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  1. Nephylim

    Chapter 16

    Pussy Cat Pussy Cat is the sequel. I think most of the points you made are addressed there Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm really glad you enjoyed, and yes, Rover is amazing and I think he gets even better in the sequel.
  2. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    Thank you. I'm very fond of my pussy. I've become attached to him Glory is a sweetheart. I love how he morphs depending on which side of his nature is prevalent and I'mm very glad it's usually the cat. I had an absolute blast writing him in this one and the sequel and I really should get around to writing the third book. I have started.
  3. Nephylim

    Chapter 15

    Ryland is just plain evil and he wants Sacha simple as. There obviously must have been some planning to have found Sacha, but I figure he'd have got someone else to do that for him. He's very focused. As for the family... They mean well, but they're not equipped for someone like Sacha. Lacey is looked to as a mother figure but she's just not ready to be a mother to anyone let alone a 17 year old with MAJOR issues. As I hope I showed at the beginning, although she's sweet she is kinda spoiled in that she likes to always get her own way.
  4. Nephylim

    Chapter 15

    Ryland is just plain evil and he wants Sacha simple as. There obviously must have been some planning to have found Sacha, but I figure he'd have got someone else to do that for him. He's very focused. As for the family... They mean well, but they're not equipped for someone like Sacha. Lacey is looked to as a mother figure but she's just not ready to be a mother to anyone let alone a 17 year old with MAJOR issues. As I hope I showed at the beginning, although she's sweet she is kinda spoiled in that she likes to always get her own way.
  5. Nephylim

    Chapter 15

    Ryland is just plain evil and he wants Sacha simple as. There obviously must have been some planning to have found Sacha, but I figure he'd have got someone else to do that for him. He's very focused. As for the family... They mean well, but they're not equipped for someone like Sacha. Lacey is looked to as a mother figure but she's just not ready to be a mother to anyone let alone a 17 year old with MAJOR issues. As I hope I showed at the beginning, although she's sweet she is kinda spoiled in that she likes to always get her own way.
  6. Nephylim

    Chapter 4

    Thank you As far as Ryland (the bad man) is concerned, it doesn't really come down to whether Alex/Sacha can give testimony or harm him in some way, It's more of a personal vendetta. Sacha belongs to Ryland, and what happened was all his fault. It's more punishment and revenge than escaping charges.
  7. That's wonderful. It completely encapsulated Kayden's nature and Damien's love for him in a tiny amount of words. I can wait to read more about my favourite Neko
  8. That's fantastic. I totally agree that labels aren't helpful, but sometimes they are necessary. The world is full of books with strong characters and the huge majority of them are strictly het. That is, if there is any kind of relationship it's always male/female. Which is fine. Except the world is not just full of relationship that are always male/female. It's not just about assigning labels, it's more about people being able to pick up a book and find characters like them and relationships just like their own. I'm wouldn't dream of presuming that I'm the only one who can write those books, I know absolutely I'm not. There are many others out there, so many better than me, that write fantastic books with strong gay, bisexual, transexual, transgender, asexual, gender fluid, and all the other shades that make up our rainbow. The problem is, these books are not readily available and we're all trying to do our bit to drag them out into the mainstream so that anyone, not just gay people, who want to read them know they're there and can find them easily. My dream is that one day there will be gay, lesbian, transexual gender fluid and all kinds of other characters in series that have the success of Harry Potter and Twilight. I'm not conceited enough to think I'll write them, but I want to play my part in paving the way for them. In doing that, I want to give other people a voice because I've banged on long enough
  9. Nephylim

    Chapter 27

    I don't think there ws a problem with the change of POV at all. It was a lovely wind up to a rollercoaster of a story. Hope you have some more up your sleeve
  10. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    WEll thanks hun. There's no such thing as too late You're in time for the last chapter so you get to read the whole thing
  11. Nephylim

    Chapter 25

    He gets a break
  12. Nephylim

    Chapter 25

    He gets a break
  13. Nephylim

    Chapter 25

    Haha. Can having fun be a bad thing. At the moment at least Suki is all about sex and that's a world Sacha knows all about. I think at this moment everyone is feeling sorry for Sacha in that situation, but what about Suki. Sacha would eat him alive. Poor kid! The next chapter I think will satisfy some, stir up the rest
  14. Nephylim

