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    Emi GS
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  • 03/09/2016
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2016 - Spring - Crossing the Line Entry

Mixed Emotions - 1. Monoku - Summer Drums

strong>A Monoku is a single line Haiku. I hope you guys gonna like it… :)

Wondrous music that crickets chirp as the crazy sun blew fire wind.

strong>Thank you all for Reading… :)
Copyright © 2016 Emi GS; All Rights Reserved.
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Stories posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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2016 - Spring - Crossing the Line Entry
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AC Benus

Intriguing - are the crickets crying out because the sun is too hot; are we in danger. intriguing... *and good job!*

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On 03/10/2016 04:04 AM, Parker Owens said:

You packed the image of a summer afternoon into one line. Perfect.

I am glad this one line has displayed all the scene I wanted to tell. And I am glad you liked it... Thank You for the Review... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 03/10/2016 07:53 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Cool..I think these form works for you, Emi! Great job.

Thanks man. I started to like this form very much. May be I am going to build a pack of poems with this form soon. Thank You for the review... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 03/12/2016 10:13 AM, AC Benus said:

Intriguing - are the crickets crying out because the sun is too hot; are we in danger. intriguing... *and good job!*

No Ben. Crickets are enjoying a hot and sunny day, while I am sweating and trying to write that into this poem. Thanks for the compliments and the review... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 03/13/2016 12:17 PM, Lisa said:

Perfect, Emi! I love it! :)

I am glad you loved it Lisa. Thank You for your compliment and for your review too...

 

~Emi.

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On 03/13/2016 04:46 PM, Defiance19 said:

One line - and it delivered.

Nice job Emi..

That what the specialty of Monoku Aunt Def. And I am becoming fond of this form. Thank You for the compliment and the review... :)

 

~Emi.

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