Jump to content

What a day to get attacked!

   (1 review)
Genres: Action/Adventure, Science Fiction
Sub-genres: Adventure, Soft Sci-Fi

A military private must hold back the power of elite psionicists.

I woke up from a dream and had to write this. I have been frantic in getting it done today before I forgot too much of it.

Copyright © 2014 Fantasyboy69; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations

  • Action Packed 0
  • Addictive/Pacing 0
  • Characters 0
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 0
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 0
  • World Building 0
  • Like 5
Select Chapter
Table of Contents
  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 2,545 Words
    • 2,165 Views
    • 4 Comments

Recommended Comments

User Feedback

View Guidelines

Create an account or sign in to leave a review

You need to be a member in order to leave a review

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
Brayon

Brayon 40,663

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

From the beginning, this story took on a life of its own.

Right from the start, I loved the interaction.

One would think that the story was a dream like you said.

Zero doubt that this has hooks that could make it more than a short.

Enjoyed it a lot, especially the surprise ending.

Needs more to this story, as it would make an interesting long novel with the siblings.

 

"The cold never bothered me anyways."

Link to review

  • Newsletter

    You probably have a crazy and hectic schedule and find it hard to keep up with everything going on.  We get it, because we feel it too.  Signing up here is a great way to keep in touch and find something relaxing to read when you get a few moments to spare.

    Sign Up
×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

Our Privacy Policy can be found here: Privacy Policy. We have placed cookies on your device to help make this website better. You can adjust your cookie settings, otherwise we'll assume you're okay to continue..

  I accept