Joseph OHara

I actually have a complaint. No one should be allowed write a story like this without a follow up of at least part two and part three. This is one of the most wonderful pieces of prose I have read on GA. Other reviews have said enough about the plot of the story so I am going to use my 2 cents To add accolades, medals, and honors --- all well deserved! I strongly recommend you do not skip this story. Get it read it as soon as possible before you forget. If you don't you will have missed one of the finest stories on this site! @Topher Lydon, thank you so much!

This is a continuation of a love story started in part one. As in real life things don't always go the way you expect them. Sometimes it takes strength and determination to overcome the evils around us. Follow Hunter end Dale as they work together to do so and raise a happy family. Read the first story but do not fail to continue with this chapter in their lives. I am looking forward to seeing part three as soon as possible.

Randy is recovering and life goes on. They both seem to have questions about their relationship but seem to be waiting for the heavens to find the answers for them. An interesting chapter with interesting banter between the main characters. @Tony S., you are still doing a fine job!

While one of the characters in this had his ups and downs, in the end it was a live happily forever after story you will be so happy you took the time to read. I highly recommend you read this as I now begin part two and hope you will follow me there.

A short story but a very loving story. A highly recommend read!

Love wins in the end! After some tough times in the beginning and some turmoil here and there throughout the story, love made it to the finish line. A great little story worth your time to read I encourage you to go for it as it is well worth it.

I normally use Opera but when I used Edge, I did see the pictures.

I am not on Facebook and do not intend to be so I will never know. ☹️

I was more so referring to the fact that this chapter mostly reiterated what we already knew from previous readings. If new content were posted weekly, it would be better and the story would move along. It was not like the post showed conflicting feelings or different points of view. It was just a restatement of known facts.

After much turbulence, a happy ending emerges. Hang on to your hat as the roller coaster goes up and down and around sharp corners. Don't expect all peaches and cream but be ready for trouble at every corner. It has a very convoluted plot but it ends where you would want it. I recommend you read it.

I am not exactly complaining but we didn't advance the plot very far looking at the same facts from a different viewpoint. This appears to have the potential to be a great story but I'd sure like to see it move along a little faster. Your writing is excellent and you present it in a clean, well proofread manner. Keep up the good work and see if there's any chance we could get a chapter every 5 days instead of each week. Thanks, Lee, for the entertainment!

A wonderful love story with a much desired happy ending! Lovable characters, a twisting plot, and everyone who should, ended up on top and happy. A highly recommend read!

What a wonderful love story! Read and enjoy, you won't regret it.

Some much needed bonding finally happened. A real step in Levi's growth. That was an excellent chapter Mark. Thanks again for your continued high quality entertainment.

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