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Alex's Little Book of Poems - 12. A Springing Haiku

Here is another seasonal Haiku!
The bees will now buzz,
 
Birds will sing in harmony,
 
Plants will bloom with grace.
Hope you enjoyed this sweet little poem of 17 syllables.
Copyright © 2016 Alex; All Rights Reserved.
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On 03/21/2016 04:44 AM, AC Benus said:

I am struck by the use of 'will,' which appears in every line. That's engaging and unusual, because I suppose most Haiku are about seeing something in real-time. I like the shift to the future, but again it leaves me thinking something may yet be unseen (vis a viz poem No. 11 from this series)

 

Great job!

Thanks, I tried to make this one a bit more unique than your usual haiku. :)

Alex
On 03/21/2016 03:14 AM, Emi GS said:

The form is correct. The visual is bright and splendid. you have done a great job.

 

Don't take offended here, because I felt like it, the Haiku, was unfinished. I think you have more to say/add to this beautiful picture.

 

Overall, Nice effort... :)

 

~Emi.

Didn't it it make you think though? Think about what a spring day would be like? Doesn't it out you there and help you visualize what it would be like, it may seem incomplete yes. Though I tried to sum Spring into a 17 syllable poem, which is a task I might add. :P So, the thought of completion is up to you, this is only ment to trigger your brain. So you can visualize a spring day from such little detail and information. Thank you. :)

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