This once great story has now become depressing, sorry but nothing happy ever happens any more, Cam's attack, now this UNNESSARY killing has turned this in to some sad soap, I will have to hide my shaving kit, even soap's have so I have been told happy events in them.

No this story has gone from hope, growth and love of an enlarged family to a morbid story.

I only hope that the next ( and for me possible the last chapter I will read ) John and Alex will have been found alive in a life raft or whatever but alive never the less.

Lets get a little joy back in to this story.

I love this story, but then again, Working It Out is one of the best gay stories out there (IMHO), so it should come as no surprise that Don has come up with another winner. I'm really partial to stories that have young gay fathers and their kids in the storyline, and Beloved is hitting on all cylinders. Thanks, Don, and have a great New Year!

Don

So Happy that you are continuing the story. Very well written and also very cohesive. I await more in total exasperation.

Love your other works also

Jim M

I am hoping that there will be more Chapters in Beloved.