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Nephylim

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  1. Nephylim

    Chapter 6

    You're welcome, sweet pea. Sacha's adorable. At least I think so, but he's got such a lot to learn.
  2. Nephylim

    Chapter 6

    There are a lot of surprises. Sacha struggles to come to terms with everything.The wealth makes it harder and easier.
  3. Nephylim

    Chapter 7

    For definite Lacey. Shes his mom now? Sacha has a way to go, and it will be fun to watch,I think
  4. Nephylim

    Chapter 7

    Sacha was nervous, as he climbed the last few steps and passed Lacey, stepping into the room. He froze. It was enormous, seeming to stretch the whole length of the house. Four dormer windows along one side of the ‘L’ shaped room, let sunlight stream in, setting the warm wood floors alight. “I’m sorry it’s so bare. We didn’t know what you’d like so we just moved a few pieces up from downstairs. We can go shopping when you’ve settled in a bit.” Sacha blinked at her, barely hearing what she said.
  5. Nephylim

    Chapter 6

    PART 2 – SACHA’S POINT OF VIEW Sacha was scared, but not as scared as he had been for the last few days. He was on his way home; at least, the place he’d been told was his home. He hadn’t set foot there for the past eight years and had no memories of what it was like, even though he’d been told it was the same place he was brought up in for the first nine years of his life. It was good to get out of the hospital. There was nothing worse, he thought, than being in hospital when you weren’t ill.
  6. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    Thanks hun. you must like the story loads to have reviewed 4 times Yes, there is another sibling, James, and no he isn't going to like Sasha much :)In fact he's going to cause all kinds of problems
  7. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    He's just an evil sadistic bastard
  8. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    Thank you I don't know where the story came from either I'm glad I wrote it and I'm really glad you liked it. I'll try to be consistent on posting it
  9. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    It does. No one realizes yet how deep it goes. They will soon. He's got a long road ahead but it's not all going to be an unhappy one
  10. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    Aww. You made me blush. Seriously. Smile too thank you. Glad you like the story.
  11. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    “What the hell do you mean his condition’s deteriorated?” Lacey demanded from the back seat. “You said he was fine, that he just had a chest infection. How can he have got, ‘racing-through-town with-the-sirens-going, sick in a couple of hours?” “I don’t know. I’ve told you everything I was told, Lacey. You know as much as I do.” “What precisely did they say?” Adam demanded. “I don’t know…. Acute something…. Respiratory arrest…distress…. I wasn’t listening by then. I just wanted to get the hel
  12. Nephylim

    Chapter 4

    Thank you for taking the time to comment. It makes my day every time I think its safe to say that what happens next isn't good, but it does get better...for a while.
  13. Nephylim

    Chapter 4

    Don't worry, Frank hasn't gone alone. He's safe. Sacha? Not so much. You'd have thought hospitals would have better security.
  14. Nephylim

    Chapter 4

    Frank and his family have more weapons in their arsenal than it might appear. As for Sacha's captor, there is no end to his evil, and his evil hasn't ended. But he obviously doesn't know Sacha as well as he thinks he does because...well, I don't want to spoil that. It comes later, much later.
  15. Nephylim

    Chapter 4

    “So what’s this all about?” Adam asked, lowering himself into a chair in the hotel suite. He sighed as he crossed his long legs and lifted his heels to the low coffee table. Lacey knocked them onto the floor crossly. “Not on the table, Adam.” “What’s your problem? It’s not your table.” “No, but I have manners no matter whose table it is.” “Give me a break, Lace. I’ve been driving for four hours and I’m exhausted.” “Whatever.” “Sit down, Lacey.” Frank prowled the hotel room, coming to rest
  16. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    Thank you, I'm glad you like it.
  17. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    That guy is a slippery bugger. All I will say is that he get what he deserves at some point, but will deserve it a whole lot more by then
  18. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    Thank you. I've been reading through it to get it in shape to post and even I am surprised by some of the things I've said.
  19. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    He's a man with an obsession which has consumed him for so long, and on the basis of which he has made some very bad decisions, who has come to the end of it and realizes it wasn't the end he'd imagined - or maybe hoped, it would be. I think he's going to suffer for his mistakes
  20. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    Thank you hun. I get awfully confused with that 'complete' button and have had to be gently nudged *cough* on it before There are 26 chapters in all and some will be sweet, some will be fun, and some will have you tearing out your hair, at least that's how I hope it will go down. I've explored some different territory so be prepared for surprises
  21. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    No problem. There are a lot of adventures for Sacha to come. Just to warn you, though some of them are really tough
  22. Nephylim

    Chapter 2

    The story hasn't ended, hun. There's a LOT more to come. See, that's the confusion with the completed/in progress button. I get confused. The story is completely written, but not completely posted Grrrr. Never fear, there are 23 more chapters
  23. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    “Dad!” Frank raised tired eyes to see his one and only daughter bearing down on him along the hospital corridor. He groaned inwardly. Why had he told her? With a sigh, he put down the paperwork he’d been reading and stood up to greet her. “Where is he? Can I see him?” “He’s asleep. Sit down. What are you doing here?” “Are you serious?” She flopped down onto a squeaky plastic seat and stared at him as if he had two heads. “You call to tell me that, after all this time, you finally found Alex,
  24. Nephylim

    Chapter 2

    No, Frank had no idea Sacha/Alex would be there. It was just one of his random visits. There are a lot of runaways on the streets of Cardiff, so I would imagine he'd go to places like that. Cites with large runaway populations. Frank is a Detective Chief Inspector with the Met - the Metropolitan Police, a special force only in London. He's a big cheese. I would imagine there are two ways the locals would have dealt with him. Either they would have been unwelcoming, their top ranks rankling at the intrusion and being difficult, or they would be helpful. I think, in this case, given the reasons for his interference, the top ranks would have given the okay and the lowly custody sergeant, although he could have been obstructive if he'd wanted to, was pretty much obliged to co operate. Although he's from a different part of the country and a different force he is a Detective Chief Inspector, so I don't think they would have had any problems with him taking Sacha to an interview room. In reality, due to the fact Sacha is a minor, I would imagine there would have to be two police officers with him and I took huge liberties with that one.
  25. Nephylim

    Chapter 2

    Cliffhangers? I don't write cliffhangers It's definitely not a requirement of GA but I like to end each chapter in a way that makes people want to come back and read the next one.It seems I'm succeeding, so far
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