    Chapter 25

    YES! Nik was an ass, and Suki wasn't. Okay, well maybe Suki was a bit, but that's him. I can see him being like that all the time with that cheeky smile, but when he's serious he can be so loving and intense. I think if he finds 'the one' he's not going to be flirting anymore.
  15. Nephylim

    Chapter 25

    Is Suki really the last person he should be around? Someone who likes fun and games, who's open and not ashamed of who he is or what he does? I wonder. And as for Nik...He's got a lot of growing up to do, no matter what he thinks.
  16. Nephylim

    Chapter 25

    You'll have to read next week's installment to find out. Not sure this is a bad break for Sacha. Suki definitely adds some interest to his life, and shows there are more fish in the sea than just Nik Buckingham. If Nik is prepared to run off without even giving Sacha a chance to talk, knowing his history, then is he really the best person for Sacha?
  17. Nephylim

    Chapter 25

    “Oh God, I’m sorry.” James gasped. “Are you alright? I didn’t mean to hurt you.” “Just stop fighting over him, for God’s sake. You’re going to snap him in half.” Blinking back tears of pain Sacha glanced up at the speaker. He vaguely recognized him, but while last time he’d been intimidating, this time he seemed cool, but friendly. Long black hair was scraped back into a pony tail, from a face that was angular but definitely not unattractive. He had eyeliner on today, and it made his light blu
  18. Nephylim

    Chapter 25

    What a lovely chapter. Just one thing. Predumably, with Brad dead, Devyn will now inherit the estate. Wouldn't it make more sense for Jason to move in with him there, rather than Devyn move into a room as his house. If he stayed at the estate he could be close to Michael, too, and maybe forgive Chris and Trent. Also Jason would be close to Lyle, and I hope before the end of the story we get some more Jason and Lyle
  19. Hey all. I have a blog called Rainbow Warriors. It's a YA blog separate to my adult one. It's mission statement is To bring gay characters into the mainstream and make them simply characters, as we are simply people. but as well as to promote YA work - mine and others (so anyone who has a YA published book, or story here on Ga you'd like to promote I'd be happy to host you - I want it to be a place to promote gay youth. The problem is, I'm completely out of touch with gay youth, especially since I'm not so active on the forms. Therefore I need your help!! Please, please help me with views, ideas, blog posts, interviews, art - anything and everything. The doors are open to you http://cherylheadford.blogspot.co.uk/
  20. WOOOT WOOT. Its your BIRTHDAY Have a great one
  21. Nephylim

    Chapter 24

    Wow! Exciting Still haven't resolved that cliffie girl. Devyn;s rescued but we don't know if he's going to live. Surely you wouldn't do that to us now? Especially not to Michael? Poor Michael. You have to let Devyn live for him...surely Although I'm one to talk. Not that I do cliffies of course, but there are touchy moments in most of my stories. That;s what I like about your writing No fluffy bunnies
  22. Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. Aurix, the third in the series is part written, but I'm pretty much like Glory in that something new and shiny comes along and I chase after it. One of these days the glittery balls will come rolling back to Glory and I WILL finish it. When I do it will be posted here for sure
  23. Nephylim

    Chapter 24

    That's what I thought. I mean, yeah James is a dick. He's swung from one extreme to the other and he's as far in one direction as Lacey is in the other, but hes doing his best to make things up to Sacha and history will show that joining the band WAS the best thing that could happen to Sacha.
  24. Nephylim

    Chapter 24

    Lots happen in the last two chapters and it feels a bit rushed even to me, but I had to make a decision - keep going for another half a book, or round it up the way it did. I do have plans to write a sequel at some point and I think you should all be satisfied with Sacha ending on a high
  25. Nephylim

    Chapter 24

    I think getting Sacha to sing was one of James' better ideas. He's a selfish shit, and he really should have waited, but Sacha was sinking into a depression and needed a shot of something fast. Maybe singing and Suki weren't ideal, but they moved things along.
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