Mark M

Well as a start to a new story i might as well offer the first review. I'm curious about the original author that you basing this story on, it seems like it could be a good read. I'm so far enjoying the read so far, but the concept of turns confuses me, is that in relation to one year=one turn? or one day = one turn? cuz two hundred turns seems like alot of years.....probably too long. I'm also wondering what this young character will bring up as a dragon....i'm sure it won't be anything but the rarest of dragons....or so i can hope! even mightier then the Golden's You also surprised me with the start of a brand new story and not book II of the "dreams of humanity" series? I do hope you continue you it one day it was a great read. KEep it UP!!

Whoa whoa lark? is jeff's.....wow that is a shocker i would've never guessed that! Pleasant surprise , i just wonder how jeff will react to this news that his dad had his name change, and the reasons why.....if they tell him even. I hope they do because that would be cool. Light cliffhanger at least, nothing too serious! But Happy St. Patricks day!! :D

I hope we get to 100 Chapters! that would be so cool. But man if u'd have kept going i'd have tears in my eyes, the end of this chapter was perfectly amazing. At this point in time gay-marriage isn't really an option. I know Canada got it in '05 or '06 but i believe few countries if any had any gay-marriage disscussions, right now in my opinion that's something in the U.S that's more or less a full blown social war. Hopefully Wade and Matt are still around to celebrate there marriage formally. However since there in cali and to this day it is still not legal, it might be a while for us to get there. stupid prop 8. Anyway Will's story is going along great , i'm dissapointed in the interactions with some of the characters in the story though. Doesn't isadore and frank live at this mansion? where the hell are they? like ever? poor isadore doesn't have much of a character anymore. and Language switching (French & Italian--has taken a backdrop too) i really hope we get to see more of these characters in the future, surely there life is just as eventful. Gathen too! keep it up mark!

Brilliant, bummer, and again brilliant! It indeed was a happy new year, and now we are in the year 2001! now this is a year for the history books, im so currious to see where it all goes now. and what you tell us about this year. I dearly hope you do not skip one of the most important historical unnatural disasters in my life time. I feel bad that Will is looking and looking and has no luck finding anyone. But he is in alot better position then i am as i have no gay friends at all! i've met the odd gay person however i've never met one to become friends with. Maybe i need to take the step into a gay-bar. One day maybe i will. Either way! The story is progressing amazingly!

<3 <3 <3 <3 I hope things go better in the future for Jesse. Im saddened that Sebastian is used up as a name though, i love that name Great story.

Fantastic story ! i hope more comes !

I just wanted to mention that i think your getting a very crowded story. Relating horses to person, and person to person even, is getting to be a lot. Like in most stories there are characters everywhere yes, however they usually don't come in so often or so quickly, and so smoothly. It's being proven how fictional this is getting because it's just not like for 10 guys to get along so swell so immediately. I'm not sure what your exact intention are on how you want your story interpreted. I don't think it would hurt adding more of a story, more of even a description or more communication/ oddities that some of your characters have, there....too perfect. like Zak accepting a brother, that's a mind blown moment, not a HURRAY and everything is happy moment, which is what it did seem. Having parents involved more might be cool too. It's also nice to have Ace around to add the straight factor, however i do hope his best friend can come enjoy the farm a bit. anyway i am enjoying the story you are telling even if it's crowded and such. It is a pleasant read. I'm currious to see how tanner/dylan figgure things out.

Happy dance happy dance!! Now lets get on with the DRAMA!!!!! to think in less then a year 9/11 will be apon us, and i believe there was a rumor once that someone significant will be affected by it, but maybe not by death. Least hopefully not! anyway that's way to serious of foreshadowing for a chapter like this! it was supurbe. Keep it up.

The ending was very.....Anti climatic for me. i was figgureing there'd be some mage of deathly powers, or the army of thousands marching against valdemar but alas it seems like they the virlondi just came and ended it all. i wasn't preped for that kind of an ending, especially since the black kings were made out to be so many. Either way the story is over, and i'm saddened by it. hopefully one day soon we will return to valdemar.

AH this story is amazing. I even googled it once to see if it was finished anywhere and alas it's not that i could find! so i'm patiently awaiting each chapter! i LOVE your posting schedule!! Anyway! keep it up! this heartstone/heralds/dalen is Awesome!

Well I declaim a partial cliffy! otherwise i really enjoyed this chapter immensly!!!

My mind is reeling from that bomb.....i cannot even process JJ now.....he has done a 360 in my eyes and it finally explains some things......wow....that's so terrible, and even more terrible no one knew.....poor kid Now lets get this cliffhanger over with soon cuz wow.....that was a shock.

