so i wonder what granger is??? a Pagen?? i thought it was either protesant or catholic at this time??? Anyway i wana see how this plays out. When's the next chapter expected?

no i definatly didn't feel that at all and thank you for saying you enjoy my posts, i enjoy yours just as much plus....i like to post often so it was an excuse Paya gets one wronge after so many right it's gotta be wrong no??? i will admit i did get the impression 3 would be going to the country club how about a naked canadian...god no's marks been bugging

my vote i think would have to be......hmm...i've only read about 4 stories, 2008 should have been Vlista with is drop off on chapter 14 of one moment!!! seriously who pulls a year an some cliffhanger story? not impressed!!! anyway since i'm currently reading marks stories, my vote would have to lie in his field.

Sorry for double posting but i just saw something. Did you not see i said NOT at the end of it. I'm still telling you add the detail cuz it warms my heart.....plus it's f**king cold outside with the snow.

Well, hmmm how to respond.....as i was told by paya. "Think before you write"....so i will......*Thinks* *thinks again* what i don't think EVERYDAY *thinks again* *Is done thinking* I guess i can see your point about not reading the descriptions of a hospital room, only if it applies i guess. Like if Wade would've picked up the heart listining thing and started listening to matts body parts.. then we'd need to know that it was sitting to the right or left of the bed on the rolly, food thing that can come over the bed. Since really we just need to know the symptoms of matt and have people come and go it's ok. But whether it's a single (which i believe i picked up that it is) and whether that the blinds are closed or are wide open for everyone to see, and for matt to see outside (runing nurses and doctors) can be stressfull, and matt is just like anyone of the family, loves to help, hates to be helped. Anyway! i do see your point jenni!(This is creepy because u have the name of my best friend! you arn't her are you!? haha) And i seem to agree on your last statement too, otherwise i wouldn't keep coming back for more.

hehehe i know never happy am i? i duno i think i'm plaid out on the whole matt and wade thing....can only go through the same thing so many times maybe...MAYBE this is knew and i'm currious to see what happpens. Now if this continues into the next few chapters with this chapter being key, thats awesome. i love how some authors like the only is a twelve book series uses the stuff we learned from it, and applies it to the last. Awesome. So now u have me even more excited. Plus this is the first serious ilness with a main character. so lets see how this plays out.

i think it's safe to say not only paya is in a bitch mood >.> but i do sorta agree, it just went on about nothing in particular other then what it could be, not much development, but of course not everychapter can bring us from Palo alto to France to clarmont, to the sexual pleasurs by at least three people by the end Ahh if only it were still like that......N.O.T!!!

that was hell in a nutshell, i really didn't think anything mark threw at us but frick i guess when you pretty much grow up in a hospital, it brings dreded feelings back....i'm glad claire made her apperance. Wonderfull woman As for Matt.....so sad....so sad indeed what wdf does he have....?? what are we heading too??? jeepers i couldn't even guess.

*humps linxe's Leg* HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! So how many times have you been born???

whats TBS? lol Hmmm wierd 600 ft, nothing allowed to be bigger....in hight right? width is okay??? cuz then i guess someones making a shopping mall rather then a sky scraper. Anyway. Mark must i ask? PLEAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEE (either one) just :D:D:D:D:D::D:d

i'm thinking lukemia for some reason and compleatly cured.

yup definalty am going to see this one

haha lub it _

awe rats i was hoping to see some brilliant exclamations over the surprise. And i don't nessasarily think it was rude....i think u wanted a few's oppionin. I negatived your post only because it takes longer then one chapter to solve. I'm excited i vote for HMS though.

I wonder.....how can you possibly feel your in the hostpital with them when the only description we got is that he's on a bed in the hospital, mostly unconcious. So i can imagine you feel as if your in the hospital room probably with the most familier hostpital room you've ever been in yourself. Myself i've been in ICU, waiting rooms, 4 person ward, 1 person single, varies outher rooms, EMERG room? we honestly don't know which of these he is in so i'm befuddled as to actualy feel as if i'm there myself. haha -2 on this post, and i'll admit i did give it a negative. cliff hangers that keep going and going are well okay but nothing something preferable. But now that matts hospitalised......Will you do what you asked us in chat one day long ago?