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What a day to get attacked!

   (1 review)
Sub-genres: Adventure, Soft Sci-Fi

A military private must hold back the power of elite psionicists.

I woke up from a dream and had to write this. I have been frantic in getting it done today before I forgot too much of it.
Copyright © 2014 Fantasyboy69; All Rights Reserved.

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  • Satisfying Ending 0
  • Fresh / Original 0
  • Counldn't Put It Down 0
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  • Gave Me Chills 0
  • Funny 0
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    • 2,545 Words
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    • 4 Comments

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Brayon

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

From the beginning, this story took on a life of its own.

Right from the start, I loved the interaction.

One would think that the story was a dream like you said.

Zero doubt that this has hooks that could make it more than a short.

Enjoyed it a lot, especially the surprise ending.

Needs more to this story, as it would make an interesting long novel with the siblings.

 

"The cold never bothered me anyways."


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