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Victor's Attempts at Poetry - 2. For my Love

I'm a lot more self-conscious about this one because, the person in question doesn't exist (until now). While I have always dreamed, I never met or saw that person. Do let me know what you think, even if you think its funny :hug:  

As I gaze out at the trees passing by,

I remember the day I left home.

I look at all the love around me

And sigh wistfully, smiling to myself.

 

Like a man in shining armour,

I imagine you’d sweep me right off my feet.

I know I may have to try several times

But I will, for a lifetime with you.

 

I cannot promise you to be the perfect man,

What i can, is to love you forever.

I don’t want you to be perfect either

Your imperfections are what makes you, you.

 

I dream of the day you kiss me,

One that chases all my fears and sadness away.

I promise you, I will always be by your side,

in happiness and sorrow, in sickness and health.

I dream of the time, when I look at you, and you at me

And there’s only us in our own little world.

And thank you tim for editing this poem and making it readable :hug: . And any mistakes here are totally mine and only my bad writing skills are to blame here :lol: 
Copyright © 2017 Victor Gutte; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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You have just sent a part of yourself out into the universe, and somewhere, someone is doing the same thing. He's out there, hoping and praying for you. Have faith, my friend... your beautiful soul will be rewarded, and someday you'll be whispering such sweet words as this into his ear as you lay united. This was lovely and perfect and honest... kudos, little buddy :hug: ... Gary xo

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On 5/21/2017 at 1:27 AM, Kitt said:

Bad writing skills???    Good lord Victor!  This is beautiful. You need to believe in yourself more! The guy this is anticipating in your life certainly will!

:*) thanks Ma :hug: , I hope so too

On 5/21/2017 at 1:31 AM, Lyssa said:

This is sweet and beautiful and I wish you to find this man. Very well done! :hug:

Thanks Lyssa :hug: , I find it to be quite corny to be honest :*)

On 5/21/2017 at 1:32 AM, Reader1810 said:

Listen to Kitt, Victor, because she is right. Your writing is skillfull, insightful, and beautiful. Keep it coming, you hear? 

 

And Lyssa - the pink poet - knows what she's talking about too. 

 

:hug: 

Okay Your highness :hug: , I will try to write more :*) 

On 5/21/2017 at 2:18 AM, Drew Espinosa said:

Sweetie, an Editor, a Poet, a Reader, and a mathematician are all in agreement; this is beautiful! :hug: 

Of course you all are :hug: , when have any of you ever been mean? :huh: 

On 5/21/2017 at 3:36 AM, Headstall said:

You have just sent a part of yourself out into the universe, and somewhere, someone is doing the same thing. He's out there, hoping and praying for you. Have faith, my friend... your beautiful soul will be rewarded, and someday you'll be whispering such sweet words as this into his ear as you lay united. This was lovely and perfect and honest... kudos, little buddy :hug: ... Gary xo

:*) Aww Gary, you're making me blush. And your comment just showed me a totally NSFW vision that is even making me :blushing: as I type this. But thanks anyways for the kind words xoxo 

On 5/21/2017 at 4:24 AM, Mikiesboy said:

~sits with a self-satisfied smirk~ told ya so .. Lovely Victor.. well done, and deserved, and the kind words that sit above mine are also. 

~trying to glare while hiding a smile~ ~totally fails~ okay, I admit you were right :hug: but when have the lot ever been mean? Honest? Yes :yes: but mean? :no: . But you're right, I'll try to believe more in myself :hug:

On 5/22/2017 at 10:21 AM, Defiance19 said:

Set your intentions and speak, well..write it into existence. This was beautifully expressed Victor. There is that someone just waiting for you two to collide.. 

:hug: thanks Def, I probably wouldn't even know if that happens :lol 

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