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Larkspur: A Sidewinder Tale - 6. Chapter 6 Started with a Posse

You sure about that?

Started with a Posse

 

 

“One of you boys gonna tell me what that was all about?” Will’s attention was fixed on the spot where Mitch had disappeared into the woods. “And where the hell does he think he’s going? Gosh darn it, that man ain’t changed a bit—I’ve a good mind to make him….” He stopped speaking, quickly going from being rankled to looking lost, so much so that he took an unsteady step back, like a drunk man might do in order to maintain his balance.

Boone and Coy exchanged uncertain looks before Boone decided to give the mill owner some advice. “Leave him be for now, Will. I know that weren’t an easy conversation, but he’s just angered, is all. He didn’t like being caught unawares, and that’s more our fault than yourn.”

Will turned his head Boone’s way, standing straighter again. His brow was creased. “Yep, he’s angry—no doubt for that—and I’ve seen him fly off the handle plenty, but that’s not what I’m talking about. He said I better hightail it out of here while the gitting’s good… if’n I didn’t want to watch him die? So… either of you care to explain why he’d say such a thing? Is he in some sort of trouble?”

“We can’t… I mean… he’s not in any trouble that we’ve heard of. We don’t know what he meant… don’t think… not sure he was meaning anything,” Coy answered, looking sheepish as hell to Boone. He was terrible at lying too. “I reckon he’s just angered like Boone said.”

Will had trouble turning his back to the woods, but he did, finally facing them. Their answers were met with a measuring gaze, so much like the one the sheriff would have used if he didn’t believe them. “Why is he here, in Larkspur?”

“Ah… we… I suspect he wanted a change. We knew him in Red Bluff. He was good friends with the old fellas who took us under their wing… ah… they were panners, but my brother Will shot them dead and took the gold they had stashed.”

“Well, I reckon that’s quite a story—heard some of it from you before—but what in holy hell does it have to do with him coming to Larkspur?”

“Mitch… he was, uh… well he was the sheriff there,” Coy answered, his stammering sounding suspicious.

Will’s eyes narrowed to slits as he stared Coy down. “Sheriff, eh? Course he was. So… what in tarnation happened? Did he get run out of town, because the man I know wouldn’t ever quit? If’n I don’t know anything, I know that much!”

Will had always seemed a patient man to Boone, but he was showing none of it at that moment, and in all fairness, he didn’t blame him. Mitch’s parting words had scared him, sure and certain. “Know for a fact he wasn’t run off,” Boone answered quickly, and softly. “He was a fine sheriff—ran a tight town—but he was fair.”

“Cares most about running a tight town, that’s for sure,” Will said, a sour expression on his face. The next questions came quick. “Then why did he leave? Is someone after him? Come on, Boone! You must know something?” Will’s attention was now completely focused on him, and Boone had trouble meeting his gaze.

He finally did, though, and lied through his teeth. “Sorry, Will. I wish I could help, but you’ll have to ask him yourself. We have too much respect for the man to pry, but I don’t believe someone’s after him. He don’t act like there is... seems he just wants a change like Coy was saying, and that’s what brought him to these parts.”

“Not buying it. There’s something you boys ain’t telling me.” After shaking his head back and forth, he returned to watching the woods, a frustrated sigh blasting out of him.

Coy stepped in, and Boone was relieved. He didn’t want to have to do any more lying to their friend, but he would. Might be he thought Will deserved to know Mitch was sick, but the sheriff felt they’d already betrayed his trust—that was plenty clear—and he wasn’t about to do it again. Dying was his secret to keep.

“So you were his deputy?” Coy asked.

“What?”

“Mitch said you were his deputy?”

“I was. It was way back—a lifetime ago now.”

“Is that how you two met?”

“Huh? Oh... no. Not exactly.” His shoulders, held tense-like, suddenly dropped, and his attention shifted away from the woods. Blowing out another long breath what didn’t sound so angry, he got to explaining in a softer voice. ”Got stinking drunk one night, first time I drank whiskey in my life, and Mitch cared enough to lock me up for the night. Likely would have got shot dead if he hadn’t.”

“So then how did you end up his deputy?”

