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Something Unexpected

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This is my 'very' first M/M fiction writing project. My first true and real writing project of length for fun. So I believe I break every rule in the books and my writing is very raw and unclean. The story could use a rewrite to be honest, but I post this here, because it is the first. I'm not going to shy away from it. I just hope from this story to my latest works, I have grown in your eyes - the reader.

Copyright © 2010 Krista; All Rights Reserved.

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markM

   0 of 1 member found this review helpful 0 / 1 member

This story started out good, but it left me very disappointed at the end.  I wish I hadn't read it.  Yea, it ended that bad.  You have been warned.

Response from the author:

Hi there,

Sorry you didn't enjoy the story. I wrote this back in 2003 while still in High School. You commented that you were enjoying the story up until the ending, which is fine. I do have to comment on the words you used specifically in your review, as I do have an issue with them. You 'warned' people away from reading this story and even though I myself, in the description explain thoroughly that the story itself is rough and in need of a re-write, I don't think people should warn people or attempt to dissuade others from reading. Regardless of what you think, it took me over a year to write this story and for someone to use those pointed words does me a disservice because of the time I did put into the story. It also isn't all that constructive to anyone, not to me, nor you or anyone who reads this particular review.

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