Mark M

Personaly i loved nicks humor at a joke....to bad it fell flat but it was funny! "why didnt u get him off?" "harry did that" hahaha! it is getting intense and i wana see this dan and brads dick with no lube thing happen!! will be best! one freaking week for 20 chapters eff. lol. anyway i wana say this is kinda a cliffhanger!

i have two pillows....just for me....and a queen sized bed! So comfortable! i enjoy it alot! but i don't have anymore pillows cuz it's messy to have more. n i dont expect to have any sleeping company in my bed.

One word----priceless. Definatly love this whole perspective story. BTW HMS Belvidera has much much longer chapters due to my previous insisting of DETAILS. Well i'm just wondering if Millenium is making you cut HMS chapters too because it's going over so well. I strongly Suggest you do not increase it's posting speed or the length of the chapters i love them to much for them to be so short like MIL. (lets be honestly a good reader can finish a chapter of MIL in ten-fifteen min) while HMS i'd argure for a half hour to 45 min! so much more refreashing! Anyway good work KEep it up! i want matt and brad to get It ON!

Jack and brad works for me....if clair was suddenly killed. Like now that would be a drama....last major character killed was tonto....who was loved anyway. then before that...probably billy........not gona lie i'm surprised none of these guys in this story has gotten majorly hurt. Like wade matt max brandon stef JP brad robbie clair jack ace cass darius Will JJ Cody Nick, Jim Crampton, lark, dan, doug Childers(where is he neway? i'm like chpter 30 in be-rad again so i dont remember how that ended). Like thats alot of people to not have someone suddenly be ripped away. knowing whats ahead i forshadow carson dies mysterously. Or dan and lark. So who knows! I think Darius as a narator would be cool, but how can he honeslty say he'd NEVER try anything with a guy? like we might be past his stage of trying, but who knows maybe he introduces a new college friend to the family who's gay and he finds out about darius family and then really puts pressure on him being gay friendly and "finding out for sure." So in that instance i'd like him has a narator. but only if it's something like "summer love" where it just covers a summer or something. Personaly i'd love to be in JP's Brads or Matts perspective or Stef even for 9/11

So you say 44 chapters....im glad ! but can u tell me if this covers 9/11?

WELL MAYBE I WANTED TO READ THE WHOLE STORY AGAIN *POUTS* hehehe i do wana read it all but i'll check to see what chapters talk about church

im currently re-reading be-rad. but dan church so far is Ace's good friend but a compleat dick. but yet not horrible enough to destroy brad yet....so i'm assuming it has someting to do when brad comes out............for some reason i think dan church is blowing lark....but not to sure....i thought there was something there. but anyway he's ace's friend to all the concerts they went to......and the "BASTILE Day party" havent had one of them since be-rad MARK!

well its the day after tomorrow and nothing yet....soo.........MA MA(Mom=aka MARK ARBOUR)! whats going on?

tuesday is over wheres chapter 12? i wana know more about ampolis or whatever it is..... ummm I understand brads atitude and i think bipolar is the wronge word. I lived with a mother who had bipolar. Messages get twisted so much around that it makes absolutly no sense, in stead of brad throwing a hammer into the car whiles he's drunk, he does it sober and with robbie in the car. Then thinks it's cuz there was a bug on the window. And i'm dead serious thats what can come out of it. Worst i've heard is my mom holding a knife over my dad's head....now that would be freaking scary! Other wise her head can light up like a pumpkin or people die on peoples birthdays and i'm gona scream it in the middle of the night! (i only woke up once to that, otherwise i was a heavey sleeper) Unfortunatly she died 3 years ago, by her own hand. Strong woman, love her dearly. I can talk about it easily now and it's no problem it was scary at first to try and get understanding of what she was going through. So yeah little bit personal there for ya about me. but Brad is way far from bipolar yet! Anyway Chapter 12....anyminute now.

I agree with Belvidera! im definatly hurting but yet i'm not cuz this story is soooo good.

Now when can i take a swig? ops i mean swing? with your hammer Agreed Okay so i realise when a story gets good i really just dont like peoples opinions. hahaha No offence to anyone but i just love the whole Drama it's Devistating and Drastic and taken to all levels! How can you agree or dissagree with robbie or Brad. Personaly i love being in this persona again Brad is awesome, even if he is breaking down, but it will only bring him up fifty thousand times stronger!! which is ok! Robbie however can Die i personaly still do not like him anymore! fisting kinda grosses me out still. but minor! This Rollercoaster Better end with a torn up family. Then the next book can bring it together!! (Honestly it will never happen, mark has never let a book stop at a bad place) Either Way! CLIFFY DECLAIRD! I'm Hurting to know who! P.s: EXCELENT WRITING

Hrmmmmmm Well Robbie is Pissing me off to the maxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx like mark wants him to look like. It makes him look like the bad guy. A Parelle novel would be cool to see how robbie is handleing these things. It's Interesting. My bets however are not on Lark. he didn't hate anyone....least of all brad and robbie till they were older.... Though i'd have to re-read be-rad and mim to find out before the next chapter....which i just might do hahaha. I bet it's robbies mother JUSTKIDDIN

one word "Saweeeeet!!!!!!!!" Seriously love this so far. and its getting better! How rich is brad though????? and if we "sized" brad up how big is he? hahahha or is he cut or uncut.....i just duno anymore....so long ago were we introduced to his....bigness ><

yes they'll get back together, no i dont want them back together. >=(

brad is still his same old self. Took me a bit to re-open to him. Robbie though is still disconected for me. doesn't seem like at all the same kid he used to be....sad really. I'm almost hoping Brad Finds someone knew.....but then again i don't cuz of the past. Honestly i forshadow they'll get back together or have some spec of a relationship by the end of this book.....oh did i just spoil the ending??? (Maybe this will cause mark to surprise us! hehehe.) I can only hope. Anyway! Lets get this story continuing. I'm really likeing the posting spead...... P.S-- i could complain about details details details.....but i wont because i like having a chapter quickly and there really good.

