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2013 - Spring - A Night To Remember Entry

Service Call - 1. Story

The last thing I expected that day was to meet Adam.

I was one year out of college, a twenty-three year old working in I.T. at the same university I had attended. I was enjoying my first full week of vacation by going to the gym each day. It would be beach going weather soon and I needed to lose a few pounds that I put on from spending too much time inside.

On my way home from the gym I picked up some Thai stir-fry in sweet and sour sauce with jasmine rice. Eating this would probably erase most of the gains I had made at the gym, but this was one of my favorite meals and I had craved it all week.

As I pulled into my assigned parking spot, I noticed a company vehicle in the guest parking spot next to mine. The magnetic sign on the driver’s door read: Wilson Computer Support with the company catch phrase, ‘Why take your computer to the shop? We will come to you!’ The driver was still in the vehicle using his phone, and I couldn’t tell much about him because his head was turned away from me.

I got out of my car and went around to the passenger side to collect the Thai food out of the passenger floor board and as I closed the door, the driver climbed out of his vehicle.

He looked in his mid to late twenties and I estimated that he was a few inches taller than me. I fell in love with him the moment our eyes met. His angular face, striking green eyes, and flawless complexion was topped by a head full of dark brown hair cut into a faux hawk that stood up in rigid spikes. I imagined most women have either wanted to possess his beauty, or fall prey to it. My heart raced and my face felt flushed as I stared. I always got embarrassed when I was this close to an attractive guy, and I'd never been near one as gorgeous as him.

He broke eye contact first and looked me over. Sniffing the air and licking his lips, he said, “Mmmmm. Smells good.”

His voice was deep and it matched perfectly with what I imagined him to sound like.

I stuttered for a moment and smiled while responding, “Thai stir-fry.”

“I’m Adam.”

“Michael,” I replied keeping my eyes locked on his.

“Well, I hope you enjoy it, Michael. Do you mind? I need to get something out of my trunk for a customer.”

I stopped staring and moved out of his way. As he walked past me, I felt electricity in the air and my gaydar was going off like crazy. I walked towards my apartment complex and then decided to take a chance. I turned around and walked to the rear of his car.

I nervously cleared my throat and asked, “Do you have a business card? My computer sometimes gets infected with malware and I hate having to take it to the shop. Maybe I could utilize your company’s services at some point?”

“Sure! It’s just me though. Most of my business is warranty repair for Dell, HP and Toshiba, but I have several customers who contact me when they have general computer problems.”

He reached into his left pants pocket. While he wasn’t looking I took the opportunity to devour the sight of his body from head to toe. He wore a red, short-sleeve polo shirt with khaki pants and brown dress shoes. I could tell from his arms and the way his polo clung to his body that he was in excellent shape. He pulled a silver business card-holder from his pocket, opened it and handed me a card.

I tore my gaze away from his body in time to notice him smirking at me. I took the card politely and then made a fool of myself by saying, “I’ll call you as soon as I have a problem!” I must have seemed far too excited to have a computer problem and I think both of us knew that.

His smile was like a soft white cloud, but he didn’t respond. I turned around and, feeling embarrassed, walked quickly to my apartment. My heart already yearned for him although we had just met.

While eating my food I devised a plan to mess up my laptop’s operating system so I had a reason to call Adam and invite him over. After eating half of the box I put the rest in the fridge, showered and worked on my plan.

First, I made a complete backup of my laptop’s operating system to an external USB drive. The last thing I wanted to do was wipe the drive and install Windows from scratch, apply all those damn updates and then reinstall all the applications.

Second, I removed my virus protection, pop-up and ad blocker and downgraded Flash and Java. I wanted to make sure that my system was so screwed up that he wouldn’t be able to fix it quickly.

Third, I went to every site I knew would lead to infection and clicked the links I would normally tell someone to avoid.

Last, I rebooted to test the results. Just as I expected, the computer was slower and as soon as my wireless network connection went active I started getting pop-ups.

I was ready to execute my plan.

I called the number listed on his business card.

“This is Adam. How may I help you?”