“I… we… I got to know him after that. Something… something good happened between us—didn’t even know I was looking for it till I laid eyes on him that next morning. The way he looked at me made me feel I’d been throwed by a bronc onto hard ground.” He mumbled something Boone couldn’t quite hear, and then cleared his throat. “I… ah… came to the decision it was the best way to protect him, not that he would admit to needing any help.

“Tried to turn me down, but I weren’t having it. Buffalo Springs was a rough place. Made Larkspur look like a Sunday-go-to-meeting town. There was always gunfights and killings… trouble of some kind or another just about every time the sun went down.

“Nothing but a nasty bunch of thieves and killers who used the town for hiding out, getting drunk, and visiting the whorehouse. Most of them lived to cause a ruckus, and Mitchell wasn’t standing for it—would go charging into the middle of everything with no fear for his own self.” He mumbled something else that ended in, “crazy fool.”

“The decent folk relied on him, the ones who didn’t take the stage out of town, and the whores did too, but they expected too much from one man. No matter what I said, he would just tell me it was his sworn duty to protect them all.” Wincing at the memory, he turned back towards the woods the sheriff had disappeared into. “He didn’t have a lick of sense back then and probably still don’t.”

Boone stared at the man’s broad back a minute, feeling compassion for his pain. “Strikes me he’s plenty smart, Will. Red Bluff could be a rough town too. Train brings all kinds of trouble.”

“Oh, he’s smart for sure.” Will went back to facing them, not so anguished-looking as before. “He’s clever, I ain’t denying that at all—and he was damn good at his job—but he has this sense of right and wrong he could never set aside, even when it meant he was likely to get hisself killed.”

“I wonder why that is?” Coy asked, his curiosity clear.

“No need to wonder like I did. Lord knows I tried to reason with him for his own good. Pestered him with that same question enough times he finally gave me an answer. He told me a story one night, when I asked him once more to quit and head west with me. I couldn’t for the life of me understand why he kept turning me down… after all the things he’d said to me.” Will’s head tilted away again and his eyes squeezed shut.

They waited for him to get hold of hisself. When his eyes opened back up, Boone noticed the normally bright blue had become closer to gray, and they shone wet.

He checked the spot Mitch disappeared before clearing his throat and spitting. When he continued, his voice was strong and his gaze direct. “Started with a posse.”

“Posse?” Coy asked. “What posse?”

Mitch spat again. “One rode through his farm when Mitchell was just a boy, led by a tough old sheriff named Diggs. Never forgot that name. The way he told it, they was chasing some bank robbers who’d taken two women as hostages. One of those was Mitch’s cousin, only a couple of years older than him—still a girl—and more like a sister.

“He wanted to go with them, but of course he couldn’t, being so young. He even tried to follow the posse after they left, but his pa caught him and gave him a whooping. Weeks later they came back the same way with four dead bodies tied to horses, and the two women alive and well… ‘cepting they’d been spoiled by every one of the four—his cousin wouldn’t speak a word to anyone for years. Was still hard for him to speak of such when he told me.

“Anyways, he saw Sheriff Diggs as a genuine hero and decided then and there he wasn’t going to be no farmer like his pa. He was going to be a lawman when he was old enough, and no one was going to talk him out of it. A couple of years later his ma and pa were killed for their horses on the ride home from church and that settled it for him. Weren’t anyone to stop him from doing what he wanted anymore, so that’s what he did. He never caught those who killed his parents, but it weren’t for lack of trying. He found the horses, traded to some farmer for new mounts, but the trail went cold soon after. Don’t think he ever got over not being able to avenge them.”

Boone swallowed down some emotion the story had stirred. He understood the sheriff a good bit better now. “That surely explains his dedication to the law for all these years.”

“Yep, it does, and I understood why he was like a dog with a bone, but there comes a point when a fellow….” His words stopped, and again he looked lost, like a man with serious regrets. Boone saw guilt there too.

“You loved him? Will?”

Will seemed caught off guard by the question, but he met Coy’s gaze and didn’t flinch. “It’s a tough thing to say out loud. Is what Mitch said about you fellas true… what you share?”

“Nobody in this world more important to me than Boone. Yep, it’s true.”

“Same for me, Will. We love each other—we don’t let it be known, people being what they are, but we ain’t ashamed neither. We don’t know the why of it, but we do know it’s right for us.”