Some technical errors between the use of cody and dylans name in a few parts. dylan drove dylan to dylans house and dylan got off the bike type of thing. OTHERWISE deep deep deep stuff, i wasn't expecting that at all, talk about harsh, but riding lessions has been mainly flowers and roses in my opinion. However.....where's CODY!??!?!?! I wouldn't mind hurting him! anyway I await more? if there will be any? not sure....this is kind of a prequil and now it's all back to riding lessons now.

i dont even know what to say.....brad in the sack for me as always been freaking amazing! i'm so glad wade experienced that, cuz brad doesn't venture very far, very often. I would hope they do it again some day, but alas i think that was a one-time pleasure.....but only question is did tony and Will catch that kiss or not? cuz then wade could play it off, brad however might not be able to contain the rage, while will might get mad and oooooohhhh boy it could just be bad on so many levels where this goes if they saw that kiss, otherwise wade might be able to play it off as a "visit" lol So intense!!! however will's obsession with tony needs to die.....frankly tony.....can die...i'm so annoyed. and Dana! omg ho...hoow...how is she even part of this group???????? tony should be told off.............GRR! Noah on the other hand <3 <3 <3 <3 i love that name too

Iphone 5 Alllll THE WAY!

OH MY GOD, that was fantastic! here i thought you were going to actually delve into a more darker thing with like a kidnapping or something. But Danny i kinda had a feeling he'd turn up, but not really like that. EXCELENT, i CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter!!!

JJ Needs the D. In my opinion, Enough said.

OH MY GOD, this stringing me alone is hurting my eye's!!!! This is terrible. Everyone keeps telling Corbin "No, not ever" and i'm like GAWD. KISS HIM DAMNIT and i betcha everything would click!! :D I can only hope we find out sooner then later what this whole mess of a relationship will yeild.

I really hope good things for Jeanne, cuz change is the worst for a Person with Bi-polar, IE: moving houses, moving atmosphears, stressed atmosphears, even if there uncomfortable (Hot humid out-door weather) Can screw things up, especially if there spoilt with Air conditioning. also to understand the simple things like the use of money, and what they can and can't buy also gets them in hot water, I'm kind of surprised there's been no "Manic" state other then a little bit in norway. the volience can be very dramatic and instantaneous too. So i hope Darius can look out for her, and get the regularities up. However! sucide is totally a big issue with them, it just depends when there mind is made up. I suggest no Rivers, pools, or anything that she can drowned herself in, cuz that's an easy way to go. Darius has his work cut out for him, myself i think an extravagent, totally supervised home would be the best place. Maybe since this family has money, they can start a home for families with people who have bi-polar. Gardens, choores, Craft days, bingo, just things for them to get together and soicalize, not only with bi-polar people but non-bi-polar people. My Mom loved doing things, it's when she stopped things got bad. They got to be kept busy that's for sure then they can't think about things and confused themselves. But NOT to the point of drugging them like they did to wade's grandmother, that's NOT the thing to do. but meds help I'm currious where you take this whole thing with jeanne, it's intriguing, especially since it directly relates to my younger life. However, I'm very surprised in Will, to turn around and take charge of his mom at 14 is definatly a mature thing, cuz i sure as hell didn't. I also hope Will/Noah work out and this Tony/will thing dies in buring flames. I really don't like Tony, at all because he has feelings but not really lol. Robbie and JJ just need the D, then maybe they'll smarten up. anyway What our christmas presents looking like this year mark???? :D

Beautiful Chapter Thanks Mark!!! Will is good stuff. It's amazing to see how he is different but the same a brad when he was that age. However because there so much of the same i think that's why the emancipation happened. either way Keep it up.

Aweeeee that was Beautiful! then terrible. Man! I love Danny, he's such a cool guy.anyway! Excited for more that's for sure!! Riding lessons ended way to soon, so i'm glad theres more

Okay so i just started reading this, and i'm thinking this is oddly familier. How much like "The vampire diaries" is this going to get? cuz if it follows the same path, you just lost a reader, cuz i'm an avid fan of the vampire diaries, not that i don't think a gay-version wouldn't be good, it's just i've seen it all. :S anyway let me know.

Whats with the blackberrys? Iphones are way more professional now. That or i'll at least cave saying the Samsung Galaxy 2/3 are better. Crackberry is dead. lol Otherwise i love where the story is heading! and i knew cole couldn't keep it up forever! haha oh well....now we see where it goes.....and they havent had sex yet so there's still that big cherry. however why do i get the feeling this story is almost over? i betcha were over half through it! so sad This could be a really good long novel....ahhh here i go again being a size queen on the length of a good story. Keep it up!

oooo the mystery around Noah....exciting! I hope will gets a shocker and finds a real relationship, like robbie/Brad matt/wade stef/Jp isadore/frank max/tim Marcel/lou etc. wow i can't believe i named some of them off! memory is still serving me right. how are my two canadian's??? (Lou/marcel?) So excited for what's coming. Including everything with will's mom. However i am Farily verse on bi-polar which i can't exactly remember if she was diagnosed with it, but change is usual what gets a bi-polar person manic. It's what killed my mom unfortunatly.

i really like this story!!! kep it up! cole is yummy