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Now when can i take a swig? ops i mean swing? with your hammer Agreed Okay so i realise when a story gets good i really just dont like peoples opinions. hahaha No offence to anyone but i just love the whole Drama it's Devistating and Drastic and taken to all levels! How can you agree or dissagree with robbie or Brad. Personaly i love being in this persona again Brad is awesome, even if he is breaking down, but it will only bring him up fifty thousand times stronger!! which is ok! Robbie however can Die i personaly still do not like him anymore! fisting kinda grosses me out still. but minor! This Rollercoaster Better end with a torn up family. Then the next book can bring it together!! (Honestly it will never happen, mark has never let a book stop at a bad place) Either Way! CLIFFY DECLAIRD! I'm Hurting to know who! P.s: EXCELENT WRITING
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Hrmmmmmm Well Robbie is Pissing me off to the maxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx like mark wants him to look like. It makes him look like the bad guy. A Parelle novel would be cool to see how robbie is handleing these things. It's Interesting. My bets however are not on Lark. he didn't hate anyone....least of all brad and robbie till they were older.... Though i'd have to re-read be-rad and mim to find out before the next chapter....which i just might do hahaha. I bet it's robbies mother JUSTKIDDIN
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one word "Saweeeeet!!!!!!!!" Seriously love this so far. and its getting better! How rich is brad though????? and if we "sized" brad up how big is he? hahahha or is he cut or uncut.....i just duno anymore....so long ago were we introduced to his....bigness ><
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yes they'll get back together, no i dont want them back together. >=(
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brad is still his same old self. Took me a bit to re-open to him. Robbie though is still disconected for me. doesn't seem like at all the same kid he used to be....sad really. I'm almost hoping Brad Finds someone knew.....but then again i don't cuz of the past. Honestly i forshadow they'll get back together or have some spec of a relationship by the end of this book.....oh did i just spoil the ending??? (Maybe this will cause mark to surprise us! hehehe.) I can only hope. Anyway! Lets get this story continuing. I'm really likeing the posting spead...... P.S-- i could complain about details details details.....but i wont because i like having a chapter quickly and there really good.
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brad is still his same old self. Took me a bit to re-open to him. Robbie though is still disconected for me. doesn't seem like at all the same kid he used to be....sad really. I'm almost hoping Brad Finds someone knew.....but then again i don't cuz of the past. Honestly i forshadow they'll get back together or have some spec of a relationship by the end of this book.....oh did i just spoil the ending??? (Maybe this will cause mark to surprise us! hehehe.) I can only hope. Anyway! Lets get this story continuing. I'm really likeing the posting spead...... P.S-- i could complain about details details details.....but i wont because i like having a chapter quickly and there really good.
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ah yes! now she is a good singer!! w00 w00
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First of all i don't wana look like any chick....though i'd get all the guys if i were megan fox.....frankly i have no motivation to be a GIRL thank you very much. as for a guy i wouldn't want to look like would be justin bieber or......ossy osborn! YUCK
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Well since i just read this whole freaking GFD story (no spin offs yet) OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DYLAN!?!?! Eff! whens the next chapter. hahahahaha just kidding. It was a really good read, just knowing what might be next would be amazing! eff!!!
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i'm glad brad was chosen after "the box". It's a well deserving refreasher, although i'm begining to hate the rich lifestyle because people like stef who will never be poor again run the show, and they just give give give and give financialy! like ok he's a billionair but still.....i'm missing the fact that there was once a time where a weekend in hawai was even possible (IE: when brad was a kid he never ventured too far). To comment on the brad robbie relationship mid-life-crisis..........uhm.......well it's not cool. Everyone has the dream of one soul mate, and for that to be shattered once....ugh Brad will never trust robbie again. How can he? God damn i'm just outraged. Highschool really has changed Brads........outlook, i can see the writing style is more mature which.....i guess i hate it. i can't relate to a 37 year old, but College Kids! or Highschool kids i can cuz that's where i am at in life. So this story will be interesting, but from what i'm thinking is that i need to re-read stuff. P.S BWS syndrom is definatly at an all time high with three chapters of this story and none of it i am sad. Good Work Mark on the last few months of writing, it's sometimes really not noticed how we pretty much destroyed the box....untill the end. or at least i did, it's probably my least favourite. (sorry). but i'm still glad u get up and keep writing no matter what!! So Good job!
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YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm so excited to get back into brads shoes!! although all the sex will be between him and robbie....and maybe whoever he walks in on...lol!!!!!!!!!! wonder if something besides fisting has come up....maybe a pop bottle after all??? hahaha. alas i've read alot of stories with a gay-friendly pastor. always interesting how authors play them out. so lets get started!!!!!!!!!
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Yeah i still hope he's dead, to bring him back is like the movies you can predict straight to the end. Like "Good always wins". It gets annoying and sure so far mark always brings a good end out of a bad situation, i hope though that this isn't one of them.