The big man nodded. “You shouldn’t be ashamed… and I never was neither, even though it weren’t something I could speak of. Truth be told, it ain’t no surprise to me. Weren’t my business, but I was pretty sure you two shared more than farms. Sometimes I believe like knows like, leastwise we see what others don’t, you know?”

Boone knew exactly what he meant, and nodded his understanding.

“So yes, Coy, I loved him. Fact is, I still do—all it took was seeing him again to be certain of it—and he loved me too once and told me so, but he sure ain’t feeling the same now.”

“You sure about that?” Boone asked. “Seems to me he was all kinds of shook when he saw you, and it weren’t hard to see feelings there.”

“The feelings I saw were anger. He’s right. I rode away with no explanation. I was a coward not to tell him straight—didn’t trust myself not to give in—but he deserved better than that. Went looking for him almost a year later, but folks told me he’d turned his badge in and rode out of town months before, without saying a word to no one about where he was going. Went from town to town looking, but he was on the wind.

“When I ended up here, I decided to stay put in case he was looking for me. Larkspur weren’t near as big as it is now, but I could see it would grow. I bought the mill after a fire burned it half down, and first thing I did once I got the new framing up was change the sign so I could put my name up there in big letters. Hoped Mitchell would see it if he came through town—or that someone else would remember my name if he ever asked about me. At the least, the mill kept me busy while I waited.”

Boone shared another look with Coy, and could see he was just as affected by the man’s story as he was.

“Then you got to make damn sure he knows that.”

“I just told him.”

“No, not that I heard, not all of it. Weren’t enough to tell him you were sorry. After all these years, you got to show him how you feel—tell him how you looked for him—and about the sign,” Coy said softly. “That man is hurting—same as you—and you need to do something about it. You need to convince him to stick around, and not go riding off somewhere by his lonesome.”

Will’s lowered eyes rose, and they narrowed as he pinned Coy with his gaze. “You’re worried about him,” he accused.

“Worried? Of course I am. He’s plenty upset right now.”

“No sir, it’s more than that.”

Coy sighed. “There’s nothing more I can tell you, Will. You’ll have to talk to Mitch.”

Will’s gaze moved back and forth between them, but they weren’t budging, and he appeared to come to that conclusion. “And just how do I do that? You saw how he was. He won’t listen to me and he sure as hell won’t talk to me, and besides… more than twenty years has passed.”

“So? You went looking for him once, and now he’s found you, and it don’t matter now how many years it took. You think it was easy for Boone and me? Hell, we was so far apart at one time it took the hand of God to get us right. I ain’t proud of it, but I hauled off and punched him after our first kiss.

“The thing is, we didn’t give up, and if you still love that man, then you can’t neither. We don’t know him the way you do, but he’s a good friend—he’s family—and he deserves to find some happiness. Maybe that’s you and maybe it ain’t—might be you’ll just be friends—but you won’t know until you set him down and show him how right it could be. Don’t seem at all finished between you, not the way it deserves to be.”

Will’s eyes had widened as he listened to Coy. “Didn’t know you could speak like a preacher.” His lips curled up slightly in an almost smile before it faded. “Maybe he has someone else… maybe there’s another who’s in his heart?”

“Don’t think so. As far as we know, he’s been alone a long time.”

“You sure?”

“I think we would know if there was someone else, so yes, I’m sure he’s alone. Might be you can change that.”

“Nothing I’d like better, Coy. Ain’t like I’ve ever felt this way for anyone else… never run across another like him. Don’t know how to go about it, though.”

“Want some advice?”

“Ain’t that what you been spouting?” he asked with some humor in eyes that looked a little bluer.

“I suppose I have been at that. So, do you want some more?”

“I’m as lost as a lamb in a herd of cattle, so I’d be obliged to you.”

“All right, then. Come back tomorrow after you’re done your work… if you can. This time we’ll warn him you might show up, and if he decides to take another walk, you’ll have to come the next night.”

“You think that’ll work?”

“No idea. It’ll be up to you whether it does. Nothing to be gained by quitting on him, though. If he asks us about our conversation, is there anything you want us to keep to ourselves?”

Will’s gaze flicked back and forth between Boone and Coy. “You fellas can answer any questions he might have.”

