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    Emi GS
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2016 - Spring - Crossing the Line Entry

Mixed Emotions - 2. Haiku - Spring’s Breeze.

strong>Formal Haiku for Special Spring… :)

Dried leaves are falling,
as the spring's wind blew hazy.
Retards 'fore renew.

strong>Thank you all for Reading… :)
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2016 - Spring - Crossing the Line Entry
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Like your 'cricket poem,' the relationships are not as straightforward as they seem. The poem talks about dryness and scattering, more Autumn references. The good work continues ;)

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On 03/10/2016 07:54 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Interesting. ..I liked it. Last line made me think! Good job!

Thank You. Last line represents how autumn will make all leafs, flowers and seeds fall to the ground. And spring will bring back them to life. So nature retard everything before it renew everything. Thank You for the buddy... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 03/12/2016 10:15 AM, AC Benus said:

Like your 'cricket poem,' the relationships are not as straightforward as they seem. The poem talks about dryness and scattering, more Autumn references. The good work continues ;)

Yeah, its more look like autumn Ben. Thank You for the review man... :)

 

~Emi.

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