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Love love love this story line (as well as loving almost every other story you write) I first got to read the first 3 chapters of this story years ago and I'm hoping I'll get to read the conclusion of their tale

A great story! I've always enjoyed a vampire themed one. I think the thing I enjoyed most about this story was it jumped right into the thick of it and there wasn't 5 needless chapters of set up first. Yes there were times it felt rushed but I think it added an interestingly urgent feel to the flow of the story that I really liked. I would be interested in a sequel, but I always want to read more about characters I like haha.

A sad story indeed, but a powerful one all the same. You sent the emotions he was feeling right through the computer and to me. All I want is to hug this fiction character right now. Great story.

I've always liked the idea of a "good" vampire. A very well written short story you have here Comic

What a marvelous story! <div><br></div><div>Even though I've never encountered any of the situations in this story personally, I found myself connecting to the raw emotions in a very primal way. Totally giving me shivers all over. I loved it!</div><div><br></div><div><img src="http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/public/style_emoticons/default/thumbsupsmileyanim.gif" alt="" class="bbc_emoticon"></div>

Awww A very sweet and great ending to an amazing story. You deff got some Rep points from me.

Great Great Great little short story!!! even despite its length you had me connected right to the characters! Again Great! ps.... write more stories!!!!

Why hello there. I've been hearing what a great story this is, and I must say everything I've heard is true. This story was so amazing I can't stop geeking out about it. There were so many times I felt myself connecting with the emotions of the story and the characters. You have this interesting quality about your writing that you're able to to continue on for a couple chapters about one time or event and then on the other hand halfway through a chapter skip a couple days and it be ok and not awkward. I also have to tell you I was on the brink of tear so many times. I almost lost it then Jase was asking Pete if he still loved him... shivers remembering it. Anyways Thanks for the great story!!!

I deff like the emo look, but don't really care much for the personality. If I could find me a nice emo that just likes to dress the part then I'd be down On the other side of the coin I do like me a clean cut man.... So I guess I'll have to settle on whomever comes with that whole love factor

I've been listening to Adele like a mad man recently... She's such a great musician

I've always had the basic feelings of attraction towards guys for as long as I could remember. Around 6th grade I knew enough to know it was different but I tried to not think about being "Gay" As if I didn't think about it and didn't place that label on me it wouldn't be true. When I entered high school I finally fully accepted it but stayed in the closet for a long time. My family is a religious one and being one of those people was wrong. Anyways now I've reached some semblance on balance in my life and it's starting to get good

This story was really great. Throughout that entire thing I felt like I knew what was coming and I was hoping it wouldn't happen, yet at the same time I knew that it would come to pass. Very well written. Very connectable emotions in this story.

Good Good new vampire story. I'm also glad that Zack didn't make a meal out of Jonny and sent him off to that sort of safe house thingy. Excited for chapter 2 so get writing!

Great Story! The ending had such a different concept for a topic that is generally the same no matter who writes about it. The whole thought that Maybe its not so bad was such an interesting direction to move this story into. ...now I really want to know what happens to them after

Ow! This story single handily made me re-think everything I know about life. It was amazing and confusing and wonderful and mind boggling. The complexities of this story are simply astounding. Somehow in one chapter you managed to roll something that would have taken other authors ten or more to do, and make it make sense(even to someone as dense as me!) You had me on the edge of my seat for the entire ride and I had NO idea what was coming in the final paragraph. I sat there probably looking like this ---> Anyways Such a great story and I'll probably be reading it over again to understand it better hehe (now you see how I ramble on and on...)