“We’ll do that. Wish we could ask you to share supper with us—”

“No… no… don’t worry for it. Wouldn’t want to make him feel bushwhacked again, not today. I know the man… and I expect he’ll be storming about for a while yet. ”

“Sorry, Will,” Boone said, shooting Coy a glance. “Want to go fishing with me upriver?”

“Thanks, but got no interest in fishing at all. I’ll head back to the mill and get a bit more work done. Should cool down some by the time I get back. Tell Mitchell… well… tell him I still want to talk if he’s willing.”

“We’ll make sure he knows,” Coy said.

Watching him mount and ride out was hard. Coy slid his arm around Boone’s waist and squeezed. “Might be you were right. I never should have opened my mouth to Alan.”

“No, I think you did the right thing.”

“You do? Why? That was powerful bad for the both of them.”

“No doubt for that, but I think it would have been such no matter how it happened. The fact is, they’ve seen each other after more than twenty years and Will still loves him. Can’t say for certain, but I’d be willing to wager Mitch has those same feelings, maybe just buried a mite deeper cause of how it ended. You don’t get that riled if'n you don’t care.”

“I suppose. You get me riled all the time.”

“No more than you rile me.”

They both chuckled. “Reckon I’ll do the cooking tonight. Salted beaver stew with the last of our turnip? I’ll cook it outside so the cabin don’t heat up, and make up a mess of fried biscuits too.”

“Sounds good to me. While it’s cooking we can milk Maysie and put the mares and foals in.”

“It’s a little early for putting the horses in, ain’t it?”

“Yep, but Mitch might want to talk tonight. If our chores are done, we can sit around the fire after we eat… folks tend to say what’s on their minds when there’s flames reaching for the sky.”

“Ain’t that the truth. Hope he comes back 'fore too long.”

“Don’t fret. He needs some time to get his thoughts settled. Expect it’s hard for him.”

“I reckon you’re right. Will said pretty much the same. Reckon I’ll split some of that wood now.”

“No, you’ll not be doing such, Coy.”

“I won’t?”

“Not if you want Mitch to stay. He offered to do it, otherwise he’ll have to camp by the river, remember?”

“I remember, but—”

“No buts. No need to treat him like he’s dying—like he said, he needs to live until it happens. So let’s leave it for him like we agreed, all right? Ain’t going to hurt him none, and he’s smart enough to stop if it does. We’ll cut some hay instead.”

Coy nodded and smiled. “I need to stop thinking he’s going to die if he pushes himself. Time I admit sometimes you’re way smarter than me.”

“Not very often, but a time or two I am. Coy?”

"Yep?"

"Will was right... you can speak like a preacher, and you done good soothing that man's soul when he was beside hisself."

Coy leaned in and kissed him. His eyes were open same as Coy's, and it felt like he was staring right into Boone's own soul. "Learned such from you and your sweet-talking ways."

Boone could feel his soft lips curl, and chuckled as their mouths separated. "A man has to have something worth sweet-talking to, and I surely do have that."

"There you go again. I swear you got a well of them words inside you."

"The well inside me is filled with love for you, Coy. Ain't no room for anything else."

Coy stared at him open-mouthed for a few seconds before his eyes softened to deep blue pools. "I reckon I understand exactly what you're saying, Boone. Got one of those full ones myself."

 

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17 hours ago, dughlas said:

I know that Will was the one that left but it seems Mitch bears an equal share of what went wrong between them. I find it interesting that when they were together Mitch felt Will needed to accept his dedication to his job and the dangers that went with it with out regard for the hurt and fear it caused and yet blames Will for the hurt his leaving caused. I find that attitude selfish. The boys seem to be stuck between a rock and a hard place. It's obvious there remain strong feelings between Will and Mitch with equal hurt on both sides and yet it's still Mitch calling the shots. I don't much like him right now good man or not. He's got his head up his arse. You need to fix that bro. Course being the romantic you are you've probably already done so. 

Hey, dugh. I totally agree Mitch shares a lot of the blame for what went wrong. I think what hurt him most was that Will didn't tell him he was leaving when he did, and he waited a while before he knew for certain he wasn't coming back. That would have been hard. Still, he was obviously focused on one thing back then, and that's where his fault lies. When you love someone, you have to adapt priorities. Will was hurting terribly each time Mitch got shot, and while Mitch may have never asked anything of him, it was his job not to be the one causing the pain. Sure, he was a lawman, but he was also half of one whole. 

