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Flashy-thing: Valentine's Edition - 1. Chapter 1

“Luis.”

“Lu-is!” Roland clapped his hands loudly in front of my face.

“What?” I frowned, irritated at my colleague for being annoying again.

“Ever since you came back from your lunch break, you’ve been staring at the computer. Without working.”

“Huh?”

He pointed to the flashing white box waiting for me to type in my password. “What’s up with you?”

“Nothing. I fell over a barefooted guy in the coffee shop, that’s all.”

“Barefooted? In February?”

“Uh-huh.”

“Oh. Was he cute?”

“Stunning.”

“Of course.” He tsked. “Only you’d manage to fall over a hot guy in the coffee shop on Valentine’s Day, of all days .”

“It wasn’t my fault. He was crouching on the floor, looking for a lost arrow.”

Roland’s raised eyebrows almost vanished behind his blond bangs. “An arrow? In the coffee shop?”

“It’s true!”

“Go away!” He scoffed. “And what happened then? He introduced himself as Cupid?”

“No, his name was Nathaniel.” I knew my colleague would explode.

Promptly Roland flung his hands in the air. “You drive me crazy!” After taking in a deep calming breath, he threw himself into the chair in front of my desk and crossed his arms over his chest. “Soooo, you’re actually telling me a stunning guy crouched on the floor in the coffee shop across our street, was looking for an arrow?”

“Yes.”

“Why?”

“Because he dropped it?”

“Luis!”

“What?” I blinked innocently.

“God grant me patience.” Roland cast his eyes heavenwards in pretend desperation. After a while, he gestured with his right hand. “Go on.”

“Then I saw an arrow protruding from a gunny sack filled with coffee beans behind the barista.”

“Another arrow?”

“Yeah, that was the missed shot Nathaniel had been murmuring about.”

“He’d been murmuring about a missed shot?” Roland inquired. “While he crouched on the floor?”

“Yes, Nathaniel was inconsolable. Apparently, he was taking his exam today and, by missing the bartender, he flunked it.”

“Oookay. Let me repeat this: This Nathaniel guy you fell over in the coffee shop we all go to for lunch every day... dropped his arrow while shooting the barista for his exam? What degree? Assassin?”

“ Yep. I mean no!” I shook my head. “Not assassin.”

“No? And for whom was the second arrow? You know the one he dropped in the first place. For a guest? Or was it just a spare? I mean, just in case he dropped one.”

“Do you want to tell the rest of the story? Or should I continue? “

Roland quickly waved his hand around. “No, no. Go on, by all means.”

“The second arrow, because you asked, was for the other barista.”

“The other barista?”

“Yes. Are you going to repeat every word of mine from now on?”

Roland closed his eyes and shook his head, making a negating gesture with his hands. “Please continue.”

“Aany-way, then another barefooted guy, I think his name was Theo, came up, sniffed the air and growled ‘Brimstone’.”

Roland instantly opened his mouth.

“Shut it.” He actually did.

“Next, Theo called his boss. I don’t know how he did it, before you ask. Suddenly a petite guy dressed to the nines, with long fiery, red hair appeared. He looked around, then he dived behind the coat rack. After some wrangling, he pulled out a screaming, squirming red entity by his scruff, saying he’d have to have a few words with the A.I. commander soon. With that, he vanished.”

“Entity. Uh-huh. And then?”

“It turned out Nathaniel had been pranked. This particular i-- um entity-- seems to be the bane of their existence.”

“So, Nate was pranked while shooting the barista?”

“Exactly. Do you remember the Lord Of The Rings scene where Gimli pulls at Legolas’ bow and he accidentally kills that pirate instead of firing a warning shot? Something like that happened.”

“Luckily Nathaniel didn’t kill the barista, right?”

“I don’t think that’s possible. Now comes the fun part.”

“Only now?”

Roland can be really annoying sometimes. I continued anyway, as the story was too good. “Ayil, that was their boss’ name, by the way, came back and berated Theo for not being able to test his student properly without an imp incident right in the middle of the coffee shop.”

“Did you stay imp incident?”

“Yep, apparently the small red entity was an imp. Anyway, no one reacted to the scolding. But me. At first, they didn’t notice. Theo was apologizing to their boss profusely for disturbing his Valentine's Day dinner with some guy named Ariel, and I asked ‘Who’s Ariel?’.”

“Why did you do that?”

“I don’t know. I couldn’t help it.”

“Typical. And then?”

“Ayil sighed, grumbled something about unnecessary complications and delays, led me to the side, placed his hands on my shoulders, and looked deeply into my eyes. Then I felt super dizzy.”

“So he flashy-thinged you with his eyes? I mean while we’re quoting movies. Men In Black much?”

