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    Emi GS
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2016 - Spring - Crossing the Line Entry

Mixed Emotions - 4. Last step for You

strong>An emotion from a Wrecking Heart, ultimately gonna find solace…

I have waited for so long,
so long to reach your soul.
It hurts as I was going along,
lack of love, that makes me un-control.


It takes just one go off the cliff,
following you is my only pep.
I can feel, on my neck, a warm sniff;
to bond with you, I took the last step.

strong>Thank you all for Reading… :)
Copyright © 2016 Emi GS; All Rights Reserved.
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2016 - Spring - Crossing the Line Entry
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AC Benus

Chilling and vivid. I particularly like the breath on the neck. I can feel it, and through it, the desperation of the poet.
Wonderful poem.

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Lisa

A very sad and powerful poem, Emi.

 

Waiting for so long to finally take the ultimate step off that proverbial cliff.

 

Where did the happiness from the last few poems go?

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Emi GS
On 03/10/2016 04:06 AM, Parker Owens said:

After the last three, this one suddenly seems so ominous and melancholy. What happened?

It always won't happen like happy endings my friend. Emotions will change according to situation. Mixed emotions also involve misery and pain...

 

~Emi.

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On 03/10/2016 07:56 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Wow, powerful, the last step...just wow Emi

Thanks man. It was an emotional poem which involves someone's pain about their life. Crossing the line, taking the last step looks as a solution. And it not a desire but necessary to end the pain...

 

~Emi.

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On 03/12/2016 10:23 AM, AC Benus said:

Chilling and vivid. I particularly like the breath on the neck. I can feel it, and through it, the desperation of the poet.

Wonderful poem.

Thank Ben. That was the crucial part which will soothe you and hurt at the same time. Great review Ben... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 03/13/2016 12:29 PM, Lisa said:

A very sad and powerful poem, Emi.

 

Waiting for so long to finally take the ultimate step off that proverbial cliff.

 

Where did the happiness from the last few poems go?

As I said earlier, emotions cross their line and happiness will result in pain and misery. Thanks for the review Lisa... :)

 

~Emi.

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