So yeah, selfish is an apt description... easier to see when we're older.

Mitch ran away from Will at this first meeting in decades. In my opinion, a big part of it is to protect Will from Mitch's reality. I think he might have been just as scared as he was angered, so Boone and Coy need to tread carefully... not sure Coy can, but we'll see. We don't know whether Mitch can come clean about his dying, but it seems to me, he owes Will the truth. Running away is necessary sometimes, but not if we want to heal. That just buries our pain deeper. Thanks, bro, for the great comment. I appreciate the faith you have in me. :unsure2:  Cheers! :hug: 

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17 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Will and Mitch know that the other is nearby. Mitch seems to want things all on his terms, but there’s got to be some possibility they can meet halfway on things, right? Please? 

Hey, Parker. I don't think it is so much that Mitch wants things on his terms. He's a dying man, and I think he is protective of that. I don't know if you remember how pride got in the way in Sidewinder, but I can see it happening here. He doesn't want anyone to fuss over him in his final days, and I suspect he knows Will would. I don't want to paint him as noble--he's just a man with feet of clay like the rest of us--but I do believe, as angered  as he was at getting 'bushwhacked', he is trying to protect Will too. Something he may well want has happened, and he is running out of time. :(  I think if he can let things settle, then maybe he can find what he needs to have a conversation with Will... not saying it would go well, but talking is important, and both these men appear to need some closure over how they parted. Thanks, buddy! Cheers... G. :hug: 

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17 hours ago, Geron Kees said:

Excellent chapter, very revealing. I suspected Mitch was a bit driven to uphold the law, but now I know. And it seems that drive threw Will off course more than once before he made the unfortunate decision to leave Mitch. A decision he clearly regrets now.

It's hard to go back, once you've left the road you're on and started down another. But it sounds like Will did try, and when he couldn't get results that way, he simply set up camp beside the road and hoped that Mitch would one day amble back by on his own. And now he has!

Hmm. Will these two get back together? If Boone and Coy have any say in it, they will. I don't know where the story is going yet, but I do know the author, a little. I won't say what I think, but I hope you don't mind if I smile a bit! :)

 

Thanks, Geron. At this point, we know Will has regrets for leaving the way he did. Mitch might seem like he was callous back then, but I have met so many driven people who put everything they have into what they are passionate about. It might be that old story/song--- you don't know what you got till it's gone. So yeah, I'm sure Mitch has regrets too. Maybe they are just as big. 

As far as Will, that old song may apply for him too. He tried to find Mitch... having figured out for certain he was worth whatever trouble that came with him. That's my kind of man. :)  It took a long time, but his decision to stay put, worked in the end. Trouble is, the timing couldn't be worse, but he doesn't know that. As much as Coy and Boone might want to tell him so he understands Mitch's reception better, they can't. And therein lies the rub. Mitch has to be the one to come clean.

So... you think you know me, buddy? Hmmm... we'll see if your smile is warranted. Cheers! G. :hug: 

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17 hours ago, 84Mags said:

In the chapters leading up to this one, Mitch has been alternately referred to as sheriff or by name. This chapter he’s just called Mitch (or Mitchell 😍); the man and his background a bit laid bare. Becoming sheriff was a calling, perhaps something he was destined to do, and not something he could easily walk away from. But it isn’t all of Mitch. Seems to me that Will understands that. I guess that’s why he road back a year later and ultimately settled in one place hoping they would meet again. 
This will be a difficult conversation for Mitch. Will knew why Mitch became a lawman and yet left without a goodbye. Both sides are valid; sometimes it feels too hard to stick around while the person you love places themselves in mortal danger. But if someone truly loves you, shouldn’t they support and assist when you follow the path you feel called to? If Will is intuitive enough to realize Mitch wouldn’t willingly give up his job as sheriff, recognizing there is more going on than Boone and Coy are saying, he must also be aware how crushing of a blow his leaving was to Mitch.  
I am still hopeful.  I believe whatever time on earth Mitch has left, it will be all the richer spent with Will. They have a lot to talk about first, though.  