brad is still his same old self. Took me a bit to re-open to him. Robbie though is still disconected for me. doesn't seem like at all the same kid he used to be....sad really. I'm almost hoping Brad Finds someone knew.....but then again i don't cuz of the past. Honestly i forshadow they'll get back together or have some spec of a relationship by the end of this book.....oh did i just spoil the ending??? (Maybe this will cause mark to surprise us! hehehe.) I can only hope. Anyway! Lets get this story continuing. I'm really likeing the posting spead...... P.S-- i could complain about details details details.....but i wont because i like having a chapter quickly and there really good.

ah yes! now she is a good singer!! w00 w00

First of all i don't wana look like any chick....though i'd get all the guys if i were megan fox.....frankly i have no motivation to be a GIRL thank you very much. as for a guy i wouldn't want to look like would be justin bieber or......ossy osborn! YUCK

Well since i just read this whole freaking GFD story (no spin offs yet) OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DYLAN!?!?! Eff! whens the next chapter. hahahahaha just kidding. It was a really good read, just knowing what might be next would be amazing! eff!!!

i'm glad brad was chosen after "the box". It's a well deserving refreasher, although i'm begining to hate the rich lifestyle because people like stef who will never be poor again run the show, and they just give give give and give financialy! like ok he's a billionair but still.....i'm missing the fact that there was once a time where a weekend in hawai was even possible (IE: when brad was a kid he never ventured too far). To comment on the brad robbie relationship mid-life-crisis..........uhm.......well it's not cool. Everyone has the dream of one soul mate, and for that to be shattered once....ugh Brad will never trust robbie again. How can he? God damn i'm just outraged. Highschool really has changed Brads........outlook, i can see the writing style is more mature which.....i guess i hate it. i can't relate to a 37 year old, but College Kids! or Highschool kids i can cuz that's where i am at in life. So this story will be interesting, but from what i'm thinking is that i need to re-read stuff. P.S BWS syndrom is definatly at an all time high with three chapters of this story and none of it i am sad. Good Work Mark on the last few months of writing, it's sometimes really not noticed how we pretty much destroyed the box....untill the end. or at least i did, it's probably my least favourite. (sorry). but i'm still glad u get up and keep writing no matter what!! So Good job!

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm so excited to get back into brads shoes!! although all the sex will be between him and robbie....and maybe whoever he walks in on...lol!!!!!!!!!! wonder if something besides fisting has come up....maybe a pop bottle after all??? hahaha. alas i've read alot of stories with a gay-friendly pastor. always interesting how authors play them out. so lets get started!!!!!!!!!

Yeah i still hope he's dead, to bring him back is like the movies you can predict straight to the end. Like "Good always wins". It gets annoying and sure so far mark always brings a good end out of a bad situation, i hope though that this isn't one of them.

i do not dare read what i've missed. But i'll say one thing. Your really giving us the hope Arron is alive?!?!?! Can't you imagine the emotions that would go through this group of people you so humbly sat together in a story........i wonder if you even know your own characters at all anymore. This whole box story was ok, i didn't like the fact it went backward, but forward would be much more nice, even if you start making it day to day events in these characters lives and change your writing style a little bit, to make the story last. With out a doubt they will search for arron, my only hope is they find him dead. whether he did live out his life or he didn't. just find him dead. i couldn't even think how you would make arron probably in his....(JP is 60ish so steven would probably be around 75) 70's deal with the oncoming disaster of refacing his old life....it's just disastourous to the Hayes family....and i can't imagin robbie keeping this a secret, this whole reading of this thing as already put him on edge. either way i'm currious to read on, finaly something has spiked my interest and now it's true the Box is an okay read, i admit it. It took a while for me to latch on to it, it could be the possibility that you paused HMS to concentrat on one story thus forcing reading to enjoy it for what it is. I do need to re-read the CAP saga again as now we are bringing events into place i totaly forgot about, i thought stef was just on the streets right away as a kid in paris whoreing out to every man or women he found, not living with his mother till she died.....the thing is i guess is that i havent read the books of cap since i started them.....pretty much when i joined up to G.A and gave you my Virgin post. Either way i like the box for what it is, not a story of present characters but a storytelling of characters that made the characters at present to be. (I think that was almost wise....almost) I hope arron is dead so i don't have to feel what he would feel if he saw this crew of...characters (funny cuz there all homosexuals to boot, which in new Negros (los negros?)probably wouldn't have much of a Gay pride culture...in 1999....or maybe even now in 2010? the world is changing but slowly)

what if i updated this by .5% everyday? do you think mark would send us another chapter.....therefore i'm at 5.5% now too P.S this is still starting at my toes......bashfull or not i don't want it to start in other places or else might as well be 10% haha

*Lights a match* Here box Take this! :P Anyway i've been waiting for like four days....or i have no idea when chp26 whent up of hms.....anyway....i wana get this over with OK!?