The Poetry of D/s - 8. A Reflection

i've likened  poets to artists, combining words just so, as an artist would with colors and pigments

but this poem, this one is more like an illusionists conjuring, summoning up feelings, using carefully chosen and placed words

and a kiss is a wonderful reward

thank you for sharing this with us

a kiss is a wonderful reward 

boy, your reflection is beautiful. I know what you would do for me, just how far you would go, if I asked you to. 

you love of our Lifestyle, and I'm pleased you choose to share insights into it. 

M xo

1 hour ago, mollyhousemouse said:

i've likened  poets to artists, combining words just so, as an artist would with colors and pigments

but this poem, this one is more like an illusionists conjuring, summoning up feelings, using carefully chosen and placed words

 

and a kiss is a wonderful reward

 

 

thank you for sharing this with us

 

thank you molly   xoxo  thanks for your wonderful comments

1 hour ago, MichaelS36 said:

a kiss is a wonderful reward 

boy, your reflection is beautiful. I know what you would do for me, just how far you would go, if I asked you to. 

you love of our Lifestyle, and I'm pleased you choose to share insights into it. 

 

M xo

thank You, Sir.  i would Sir , id follow You anywhere xo

tim,  you always paint a beautiful and vivid picture with your words here.  My boy smiles happily as we read your poems together.

wow love it.... you know how to say it so good tim. i'm nodding here    in silence

11 hours ago, WolfM said:

tim,  you always paint a beautiful and vivid picture with your words here.  My boy smiles happily as we read your poems together.

thank You Wolfie ... good to see You.  i'm glad You both enjoyed this one xo

1 minute ago, mad_artist said:

wow love it.... you know how to say it so good tim. i'm nodding here    in silence

thank you, sean.  it's great to see you. i hope you're doing well!!!  i think of you often my friend xoxo ...  silence, it is a wonderful thing, and a great way to serve.  thanks for reading and your comments.

Since I first read this poem, when you posted it, I've been finding it hard to express into words what I felt from it. Fantastic poem, tim. It invoked some good emotions.

That was beautiful.  Very vivid picture and packed with emotion.  I'm sure your Sir is very pleased with you! 

What I love about your style is how minimalist it is, both your poetry and your prose. Every word has intent and meaning. No embellishments, only stark truth. Thank you for sharing your writing with us.

11 hours ago, Thorn Wilde said:

What I love about your style is how minimalist it is, both your poetry and your prose. Every word has intent and meaning. No embellishments, only stark truth. Thank you for sharing your writing with us.

i appreciate you reading them