“Flashy-thinged...that’s funny, Roland. So yes, he kinda flashy-thinged me. Theo persuaded Ayil to allow a repetition of the exam because of abnormal and unforeseeable circumstances beyond reasonable control or some such. After some haggling, Ayil granted it.”

“ And then?”

“And then Nathaniel asked me out. After his boss and Theo left. ”

“How could he do that? I thought his boss flashy-thinged you!”

I shrugged. “It didn’t work, and Nate noticed. He thinks it’s because Ayil was in a hurry to get back to his date.”

“A, let’s say, Cupid?”

I nodded. “You could say that.”

“A Cupid-in-training asked you out on Valentine’s Day? Even though you apparently shouldn’t be able to see him, let alone interact with him?”

“Yup.”

“Their boss will have to flashy-thing you again.”

“That’s right, young man. And because Luis told you the entire story, we will have to ‘flashy-thing’ you too,” said a redhead suddenly, standing in the doorway beside a tall, scowling Roman.

“Could you do it after our dinner?”

Okay, I did it again, but @comicfan provided such an enticing prompt, I couldn't resist.

:thankyou: @Valkyrie for the edits

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He he. I loved it, Adi. It's really special to know the characters involved, and their personalities. Great addition to this fascinating world you and @Timothy M. have created and evolved.  I agree with Val... we need a follow-up. :D  

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I enjoyed this very much. It was a perfect tale for Valentines Day. Thank you very much. 

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Gee, if only I could get an angel to "flashy-thing" me. Only of course after giving me something to remember in the first place.

More please.

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Maybe I need to start hanging around coffee shops (even though I hate the smell of coffee) so I can trip over a Cupid too!
;–)

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On 2/14/2020 at 3:47 PM, Valkyrie said:

:rofl:  This was awesome :gikkle: Now I want to know why Luis was immune to the flashy-thing and if this means he'll now be a part of the Cupids' world.  And if there might be an arrow for him or Nathaniel in the future ;)  

I always say this was the last one. Then something else comes up and I think the Cupids could... Or Timothy has an idea. So, one  never knows.

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23 hours ago, Headstall said:

He he. I loved it, Adi. It's really special to know the characters involved, and their personalities. Great addition to this fascinating world you and @Timothy M. have created and evolved.  I agree with Val... we need a follow-up. :D  

Thank you Gary!  I learned never say never. One day a Cupid  appears  and demands to tell their  story. Or a Guardian. Or an imp wants to demonstrate the meaning of the 'word of the day'.

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22 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

I enjoyed this very much. It was a perfect tale for Valentines Day. Thank you very much. 

I'm glad you enjoyed the brief tale, Parker.  Thank you for reading. :)

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22 hours ago, dughlas said:

Gee, if only I could get an angel to "flashy-thing" me. Only of course after giving me something to remember in the first place.

More please.

Haha. Let's see what we can do. Thank you for reading and commenting dughlas. :)

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19 hours ago, Justleah said:

I love the A.I stories thank you😘

Thank YOU for  still wanting to read about our special brand of angels. :)

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16 hours ago, droughtquake said:

Maybe I need to start hanging around coffee shops (even though I hate the smell of coffee) so I can trip over a Cupid too!
;–)

Sooooo. Where do you hang out? Where could you trip over a Cupid? Or a Guardian?

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1 hour ago, aditus said:

Sooooo. Where do you hang out? Where could you trip over a Cupid? Or a Guardian?

My clinical depression and generalized anxiety mean I stay in my apartment almost all the time. I do take the bus or BART when I go grocery shopping or to the library (to worry DVDs). I usually go to the main library in another Berkeley (about a hour away by bus or maybe a third that time by BART) even though there’s a small library about a block away from my apartment – it has about five or six times the selection.
;–)

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2 hours ago, droughtquake said:

My clinical depression and generalized anxiety mean I stay in my apartment almost all the time. I do take the bus or BART when I go grocery shopping or to the library (to worry DVDs). I usually go to the main library in another Berkeley (about a hour away by bus or maybe a third that time by BART) even though there’s a small library about a block away from my apartment – it has about five or six times the selection.
;–)

Okay. Then be careful when you enter the library.

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Well at least one of them appealed to you and got us something new. Loved it. I'll take the blame for inspiring this. Lol

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7 hours ago, comicfan said:

Well at least one of them appealed to you and got us something new. Loved it. I'll take the blame for inspiring this. Lol

Both of them appealed, actually. Right now I'm thinking about bloody Valentine while hearing A Bullet for My Valentine...Thank you very much :)

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I am tripping over Cupids all the times - at the malls, at the post office, on trains, in restaurants, coffee shops, in the gym, at the parks, in the pool....EVERYWHERE!!! Maybe that's the reason I never gotten a red arrow OR was my Guardian Angel too protective? Jealous little???

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