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Nephylim

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  1. Nephylim

    Chapter 4

    The sun is warm, and halfway through the afternoon story, Daniel falls asleep with his head in my lap. There’s going to be a fight performance in a little while and I know Daniel will want to see it, but for now I’m content to simply sit and watch him sleep. Dear God he’s beautiful when he sleeps. He could be snoring, farting and spitting fire and he’d still be lovely. Dammit, where’s my mind going? What am I doing? Even since we kissed I’ve been plagued by fear and doubt. Am I taking advantage
  2. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    Thank you I find I can't write a whole story without darkness, but this one is fairly gentle - for me
  3. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    Thank you Daniel isn't autistic, but his problems aren't psychological. As for his father... Hmm... I think I should say, though, that being autistic doesn't mean you can't understand emotion. My son is autistic and he understands emotion very well. He has difficulty expressing it, but he's very empathetic and also analytical of how he and others feel. IT can be quite uncomfortable sometimes as he's so honest about it
  4. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    Umm.... I have kind of a reputation as Queen of Darkness for a reason Daniel is a blinding light, and the brighter the light the darker the shadow. Unfortunately there will be darkness, but nowhere near as dark as my stories usually get. No one dies and there is a HEA. Hope that is enough to see you through the darkness. There's plenty of sweetness too
  5. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    Thank you very much. It's slightly different to my other stories and I hope it works
  6. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    It definitely will I'm glad you're enjoying it
  7. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    Yes, Daniel's condition will be clarified somewhat, although there isn't a 'neat' explanation for why Daniel is as he is. There is for sure going to be resistance from Sara, but she loves her brother very much and has seen him hurt badly so I don't blame her at all. The problem she and her mother share, is that they haven't allowed Daniel to grow up and don't believe he can. They entirely underestimate him
  8. Nephylim

    Chapter 2

    Thank you. My son is autistic and Daniel has many similar traits, although his problems have a different cause. I hope you like him. I think I've treated him with respect, and Rayne certainly does.
  9. Nephylim

    Chapter 2

    Thank you. I hope you like the way the story goes
  10. Nephylim

    Chapter 2

    Thank you. I hope you like the way the story goes
  11. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    As I walk further into the village I see there are stalls laid out around the entrances to the houses. I wander over to one and find it set out with artefacts. I’m fascinated with the display. I’ve read about these things, seen photographs, even seen them in cabinets in museums, carefully catalogued and labelled, but to see them lying here, higgledy piggeldy as if someone had just thrown them down, is just about blowing my mind. A woman in full kit is explaining to a lady with a couple of kids
  12. Nephylim

    Chapter 2

    The week dragged on. I shared two more shifts with Sara, and nothing was said about Daniel and the trip to Wales. The weekend is my time to relax. No schoolwork and no ‘getting money to live’ work. I usually spend some time in the gym, some time in the park, and on Saturdays drink at a little bar not too far from where I live. Just about everyone who goes there knows me, and it’s a pleasant place to unwind. This weekend, I stayed there for less than an hour then went home. I spent the whole wee
  13. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    Thank you. Second chapter coming up
  14. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    I've missed you all too. Where has the time gone? I've been busy getting published and trying to get a name, but I haven't forgotten where I really belong.
  15. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    I fulfills the Good
  16. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    I hope so too. It's a bit different from most of my others - less angst and more humour
  17. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    Thank you I hope you like the reset
  18. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    “Rayn, there’s something you should know. My brother Daniel is…not like other people.” “What do you mean?” Sara is my best friend in the world. Well, my only friend. I used to have friends but, well, since it happened…. I came here, to this town, to get away from the pressure and the people, especially the ones who used to be my friends. To be entirely fair to them, it’s not their fault they’re not my friends anymore. I was the one who isolated myself, who pushed them away and I guess if I ca
  19. Sara's brother, Daniel is special and she really doesn't like the idea of her new co worker paying him too much attention. Daniel, on the other hand has different ideas.
  20. For me there is no praise greater than that I've made someone think. Thank you!!
  21. Nephylim

    Epilogue

    Wow. That was an amazing review. Thank you! Maybe the reason you liked this one but not other BDSM was because even though the BDSM of course plays a large part it's not actually what the story is about. It's just a tool to explore the psyche of the characters which IS what the story's about. I wrote the story specifically to try to understand why bright, intelligent people stay in abusive relationships when it seems so obvious to everyone else what's going on. I guess it was kind of a social experiment for me, but I'm happy with the way it turned out and it taught me a lot. Adam is a complex character. There is a lot that makes me think that if Lian hadn't got his claws into him, he would have been a decent human being. However, by the time the story starts he's a lost cause. Thank you again for your review and I'm so, so happy you enjoyed the story
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    Story

    Thank you
  23. Nephylim

    Chapter 14

    James is a spoiled little rich kid who's in for a very serious eye opening. He's a dick, but he is Sacha's brother and he will be more of a brother later.
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    Chapter 1

    I'm so glad you're enjoying it, at least the beginning Praise from another writer you admire is the best praise!!
  25. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    I'm so glad you're enjoying it, at least the beginning Praise from another writer you admire is the best praise!!
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