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Chapter 27 - The Choir and the Wheel
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 27 - The Choir and the Wheel
I have had a fear since I started writing these last couple of chapters that I would completely lose my readers because of the complete change in direction and the fact that I know so much of the background lore it might not make sense to readers who don't have that background. Think fallen angels -
Nothing like keeping the readers on the edge of their seats. Bridge was never really in any danger, and you'll find out why soon
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Serif is not what he seems, and exactly what he seems. He's not a lost boy for sure, and he's not there by accident. He's...waiting
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Chapter 24 Fading and Shining
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 24 Fading and Shining
Just have to point out that the in the last response should have been b ) Yes, there is hope. This is why Astaria was so insistent on Star ascending, because it really is Bridge's only hope -
Chapter 23 - Sam and Alex
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 23 - Sam and Alex
That is so true. And the really sad thing is that the people who hurt them most were a) the people who should have been caring and protecting them and truly under the impression they were doing a GOOD thing. -
He has way more under his roof than he is aware of. Some of his boys are so not what they seem
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They just have to make sure it's the RIGHT therapist And life is its own therapy now Sacha is beginning to live one
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They just have to make sure it's the RIGHT therapist And life is its own therapy now Sacha is beginning to live one
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Thank you. I love that you're always so supportive
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Because he's magic.
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Because he's magic.
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There is, indeed a VERY significant reason why Star has to ascend, and it has nothing to do with Astaria, or Luma. I'm not sure who Luma loves most. Among the four of them I think he grows to love them all, but I think Star will always have the edge.
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OMG did Sacha shoot Frank? Haha. I know what you mean. I think Nik will find a much less drastic and dramatic way of dealing with things - he always does
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No, James is not back at school. He's off for the Summer. This is a real turning point int he story. Sacha's had a taste of life and he's about to get another bit bite. It changes everything
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Frank's job is done in many ways. He was he big bad detective who had to track Alex down and rescue him. As far as taking care of a delicate vulnerable child is concerned he doesn't ahve a clue and is probably hiding. Lacey is well meaning and dangerous. This seems like a bad situation for Sacha, but this really is where things turn around for him.
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Sacha had absolutely the best day of his life, on the beach with Nik. He dozed, ate, paddled, directed Nik to build a sandcastle, put the recliner in the sea and let the waves wash over his legs…. He was so exhausted, he slept all the way home in the car, then went inside and straight to bed and sleep again. The next morning he awoke, refreshed, bright eyed and ready to do it all over again, but Nik didn’t come. He hadn’t said he would, but Sacha had been hoping, in fact expecting him to, and h
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I have to wonder why Brad is going to all this bother with Devyn. Why he doesn't just do away with him altogether. Given the sherrif is in his pocket I'm sure he could get away with it. What with the the danger of him getting out and telling his story to someone I would have thought that would be a lot easier. So...it definitely seems as If Brad has other uses for him. Can't wait to find out what they are.
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Chapter 19 - Past Meets Present. True Nature Revealed
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 19 - Past Meets Present. True Nature Revealed
Oh yes. There are mysteries afoot. Big Ones! -
I'm so glad you're falling for my Bridge. He brings such joy - and such sadness. He is so much more than he seems, but at the same time exactly as he seems. I'm glad you see the vulnerability in Luma.
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I have a real love of writing sweet, childlike characters. They are so rare and so beautiful in this harsh world, like flowers that get crushed underfoot, but if you happen to find one and nourish it, it becomes breathtakingly beautiful and lights up your life. Bridge is definitely one of those bright flowers.
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Chapter 16 - Blazing Star
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 16 - Blazing Star
Thank you. That damn sweetness just keeps sneaking in Those boys are having a bad influence on my big bad vamp. Star's story was so sad. All the boys have such sad stories. It seems that Luma has unwittingly become a repository for lost souls. -
He he. Gotcha. Luma has that effect. The thing is, I started this as a 'traditional' vampire story and wanted Luma to be a big bad vamp, but he just kept getting nicer.
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He's changing apace. It's as if a lock has been turned and he's opened up inside. Is it a coincidence that happened at this point in time. Is it a coincidence that those particular people came into his life just at this point? What do you think Thank you for your continuing support. It really is appreciated
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It's not precisely true that Luma can travel the universe. The house exists outside space, in a fold in the fabric of the universe, so it can open out anywhere it wants, buto only in this world. The only place that can act as a door into another world is the summerhouse, which isn't always accessible. Luma is not, however, a creature of the earth as you will see.
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Everything is in a state of flux and oh yeah there's danger!!