“Hi Adam, this is Michael. We met around lunch time and I asked for your business card. I booted up my laptop just now and I’m getting annoying pop-ups without even launching an Internet browser. Do you think I could schedule a service call?”

I thought I heard him chuckle, but it was muffled. “Sure Michael, I’m finishing up with another client, but I can come over as soon as I’m finished. Which apartment number is yours?”

I hesitated before answering, “I’m in building twelve, apartment eight.”

“I’ll be there within thirty minutes.”

I panicked and my stomach started churning. I never expected him to come over so quickly. I was going to have to rush to make sure my place was immaculate before he arrived.

I vacuumed my living room, cleaned the bathroom, loaded the dishwasher and changed clothes. I put on a tight-fitting Aeropostale t-shirt and pair of button fly jeans, closed my bedroom door and sat down on the couch.

He didn’t make me wait very long. I heard a knock on the door about five minutes later. I tried not to make it obvious that I was excited to see him and took my time reaching the door. I gathered myself and opened the door to see Adam smiling at me.

“Thanks for coming over so quickly.”

I motioned towards the laptop sitting on the dining table and he sat down in front of it.

“I really didn’t expect to see you so soon. I hope you didn’t rush to break something just to give me work.”

“Nah, it’s just a weird coincidence that this thing broke. I think it’s been getting slower for a while now.”

He looked at my laptop for a few minutes checking out the list of installed programs, and reviewing the contents of the program files, application data and temporary directories. Afterwards, he turned and stared at me with a frown.

“Michael, you haven’t been keeping your system updated and it appears that your anti-virus program has been removed. I’m going to start by creating a new administrator account on your system and running several tools under that account to clean up the infection. Then I’ll install a free anti-virus software package and update your Flash and Java installations so that you’ll hopefully avoid re-infection.”

“Thanks.”

I cleared my throat to get his attention. “Would you like something to drink? I have iced tea, water and milk.”

“Sure, water would be nice.”

I got up from the table and before entering the kitchen, quickly glanced back and noticed that his eyes were on me. He had been looking at my ass! My hunch from the parking lot was right. I broke out into a huge smile, filled a glass with ice and water from the fridge and set it down in front of him.

“Thanks. You’ve really done a number on this system. It looks like you visited several malware sites after we talked and picked up more than one infection. In fact, I think you managed to pick up a rootkit virus.”

He was quiet for a few minutes while staring at my browser’s history and then he glared at me.

“Why would you visit just these sites?”

I forgot to delete my Internet history! I realized he knew what I had done. As much as I tried to avoid blushing, my face felt flushed and fell to avoid his gaze, but not for long.

“Did you do this just so you could see me again?”

I didn’t answer. At that moment all I felt was shame. Instead of being upfront, I had been devious and went overboard. No one in their right mind would visit all of those sites and definitely not in a row. I should have realized that he would be bright enough to know what I had done.

“I’m going to leave this as is. You can fix your own mess. I have enough work to do without being asked to fix something under false pretenses. If you liked me, why didn’t you just ask me out? You had two chances, once at the car and once when you called me. Next time, just take a chance and ask the guy out.”

Stuttering, I asked, “How much do I owe you?”

“Nothing … I want to pretend this never happened.”

I opened my apartment door and he walked out without saying goodbye. I felt like shit, but I kept thinking about his last comment: ‘Next time, just take a chance and ask the guy out.’

Gathering enough courage, I took my phone out of my pocket and called him. He was at the bottom of the stairs when he answered.

“Yes?”

“Hi Adam, this is Michael. When I met you in the parking lot today I felt an instant connection that I haven’t felt before. I really like you and I’d like to ask you to have dinner with me, my treat of course.”

He didn’t respond, but he started walking up the steps with the phone still against his ear. I was nervous at this point and expected him to yell at me. In fact, I backed against the door frame as he approached.

He got really close to me, our faces were just inches apart but his phone was still against his ear. “Michael, I’d love to have dinner with you, but I expect dessert after dinner. I’ll pick you up at six. How does that sound?”

I smiled from ear to ear and replied, “Great.”

