Love Of Family

Hey guys, I'm revising this original story. I've added some dialogs, and am changing some chapter titles. Hopefully, I'll be submitting the revisions between the weekend and next week. 

First revised chapter is up. Hope you guys like the changes I've made. I'm grateful for any feedback.

Second and Third revised chapters are posted. This, and the chapters following have the most revised content. Thanks for reading, I really appreciate it.

The revised fourth chapter is up. I know I didn't leave the original up for comparison, but I hope the changes are noticeable enough.

Just about finished with chapter 20 of LOF. I decided not to end it just yet, and I'll hopefully be posting the next chapter tomorrow morning. Thanks for hanging in here with me. 

Hey guys, Love Of Family is undergoing a major rewrite. I've been getting some help, and feedback from some great people. I think you guys are gonna like the revised story line, it'll make more sense, and be more sustainable, and less of a train wreck. I'm just waiting to figure out the best way to post the revision.

Thank you, for reading. 

Love y'all

This version of LOF is going to be abandoned, because of the rewrite. I hope you guys will enjoy the rewritten Love Of Family. The main characters have not been changed, but the way they're introduced, and their ages have been changed, and the family dynamics, have been expanded. 

Thank you everyone, for loving my original effort.