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i do not dare read what i've missed. But i'll say one thing. Your really giving us the hope Arron is alive?!?!?! Can't you imagine the emotions that would go through this group of people you so humbly sat together in a story........i wonder if you even know your own characters at all anymore. This whole box story was ok, i didn't like the fact it went backward, but forward would be much more nice, even if you start making it day to day events in these characters lives and change your writing style a little bit, to make the story last. With out a doubt they will search for arron, my only hope is they find him dead. whether he did live out his life or he didn't. just find him dead. i couldn't even think how you would make arron probably in his....(JP is 60ish so steven would probably be around 75) 70's deal with the oncoming disaster of refacing his old life....it's just disastourous to the Hayes family....and i can't imagin robbie keeping this a secret, this whole reading of this thing as already put him on edge. either way i'm currious to read on, finaly something has spiked my interest and now it's true the Box is an okay read, i admit it. It took a while for me to latch on to it, it could be the possibility that you paused HMS to concentrat on one story thus forcing reading to enjoy it for what it is. I do need to re-read the CAP saga again as now we are bringing events into place i totaly forgot about, i thought stef was just on the streets right away as a kid in paris whoreing out to every man or women he found, not living with his mother till she died.....the thing is i guess is that i havent read the books of cap since i started them.....pretty much when i joined up to G.A and gave you my Virgin post. Either way i like the box for what it is, not a story of present characters but a storytelling of characters that made the characters at present to be. (I think that was almost wise....almost) I hope arron is dead so i don't have to feel what he would feel if he saw this crew of...characters (funny cuz there all homosexuals to boot, which in new Negros (los negros?)probably wouldn't have much of a Gay pride culture...in 1999....or maybe even now in 2010? the world is changing but slowly)
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what if i updated this by .5% everyday? do you think mark would send us another chapter.....therefore i'm at 5.5% now too P.S this is still starting at my toes......bashfull or not i don't want it to start in other places or else might as well be 10% haha
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*Lights a match* Here box Take this! :P Anyway i've been waiting for like four days....or i have no idea when chp26 whent up of hms.....anyway....i wana get this over with OK!?
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From what i would know....seasickness can be got over in time....ie: Granger feels it only breifly for him. Not so much with him puking up supper. Least from what we've Heard. I should've been a pirate too....i'd be Marky Mark the Pirate Spark! (Now if that doesn't scare the shit out of you i don't know what will) Anyway! Next.....anyday......(even though i know the box is next) BWS is at 5% in my Body...it's got my Toes!
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no wonder i dressed as a pirate last year for halloween...i didn't realise it till now. as for the wait for the box....which i'd like to hack up and throw it in the fire (not because it isn't good, but it's stopping HMS) to finish i'll aquire a ale for the old mind to pass the time. Oh WDF IS A CAB "He hailed a cab and headed home. doing in the late 17-1800 like wtf....how about he hailed something that sure as hell was probably not a cab. what about riding on a horse. like buying his own from a pedler and blah blah blah. either way BWS will be in time, its just inevitible.
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hahaha very funny, you know what i ment either way...it's Business
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Loved this episode, just to let everyone know the Boxed Set of Glee season 1 comes out September 14th. I will own that season!!! Ummm This episode mad me realise Finn might actualy turn....for Kurt. All Kurt has to do is plant one on him and BAM finn will be thinking about it all the time. Something like the German soap "Forbiddin Love". Either way i understand totaly why kurt did what he did, but seariously finn is going to far too. The whole "I wear underwear while i shower..." or maybe it was "I put it on so fast just in case your around". Like in all honestly none of my straight friends go that far...in fact while swimming they'll change right in front of me and they don't care, they just know that i won't touch them in a sexual way to advance on them. (no matter how hard i wana, i just don't) I see it as this. I'd rather be there friend, then creep them out so much that it pushes them away. Either way what kurt did went to far, the colours and everything just spelled "Were gay" to both of them.....worse yet it was finns money. Although when finn atempted to make it up It was SOOOO cute the whole "we need to talk" So cute!!! or the whole red queen outfit that gaga Actualy Wore to meet the Queen at the Royal Variety preformance. Just Great!!! Well 2 more episodes to go till SEASON finale. (Because just to let everyone know these episodes are still considered "Season 1") in which a season is 21 or 22 epsiodes.... and this one is 22 because they talked in interveiws how Idna Menzel was signed on for the Last 11 Episodes. P.S where's Mr. Sho and Mrs. Pilsbury?
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Season 7 was intense. Very powerful voices in that season.....the finale reminded me that Paige could actually sing and not ruin a mily cyrus song the "Climb" UGG As for Janet Jackson! BOOOO Get her off the stage, she sings in whispers and it sucked. i hated that preformance entirly. Christinas Preformance was O.K but YUK for the outfit and hair, SHE UGLY Best song of the night was All of the Idols....but David cook.....where the hell was he? Not impressed. But still Very Cool!!! Glad Lee won....Crystal just didn't do it for me....with her singing. Oh and all the bands from the 70's-80's? like wdf....Why not celebrate OLD music. We love OLD.....>=) Seriously Christina was the only "New" Artist on the stage....or at least new enough to still be making albums....UGGG Anyway i said my two Cents. Peace out American idol And Simon Cowel...i will not watch much of next season if any at all.
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Alright it's the Finale!!!! I'm Personaly Cheering for lee, i'd download his single....maybe his album (usualy in the fall) But Crystal i don't want to win although i'm scared she will....it's like last year but not as intense.
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oh well then we can only hope monday comes soon but i can understand the fact. Edit/beta read during the week. then read your own stories or write on weekends lol
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Personaly right now it's a shower, and thats only cuz i'm six feet tall....and showers for doing hair is great.. bathtubs are small for me....i wouldn't mind a jacusie tub thing thats really big....but if i win millions maybe i'll have that much room in a house to devote to it. anyway....my vote is shower.
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one small sentance....."You sttttttttttuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiidddddddddd whore!" (It's a saying i call my best of friends when i'm irratated with them but we know we still love each other) I only say it to you because chapter 23 was amazing. and 24 im so excited for.....seriously next weekend couldn't come soon enough surly you will post it by wed rather then next friday
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evil......how about u post it anyway.
