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Alex's Little Book of Poems - 13. What I have seen, What I have thought

This is just random tidbits of what I have seen recently, mashed with some poetic influence for some nice rhymes.
He screams he rants,
Where is his pants,
He prays,
He stays,
She talks the talk,
She walks the walk,
He is very vocal,
Oh so focal,
He stands,
Demands,
She fights,
For rights,
They differ so,
Oh what a woe,
For they are just clowns,
To the people of the towns,
They stand divided,
Undecided,
While their kingdom falls,
These big white halls,
Choking out the commoner,
For they are not popular,
In this empire of wealth,
That shadows their waning health.
 
 
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What I see here is a divorce between a couple and the effect on a family. If you have presented here exactly what I thought, then you have done a great job... :gikkle:

 

Poetry is definitely a way to present our feelings about anything... :)

 

~Emi.

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I hope you don't mind, but I've given you a little shout-out here :)

 

Honestly, with this poem, I don't think I get it. I do see the images of a lordly couple arguing, but it seems to be making a broader statement that I'd only be guessing at.

 

Thanks for posting it.

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On 03/21/2016 04:51 AM, AC Benus said:

I hope you don't mind, but I've given you a little shout-out here :)

 

Honestly, with this poem, I don't think I get it. I do see the images of a lordly couple arguing, but it seems to be making a broader statement that I'd only be guessing at.

 

Thanks for posting it.

It represents infighting. :)

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On 03/21/2016 03:20 AM, Emi GS said:

What I see here is a divorce between a couple and the effect on a family. If you have presented here exactly what I thought, then you have done a great job... :gikkle:

 

Poetry is definitely a way to present our feelings about anything... :)

 

~Emi.

The "divorce" is a good term. Though yes this is a much broader scale than a mere separation in a family. I tried to achieve representing what infighting does to everyone, including the common family below the "top dogs".

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