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Genres: General Fiction, Thriller/Suspense
Sub-genres: Suspense, Drama

Marc is a man with a dangerous problem. When his brother won't give up trying to help him will he accept that help?

Copyright © 2010 Cia; All Rights Reserved.

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  • Addictive/Pacing 2
  • Characters 2
  • Chills 1
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 1
  • Feel-Good 1
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 1
  • Unique 1
  • World Building 1
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  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 5,469 Words
    • 4,917 Views
    • 4 Comments
  • 2. Chapter 2
    • 5,774 Words
    • 3,733 Views
    • 2 Comments
  • 3. Chapter 3
    • 6,321 Words
    • 3,489 Views
    • 2 Comments
  • 4. Chapter 4
    • 5,849 Words
    • 3,830 Views
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Cia
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On 04/15/2011 01:39 PM, ande52 said:
Another Great story! A little on the shorter side but it was way better then some of the ones I've seen that are longer.

 

Will continue to read your stories biggrin.gif

I'm glad you liked it! I actually switched pov to Nat and continued their story in Paper Trail but the story isn't finished as I hit a huge block writing it :( It's on my list to really try to finish. Thank you so much for the review!
Timothy M.

A good thriller with some serious sobs stuff and a nice romance. But I think you are making the Feds out to be more stupid than is reasonable. I'm sure they would have considered the risk of Ry being tailed. And how could they miss the bad guys arriving at the cabin, especially as Nat had just told Mark how this could not happen. But I guess a dramatic end is better than realism.

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Cia
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On 11/06/2013 10:01 AM, Timothy M. said:
A good thriller with some serious sobs stuff and a nice romance. But I think you are making the Feds out to be more stupid than is reasonable. I'm sure they would have considered the risk of Ry being tailed. And how could they miss the bad guys arriving at the cabin, especially as Nat had just told Mark how this could not happen. But I guess a dramatic end is better than realism.
Not always :P I chalk this one up to 'early learning'. I'm not an expert on the Feds, and I'll admit, the bad guy climax scene is awfully convenient. I try to do a bit better at believability than this story nowadays. Thanks for the review Timothy!
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