He leaned in and kissed me on the lips. It wasn’t a long kiss, but it felt wonderful.

Adam hung up on me, put his phone in his pocket and smiled. I stayed where I was and watched his body move as he walked away.

After a few minutes I went back inside, closed the door and began preparing for our date. I hoped I wouldn’t mess up my second chance with him.

Something deep inside told me that it was going to be a magical night.

One thought kept running through my mind while I got ready.

I love dessert.

Copyright © 2013 A.J.; All Rights Reserved.
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Stories posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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On 03/16/2013 07:16 PM, lilansui said:
I was smiling like an idiot through this story, it's so freaking cute and awesome! Great write and thanks for making me smile.
Well, they say write what you know. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I smiled a lot reading the story over and over while doing revisions.
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On 03/16/2013 04:35 AM, Dolores Esteban said:
LOL. Interesting what you can do in the briefest of time when you are bound and determined...Nice and cute story. It made me smile.
I have a lot of respect for authors who can write a story over time. I don't seem to be able to do that yet. I need to wrap my head around the entire concept and then write it out in one sitting. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)
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On 03/16/2013 05:36 AM, Celethiel said:
*laughs* for all of that I feel sorry for the computer.

Other then that most of it made me think it was going to be a flowery mushy love story, but I was kind of pleasantly surprised how the whole thing got turned around with a twist.

Michael backup up his system, so it will be just fine once he restores the backup. :P
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On 03/16/2013 09:22 AM, Ieshwar said:
This was really sweet. And very cute. Had a huge smile by the end.
Thanks. I am happy to know that so many people liked it.
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On 03/16/2013 01:21 PM, Luc Rosen said:
Omg cute, BUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT kind of a dick move! Although I have to say Adam being one to not be impressed with lies and then being so extremely upfront about it pretty atypical.

I was grinning throughout the entire story. Very good work AJ :)

I think Adam's reactions reflect the way I would act. I might get angry, but if I liked Michael enough I might be willing to let it pass if Michael tried to make things right. Thanks for your review!
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Played to your strengths and it showed by writing what you know, but what I found so charming about this little gem was the awkwardness of being caught and the redemption of being given a second chance.

The fact he had the balls to make the second call, respect! :P

I'd have been a BIG chicken lol!

So short and concise, yet really well planned and written AJ. That was a stunning entry. Thanks buddy. :) xx

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That was a fun read. I'm glad that he didn't give in. It was a dick move to screw-up his own computer but I'm glad that he man up at the end and asked him out! Yummmmmmm! ;)

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On 03/18/2013 03:22 AM, K.C. said:
That was a fun read. I'm glad that he didn't give in. It was a dick move to screw-up his own computer but I'm glad that he man up at the end and asked him out! Yummmmmmm! ;)
Well, a lot of us have done stupid things for love or to get the attention of someone we like. Michael got lucky that his stupid mistake didn't cost him more. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
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On 03/17/2013 07:31 PM, Slytherin said:
Poor guy, forgot to delete internet history :lol:

I really liked this story, short and sweet :)

Yeah, Michael made the simplest mistake with his plan. He thought of everything except how to cover his tracks. I thought people might relate to forgetting to delete the internet history. :)
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On 03/17/2013 05:01 PM, Yettie One said:
Played to your strengths and it showed by writing what you know, but what I found so charming about this little gem was the awkwardness of being caught and the redemption of being given a second chance.

The fact he had the balls to make the second call, respect! :P

I'd have been a BIG chicken lol!

So short and concise, yet really well planned and written AJ. That was a stunning entry. Thanks buddy. :) xx

I'm pretty sure I wouldn't have made the second call. I'd be hoping I never saw Adam again after making a fool of myself. Thanks for your kind review :)
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On 03/21/2013 05:14 AM, Michael9344 said:
Ha. Short fun! Enjoyed reading this! Great:).
Thanks :) I like short stories, they are easy to write! :P
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Its amazing what a writer can think up when he writes what he knows in this case about computers. I loved the hastiness and swift work in Michael's character. I loved Adam's Maturity. The first sentence totally hooked me. The last paragraph had me wooping woop woop. Inbetween, I was fascinated. The dream that is Adam almost gets away, but quick thinker Michael (as I said) Is so intent on drawing him in that he won't allow him to just fade out of his life. Not when he went to all the trouble of trashing his computer. I know there is a backup, but still. This is an incident based story and the conflict is almost tangible, quick and worth reading over and over again.

