Poems, Old and New - 4. Eleven months

Tried to sneak this one by me, huh? Well I'm slow but I'll find out!!
Seriously, these are sweet and lovely but what I like most is they aren't perfect (pls dont be offended by that) and while they aren't, they are something more important, they are honest.
I love them and I'll be back next time!!

tim
ps, dont be afraid to remind me you've posted something... ok?

On 10/08/2015 04:53 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Tried to sneak this one by me, huh? Well I'm slow but I'll find out!!

Seriously, these are sweet and lovely but what I like most is they aren't perfect (pls dont be offended by that) and while they aren't, they are something more important, they are honest.

I love them and I'll be back next time!!

 

tim

ps, dont be afraid to remind me you've posted something... ok?

Thank you, I was tempted to correct them as I posted them in the stories box, but, then I decided I liked the memories as they were.

I also wanted people to see the difference between my style (and bad spelling and grammar) then and how I write now.

And I would never try and sneak anything pass you my friend. There are a few more set to post automatically everyday (1am UK time), then I will have to start writing again.

I really liked this, Caz. I read it over a few times. The beginning gave me a sense of foreboding -- one more month to go -- then the line after that -- what will happen? It sounds ominous. I really liked that. My favorite line, of course, is the last one. Sorta like the saying: "It's better to have love and lost, then to have never loved", I think that's how the end of the saying goes! lol

Great poem, Caz!

On 10/09/2015 03:34 AM, Lisa said:

I really liked this, Caz. I read it over a few times. The beginning gave me a sense of foreboding -- one more month to go -- then the line after that -- what will happen? It sounds ominous. I really liked that. My favorite line, of course, is the last one. Sorta like the saying: "It's better to have love and lost, then to have never loved", I think that's how the end of the saying goes! lol

 

Great poem, Caz!

Haha, I hadn't read it from that point of view before. It was actually one month to go till our wedding. His mother was trying to get it stopped and I wrote that to tell him to tell her to get stuffed (or words to that effect) because I was marrying him whether she liked it or not.

Thank you for the review