 

 

 

 

Some astute observations here, my friend. The boys will always think of Mitch as 'sheriff', but this is a more personal chapter, delving into the man and his reasons for being the way he is. We know he doesn't like being called Mitchell, but throughout this chapter, Will refers to him in that way. I believe he used his full name in intimate moments, and this was his way of regaining some of that feeling. I think names, how we address someone, has a lot of power. 

You're right too that being sheriff is not all of who Mitch is. Maybe Will needed those months to fully realize that before he rode back to Buffalo Springs. We see that while he may have left Mitch's bedside, he never gave up on him. Now they have come face to face, and while the timing might suck, it might be an opportunity to make amends of some kind.

One thing I want to point out... in this chapter, As you point out, Will says that Mitchell would never quit, not the man he knows, but if he thinks about it, he should realize Will did quit. He handed in his badge and rode away from the town that tore them apart. My guess is he did that for the same reason Will went back, so yeah, it should tell Will how crushed Mitch must have been. :yes: 

I like how you sum up their situation back then. Love is always a two way street... it has to be, but unfortunately, it doesn't always play out that way. But now they are older, and presumably wiser, and hopefully they both are smart enough to try to heal the rift that's so obviously there. 

Great comment, Mags... thank you! Cheers... G. :hug: 

 

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15 hours ago, FanLit said:

‘…."Learned such from you and your sweet-talking ways." 

Boone could feel his soft lips curl, and chuckled as their mouths separated. "A man has to have something worth sweet-talking to, and I surely do have that." 

"There you go again. I swear you got a well of them words inside you." 

"The well inside me is filled with love for you, Coy. Ain't no room for anything else.’
:heart: :heart:

Ya know….while it is Coy and Boone with the honeyed words, I’m aware they are a reflection of their author.  :yes: Lucky are the people who have been wooed by you.  

Another fanciful thing that caught my eye was the changeable color of Will’s.  I’m grateful mine work and they are okay looking but being plain ol’ brown eyed is a bit boring sometimes, I’d love a changeable hue lol.  Okay, the cloud gathering part of my review is over.  😬

It seems as though Will became Mitch’s deputy to work with and protect the man he loves but exceeded his limit on the close calls on Mitchell’s life.  His path after leaving Mitch, (which included his looking for him) is a testament to the love he still bears for him;  In a way, he was right….it took 20 years lol, but Mitchell did pass that way….little did Coy know just how fertile Will’s soil was for the Mitch seeds he planted, lol!!
Will’s story made me sad, it was such a hard time to live and love back then, as you never knew when you left someone if it would be the last time you ever saw them again;  Contact was by letter or telegram, neither reliably immediate-postal service was slow (if available at all) and I doubt there were many telegraph offices around.

As powerful as Coy and Boone’s love story is, I reckon Mitch and Will’s is giving them a run for their money;  I’d like to think hearing it makes B & C even more grateful for what they have.

Looking forward to the next installment of “Larkspur: A Sidewinder Tale”  ❤️‍ 💝

Aww shucks. Y'all are making me blush. :blushing: 

Some readers might find these little moments between Boone and Coy sappy, but I've always loved writing men who can say what they feel. Thanks for pointing this little art out, my friend. 

We have changeable eyes in my family. My eyes are most always a deep green, but they can go quite a bit paler, but my sister goes from gray to green almost constantly. My mom's were gray, but could turn bluish, and sometimes, greenish. Cloud gathering is fun. :) 

Yes... I believe fear overtook everything else for Will back then. He got overwhelmed. His story made me sad too... their chances of reconnecting really were slim, given the things you point out, but he never gave up that hope. 

Lol to 'fertile soil'. :D  What's twenty years anyway?

It's a little early to tell, but it sounds like what Will and Mitch had back then was as real as what Boone and Coy have, and I thinking hearing the proof of it from Will spurred Boone to do some sweet-talking. :)  I doubt they would ever take each other for granted. 

Thanks, and see you next time, dear lady. Cheers! Gary.... :hug: 

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14 hours ago, FanLit said:

Oh and I love the “gaydar” reference, lol.

‘….The big man nodded. “You shouldn’t be ashamed… and I never was neither, even though it weren’t something I could speak of. Truth be told, it ain’t no surprise to me. Weren’t my business, but I was pretty sure you two shared more than farms. Sometimes I believe like knows like, leastwise we see what others don’t, you know?” 

Boone knew exactly what he meant, and nodded his understanding.’