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On 03/28/2013 12:48 AM, LJH said:
Its amazing what a writer can think up when he writes what he knows in this case about computers. I loved the hastiness and swift work in Michael's character. I loved Adam's Maturity. The first sentence totally hooked me. The last paragraph had me wooping woop woop. Inbetween, I was fascinated. The dream that is Adam almost gets away, but quick thinker Michael (as I said) Is so intent on drawing him in that he won't allow him to just fade out of his life. Not when he went to all the trouble of trashing his computer. I know there is a backup, but still. This is an incident based story and the conflict is almost tangible, quick and worth reading over and over again.
Louis, you are making me blush big time here. The truth is this story wouldn't be nearly as good without your editing skills and suggestions.
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Funny story. Great ending but Adam should have made Michael wait a night. I'm sure dessert. Would have been even more awesome after a nights delay.

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On 04/10/2013 09:04 AM, Daithi said:
Funny story. Great ending but Adam should have made Michael wait a night. I'm sure dessert. Would have been even more awesome after a nights delay.
I'm sure I would have made the guy wait if I had actually forgiven him for misleading me. Thanks for your review. :)
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Your lovely birthday wish today made me come visit to say thanks, instead I decided to ready our wares. I'm glad I did, loved this. The set up was excellent and Adams righteous anger was well deserved. But in the end. Be still my fluttering heart.

 

Now to your other stuff. :)

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On 07/24/2013 08:54 AM, Kiltie69 said:
Your lovely birthday wish today made me come visit to say thanks, instead I decided to ready our wares. I'm glad I did, loved this. The set up was excellent and Adams righteous anger was well deserved. But in the end. Be still my fluttering heart.

 

Now to your other stuff. :)

Kiltie,

 

That you took the time to read and review my stories on your birthday is making me blush big time. Thanks for reading and reviewing it. :)

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LOL the gals in the chat room were right - this is an adorable story. I was wondering how long it would take Adam to catch on to what Michael did! Even I know enough to delete browsing history regularly, and i am about as un-computer savvy as they come! Completely enjoyable!

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On 08/10/2013 04:13 AM, Kitt said:
LOL the gals in the chat room were right - this is an adorable story. I was wondering how long it would take Adam to catch on to what Michael did! Even I know enough to delete browsing history regularly, and i am about as un-computer savvy as they come! Completely enjoyable!
Kitt, you are making me blush! :*) Yes, Michael was sloppy and infected his system, but was too consumed in his plot that he forgot to delete the evidence. I'd like to think that in the end it worked out though. :)
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That was so cute! :D The scene with the kiss and both of them on the phone made me wish I was a better artist, cause I really want to draw it... You're a great writer, and if you don't want to believe me, believe the umpteen reviews you've got on one short story. You're legendary!

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Gotta hand it to you this was a really nice story... Kinda true to life with how some people go about asking for a date haha. I really think you should write some more :D

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On 08/24/2013 10:53 PM, Thorn Wilde said:
That was so cute! :D The scene with the kiss and both of them on the phone made me wish I was a better artist, cause I really want to draw it... You're a great writer, and if you don't want to believe me, believe the umpteen reviews you've got on one short story. You're legendary!
Thanks Thorn. I've actually wanted to make this story into a short film for YouTube, but haven't found the right person to play Adam yet. :)
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On 03/29/2014 05:49 AM, Phantom said:
Gotta hand it to you this was a really nice story... Kinda true to life with how some people go about asking for a date haha. I really think you should write some more :D
Thanks for your review. Yeah, asking someone you just met out on a date can be awkward. I've got tons of ideas for stories, just lack the willpower to make them happen. :)
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