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    Caz Pedroso
  • Caz Pedroso
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Poems, Old and New - 2. Hastings Town

The sun is setting on the sand,

The seagulls are flying inland.

Everybody is heading home,

The night is coming like a dome.

Night is coming to Hastings town,

Everywhere is quiet with no sound.

 

Now it’s night,

The kids take flight.

The clubs are open now.

But don’t have too many,

Or you’ll not have a penny.

And one last warning,

About the morning…

(You’ll regret it!)

 

(Written 2001)

Copyright © 2017 Caz Pedroso; All Rights Reserved.
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Mikiesboy

Cazzie.. very sweet... just learned a lot about Hastings.. bring lots of cash if you want to go clubbing.
I think you'll have a great set of poems here when you're finished...

 

tim

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Caz Pedroso
On 10/06/2015 12:24 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Cazzie.. very sweet... just learned a lot about Hastings.. bring lots of cash if you want to go clubbing.

I think you'll have a great set of poems here when you're finished...

 

tim

:thankyou:

 

Yep, drink (whether alcoholic or non) is expensive in Hastings/England. The last time I went out with my sister it cost my £50 (approximately $76US)for the night - including my taxi home - and that was four years ago.

 

Nowadays, I just stay home with a DVD, a bowl of sweets/popcorn, and snuggle up to my hubby :heart:

 

Hope you enjoy the rest as they post :)

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Defiance19

Good one Caz. Totally got the night on the town vibe..
That also sounds like some parts of the City. You almost have to plan for a night out..

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Lisa

That certainly brought back memories! lol Yep, losing all your money on booze. Man, those were the days. hehe

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Caz Pedroso
On 10/06/2015 11:37 AM, Defiance19 said:

Good one Caz. Totally got the night on the town vibe..

That also sounds like some parts of the City. You almost have to plan for a night out..

Plan or take out bank loan :lol:

 

Glad you liked it and :thankyou: for the review

 

:hug:

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On 10/06/2015 02:06 PM, Lisa said:

That certainly brought back memories! lol Yep, losing all your money on booze. Man, those were the days. hehe

Seems like a life time ago now, that I was out on the town trying to corral my drunk friends into a taxi and make sure each one got back to their homes (I was always the sober one :( ). Saw some awesome singing groups though :)

 

Ah, to be young again and not have bills to pay instead of going out ;)

 

:thankyou: for the review :hug:

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Caz Pedroso
On 10/09/2015 11:13 PM, LitLover said:

haha loved this. I remember Friday and Saturday night like that. :lol:

Oh, yes, the money I wasted on nights out :yes:

 

Thank you for the comment :hug:

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Aviana

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I like how u started with the sunset...it feels like as the night sets in, another life begins:) A wonderful picture portrayed...

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Caz Pedroso
On 10/07/2017 at 9:48 AM, Aviana said:

I like how u started with the sunset...it feels like as the night sets in, another life begins:) A wonderful picture portrayed...

 

First, I am so sorry for the delay in replying :( I didn't see the notification and am only just doing my routine check of my various stories/poems.

 

I am so glad you liked the poem and you are right it is like a new/different life once the sunsets. The people you meet at night compared to the daytime are so different, its like people change their personalities as well as their clothes before they go out. I think it is the fact people can shake off their day and just relax for the night before the new day brings back all the responsibilities (and the hangover :P ) 

 

Thank you for taking the time to comment :hug: 

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