Poetry by Renee - 8. Path to Nowhere

that was pretty bleak, but i get it  ... well done

tim is correct. I've seen this from the other side, watching this happen to tim. I hope you are doing better now, renee. 

1 hour ago, Mikiesboy said:

that was pretty bleak, but i get it  ... well done

Thank you, tim, and i know you get it, though i wouldn't wish that feeling on anyone. xoxo

39 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

tim is correct. I've seen this from the other side, watching this happen to tim. I hope you are doing better now, renee. 

Thank you, Sir. Knowing how it feels, i can't even imagine having to witness it happening to someone i love. i am doing better, though there are still the occasions that the darkness descends.

First off, never preface your poem with a warning about the content. Let it speak for itself. As for the poem -  very powerful, digging deep into the dark recesses we never like to go, mirroring insecurities and anxieties that every human feels at one time or another. My hope is that you don't get to this point again, my girl, and that, if you do, you lean on the people who will bring you back to center.

It’s hard to comment on this. Moments and feelings so well understood. It’s nice knowing you came through. Hoping you feel the love that’s in your life.

3 hours ago, MacGreg said:

First off, never preface your poem with a warning about the content. Let it speak for itself. As for the poem -  very powerful, digging deep into the dark recesses we never like to go, mirroring insecurities and anxieties that every human feels at one time or another. My hope is that you don't get to this point again, my girl, and that, if you do, you lean on the people who will bring you back to center.

Thank you, Sir. I've edited the chapter note as you suggested. And thank you, Sir, for all of your comments. Some days it is more of a struggle than others, but i haven't reached that point for a long time, and i know that i am NOT alone and need to lean on those that care before it actually gets that far. It is much easier to keep to center than it used to be.

17 minutes ago, BlindAmbition said:

It’s hard to comment on this. Moments and feelings so well understood. It’s nice knowing you came through. Hoping you feel the love that’s in your life.

Thank you, jp! I did come through, a little bent, but not yet broken. There are so many people who love me, in one way or another, and i am very lucky. i try to remember that on the not so good days now and it helps me through.