It's a real thing now, so I can't see any reason why it wouldn't be the case back in those days. "Like knows like." :D 

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7 hours ago, Ivor Slipper said:

Gary, I like all your chapters, but I can't always think of something original to say to express that. :)

Thanks, Ivor, you sweet talker you. :)  I always like your comments... especially the ones that make me groan. :P 

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I don't know why I keep reading this late, but by the time I do, there're way too many comments to listen to...

I love this continuation of the Boone and Coy saga, and am awed by the way your language captures that of the era.

What else is there to say when a great story is told by a great writer?

I'll send wishes up above for a successful reunion for Mitch and Will, and hope Mitch has more time ahead of him than it looks at present.

Hugs, my dear G-Man!

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16 hours ago, ColumbusGuy said:

I don't know why I keep reading this late, but by the time I do, there're way too many comments to listen to...

I love this continuation of the Boone and Coy saga, and am awed by the way your language captures that of the era.

What else is there to say when a great story is told by a great writer?

I'll send wishes up above for a successful reunion for Mitch and Will, and hope Mitch has more time ahead of him than it looks at present.

Hugs, my dear G-Man!

It's been a while... hugs to you too, CG. I'm really enjoying posting this one. I always wanted to continue their story, but in a different way, and one day I just started writing. Sheriff Willard had always intrigued me. :) 

Always good to hear from you, my friend, and I am very pleased to hear you do like this one. Right or wrong, the dialect I've chosen for this time period is solidly in my head now, though I have to be constantly on guard for my word choices. Thanks for sharing your kind thoughts... still lots of story left... cheers! xoxo

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Another brilliant chapter, Gary.  Your words vividly portray the raw emotion of your characters as well as the depth of love, even if that love seems buried in the past.  I'm not going to take sides for or against Mitch and Will.  There is no right or wrong in how they acted.  I know that some actions in a relationship becomes toxic for one partner who has to abandon the other.  That in turn is viewed as a betrayal by the other.  Both Will and Mitch need to leave the past and remember why they fell in love before.  They both need to see they can be happy for what time they have left together.  As always your words whether describing the setting, the history or the emotions are truly authentic. 

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4 hours ago, raven1 said:

Another brilliant chapter, Gary.  Your words vividly portray the raw emotion of your characters as well as the depth of love, even if that love seems buried in the past.  I'm not going to take sides for or against Mitch and Will.  There is no right or wrong in how they acted.  I know that some actions in a relationship becomes toxic for one partner who has to abandon the other.  That in turn is viewed as a betrayal by the other.  Both Will and Mitch need to leave the past and remember why they fell in love before.  They both need to see they can be happy for what time they have left together.  As always your words whether describing the setting, the history or the emotions are truly authentic. 

Thank you so much, raven. Your words are kind indeed. I don't take sides either, and I'm pleased you're not. These are good men who lost something that could have been truly great, and now fate has dealt a cruel fate to one of them. Still, there is time to put some things to rest. 

That word, authentic, makes me flush with pleasure. Cheers, my friend. :hug: 

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Thank You Fine Sir For This Latest Chapter , Very Emotional Indeed . Will & Mitch Need To Sit Down And Talk ,Perhaps Boone Can Make Some Blackberry Hand Pies For Them to Enjoy . I’ll Pass on The Salted Beaver Stew with Turnips This Time Around . indian cooking GIF

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1 hour ago, JohnnyC said:

Thank You Fine Sir For This Latest Chapter , Very Emotional Indeed . Will & Mitch Need To Sit Down And Talk ,Perhaps Boone Can Make Some Blackberry Hand Pies For Them to Enjoy . I’ll Pass on The Salted Beaver Stew with Turnips This Time Around . indian cooking GIF

I feel really bad for Will after hearing his story. The fact he is sure he still loves Mitch after all these years tells us a lot. I'm pleased you felt the emotion, Johnny. 

The do need to talk but I don't think Mitch is capable of being calm at the moment. He needs time, and he has a secret he wants to keep to himself. How does he do that without Will getting more suspicious than he is already? 

