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Something Unexpected

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Genres: General Fiction
Sub-genres: Drama

This is my 'very' first M/M fiction writing project. My first true and real writing project of length for fun. So I believe I break every rule in the books and my writing is very raw and unclean. The story could use a rewrite to be honest, but I post this here, because it is the first. I'm not going to shy away from it. I just hope from this story to my latest works, I have grown in your eyes - the reader.

Copyright © 2010 Krista; All Rights Reserved.

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  • 1. Chapter 1
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  • 2. Chapter 2
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  • 3. Chapter 3
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  • 8. Chapter 8
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  • 11. Chapter 11
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  • 17. Chapter 17
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  • 18. Chapter 18
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  • 20. Chapter 20
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  • 21. Chapter 21
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  • 22. Chapter 22
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  • 23. Chapter 23
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  • 24. Chapter 24
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  • 25. Chapter 25
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  • 26. Chapter 26
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  • 27. Chapter 27
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  • 28. Chapter 28
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  • 29. Chapter 29
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  • 30. Chapter 30
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   0 of 1 member found this review helpful 0 / 1 member

This story started out good, but it left me very disappointed at the end.  I wish I hadn't read it.  Yea, it ended that bad.  You have been warned.

Response from the author:

Hi there,

Sorry you didn't enjoy the story. I wrote this back in 2003 while still in High School. You commented that you were enjoying the story up until the ending, which is fine. I do have to comment on the words you used specifically in your review, as I do have an issue with them. You 'warned' people away from reading this story and even though I myself, in the description explain thoroughly that the story itself is rough and in need of a re-write, I don't think people should warn people or attempt to dissuade others from reading. Regardless of what you think, it took me over a year to write this story and for someone to use those pointed words does me a disservice because of the time I did put into the story. It also isn't all that constructive to anyone, not to me, nor you or anyone who reads this particular review.

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