Are you sure you don't want the beaver stew? I have it on good authority beaver meat is delicious... lots of flavor and laced with fat. :) Oh well, maybe next time. :P  Thanks, buddy. Glad you are enjoying the story. :hug: 

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Coy and Boone make a great team.  Both are smart and know what is happening.  Coy has the gift of tongue and Boone knows when to put a brake on Coy's words before he gets too carried away.  I enjoyed how you used this in the conversation the three had about Mitch.  I could feel the building trust that led to Will telling about his love for Mitch, and then added some background information on why Mitch made a great lawman.  Of course, it was a diversion for Will, but he certainly hit back with greater force to get information about what's currently wrong with Mitch.  I'm glad Coy and Boone were able to convince Will that he needed to get that information from Mitch.  The humor of the whole conversation was the ways Coy managed to get around Boone and Mitch's efforts to block him.  Coy's very sneaky when he feels the need.  This showed in the way he gave Will some good advice about getting Mitch to start talking to Will.  That's going to be an interesting conversation, but I think Will knows it may take longer than just the 'tomorrow' suggested by Coy.  Great writing Gary! 

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10 hours ago, raven1 said:

Coy and Boone make a great team.  Both are smart and know what is happening.  Coy has the gift of tongue and Boone knows when to put a brake on Coy's words before he gets too carried away.  I enjoyed how you used this in the conversation the three had about Mitch.  I could feel the building trust that led to Will telling about his love for Mitch, and then added some background information on why Mitch made a great lawman.  Of course, it was a diversion for Will, but he certainly hit back with greater force to get information about what's currently wrong with Mitch.  I'm glad Coy and Boone were able to convince Will that he needed to get that information from Mitch.  The humor of the whole conversation was the ways Coy managed to get around Boone and Mitch's efforts to block him.  Coy's very sneaky when he feels the need.  This showed in the way he gave Will some good advice about getting Mitch to start talking to Will.  That's going to be an interesting conversation, but I think Will knows it may take longer than just the 'tomorrow' suggested by Coy.  Great writing Gary! 

Thanks, Terry! As sad as I am for Will in this, I am pleased with this chapter. We get to hear from someone who knows Mitch, just how complex he is... and the reasons why. Why is it we can be decent and kind to others, but can't be the same to ourselves? A man shows up who would support the fact he is dying, and is someone who Mitch could lean on, but Mitch runs away, not wanting to cause him any pain. I mean, I get it, I absolutely do, but there are times it is okay to be selfish, to maybe accept that hug and let out your fears to the person you've been closest to in your life. Yup. Very sad for both men. 

I loved imparting the background information through Will's dialogue... because of the impact it had. It was heartwrenching to know what Mitch is going through, especially hearing what a principled man he's been. Sure, he screwed up in the love department, but they were young. I don't hold that against him.

Yeah, I don't think it will all be fixed 'tomorrow' but I think Coy wanted to give Will some hope to hang on to. He can be sneaky, but he has a huge heart. :)  I'll stop now because I'm in one of those meandering moods. Thanks, my dear friend. :hug: 

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So now we see more of what Mitch is made of.  We can hope that Will and Mitch get a chance to talk about their feelings, but right now Mitch is a forest fire, hoping he can calm down. But this could an awkward thing for a man like Mitch to do! But we can hope, and things can turn around! Maybe food could calm him down!

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50 minutes ago, Albert1434 said:

So now we see more of what Mitch is made of.  We can hope that Will and Mitch get a chance to talk about their feelings, but right now Mitch is a forest fire, hoping he can calm down. But this could an awkward thing for a man like Mitch to do! But we can hope, and things can turn around! Maybe food could calm him down!

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Food always calms me down. :P  I don't know if that will work on Mitch, though. Will had a lot to say after Mitch walked away... and we learned a lot about the pair of them. There was love there... real love... but it's been twenty years and things have changed. Mitch is living out a death sentence. :( We'll see if they can at least talk at some point... and if Mitch has calmed down. :hug: 

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I just hope that some good will happen for Wil and Mitch! With fingers crossed!

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Maybe beaver stew will calm him down:yes:

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2 hours ago, Albert1434 said:

I just hope that some good will happen for Wil and Mitch! With fingers crossed!

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Maybe beaver stew will calm him down:yes:

Man, I really got caught up in rereading this chapter. Seriously, thank you for bringing me back here. It wasn't that long ago I read this again, but it still gets to me. Thanks, buddy. :hug: 

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